electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 3 months ago

    Hello people of this earth and beyond. This is part 2 of the Prologue, go to my activity for part 1. I hope you enjoy, constructive criticism is welcome.
    PROLOGUE (PART II):
    Oral Retelling:

    Ella:
    We are back! I lost Red, Zel and Snow and honestly I am a bit glad as their personalities were a bit OTT.
    Goldie:
    But we are here! I’m Goldie! No. 1 r…[Read more]

        electra replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        LYN! I haven’t seen u (well talked to you) in ages!!!!! How is LIFE? And thankyou! did you read part 1? Also, my first year birthday on SGE is coming up in 9 DAYS!!!!!

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 3 months ago

    Hello People of This Earth and Beyond! I haven’t posted anything on this for ages and I really want to return, though most people won’t recognise me. I have decided to start a new story and it is based on the most famous fairy tale characters (Cinderella, Rapunzel, Snow White, Goldie Locks, Little Red Riding Hood, The Little Match Girl and mor…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 3 years, 3 months ago

        I really like this it is very funny please tag me

        toffee replied 3 years, 3 months ago

        I remember you! I like the stories, they’re hilarious.

          electra replied 3 years, 3 months ago

          Thank you! I remember you toffee! I will tag you Sapphy (Gr8 name BTW)

        sapphy replied 3 years, 3 months ago

        Thanks it’s the shortened version of my middle name

    electra posted an update 3 years, 10 months ago

    https://www.wattpad.com/394615145-vampires-vs-werewolves-nothing-is-what-it-seems/page/11

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    WonderLand RP Collab
    Find chapter 1- @cuteypie1mint
    CHAPTER TWO
    POV: Rosemary Bliss
    I’m a Spade. The lowest house. I am not that gullible, I was the smartest girl in my school. So they lied, and it doesn’t take a genius to work out why. I check the packing list one last time and stuff it into the overfull suitcase I am standing next to. *****,…[Read more]

        emmal replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Great job! Thank you for tagging me. Please keep doing so 🙂

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        This is sooo cool! So, Camp Neverland is like, after Camp Wonderland – a sort of college? That’s awesome! Rose is still in CW, though, isn’t she?

          electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Yeah, I decided not to let the idea go to waist.

        neverafter12 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        This is amazing!! It’s really intriguing! I’m excited for the nest chapters 🙂

        espilce replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Il est tres bon, et oui je travaille le chapter trois.

          kiko55 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Lovely chapter! It turned out really well!! 😉

        electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Thanks everyone. Also Espilce, I got it right 🙂 (The wonders of google translate)

        electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        It is for a week taster course, or something…

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    WonderLand RP Collab
    @evilerruler845
    @kiko55
    @electra
    @espilce
    Name: Rosemary Bliss
    Nicknames: Rose. If anyone calls her Rosemary or Mary (apart from close friends and family) they are considered true enemies. Why? Well Rose does not want to be assosiated with herbs in any way and would rather be considered a flower with thorns.
    Family: The…[Read more]

        electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Ooops, @Cuteypie1mint , not me, I stole her tag list…

        emmal replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I said this on @cuteypie1mint‘s post but I didn’t think you saw it; could you please tag me? 🙂

        electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Sure @emmal

          emmal replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Thank you!!

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Ahaha this is great!

        espilce replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Nice bio

        shrad replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I love this. It’s so free and hilarious… and I can barely put it into words. Please tag me. ; )

        electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Thanks

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    Hey guys. Here is a long overdue chapter from mine and @inlovewithbooks story The Tale of Love and War Chapter 8- @inlovewithbooks Other chapters are all in one clump somewhere in my activity- @electra
    CHAPTER NINE: THE TRIAL -Part 1

    POV: Narrator

    “Students, students, welcome to the twenty-third Trial of Wits, you all no the rules, the lowest…[Read more]

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Good chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        woohoo! finally brill, I was getting a little impatient….

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Sorry this took so long….
    Ashley’s Bio
    @Toffee
    @Inlovewithbooks
    @Storiantale123
    Age: 16(in human years)
    Clan: Dragon
    Appearance (human): Caramel skin fading lighter from her head to a strong tan at her feet. Her emerald green eyes which, if you look at for too long you will realise she has a hipnotic gaze and a dark red pupil. Her iris’s are…[Read more]

        electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Oops I mean
        @storiantale23
        Soz

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Rlly good

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Great bio!!!!!!!!

        toffee replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Good job! Good luck on your other character.

        cuteypie1mint replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I really like this bio! She seems like a really interesting character. You could have a tad more detail in the ‘Personality’ department, but great job nevertheless.

        annmellie replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hi, I hope I’m not annoying but please write the chapter so the story can continue

          toffee replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          We’re still waiting to on the other bios

          electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Sorry on holiday at moment, could someone else do it???

        toffee replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        It’s okay. We can wait

          electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Oh that was meant for @annmellie

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hmm……… @electra I don’t know if I can do it. I have a lot of other things to do……………. So maybe could you @annmellie do it?!? It’s fine if you can’t……… I could try to.

          toffee replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Look can we keep this within the collabaration? You guys don’t know about this whole thing so…

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Oh yeah, sorry….. We are talking about @annmellie ‘s story, that @electra and I are part of.

          toffee replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Oh.. I didn’t know. Could you specify next time because this bio is in the collab

        annmellie replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hi @electra, sure, I can do it. 🙂

          electra replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Thanks

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        @toffee Eh…… Sorry! I think it is our fault, since we did not specify it! So don’t worry!

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hey Peeps
    This is my second Random, but helpful tips. I do Bios, story plots and give a helping hand…
    So Dear Reader, today I am focusing on Cliches.
    Here are the two most common SGE related stories.
    1. Girl who thinks she is Good ends up in Evil. THIS IS THE PLOT OF THE REAL STORY AND IS NOT INTERESTING TO READ ABOUT!!!!
    2. Friends split up/…[Read more]

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Cool tips!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Thanks

        dusty2749 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Really helpful! Thanks

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        The first cliché got me wondering if my story here is cliché.
        It’s during the Schoolmaster Era and is basically about these triplets (well they don’t know they’re triplets and think they’re adopted; they have no clue they have siblings) who don’t know if they are Good or Evil. One of the girls and the boy is sent to Good, while the other girl is s…[Read more]

          electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          That sounds fine, also would you like to be tagged???

          fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Okay. Also, no thanks, sorry.

        emmal replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Thank you thank you thank you!!!! It’s so nice to FINALLY let people know to STOP writing all of these cliches! 😉

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Good tips! Also yeah… My story is also cliché! I am quitting it tho!

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 12 months ago

    Hey guys, catch up @electra

    CHAPTER ELEVEN:
    POV: Autumn
    The next few weeks went by like a blur as a new Dean was chosen for Good and we attended many funarals. One day me and Piper were called in by the new Dean for a meeting. Her Fairy tale was known as ‘Snow White,’ though she never revealed if she was Snow as she decided to go by the name of…[Read more]

        annmellie replied 3 years, 12 months ago

        Lovely! Anyways, @electra, could you please write the chapter for Crystal’s story?

          electra replied 3 years, 12 months ago

          Sure

          electra replied 3 years, 12 months ago

          Can you remind me of what I happening???

        annmellie replied 3 years, 12 months ago

        Thank you. I think you should read the last two chapters ( Chapter 6 by me and chapter 7 by @thedemigod1112)

        emmal replied 3 years, 12 months ago

        It was a little shorter than usual, but great chapter still!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Very good, I’m sorry I’m not the best at constructive critisism! I’ll give it a try…
        Start a new line for every new speaker. U got lucky this time, as u didn’t have a number of people talking but usually it’s quite important.
        I can’t think of anything else this is an amazing piece of writing, ur teacher would be proud! (Wink wink! 😉 😉 )

        emmal replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I agree COMPLETELY with @inlovewithbooks. Every new speaker gets a separate line, but otherwise this was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

    electra posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 12 months ago

    I will be doing a thing were I give Bios or ideas for stories (SGE and NOT SGE) but first I have a bio and idea for her story.
    CHLOE OF THE CHARMING KINGDOM
    Age: 15
    School: Good
    Fairytale lineage: Rapunzel and her prince. She has a girly sister called Marina, who she despises.
    Appearance: Chloe has pale blond hair, which is dip-dyed pale blue.…[Read more]

        thedemigod1112 replied 3 years, 12 months ago

        That is great and a cool bio!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

        emmal replied 3 years, 12 months ago

        Great job!! Excellent bio.

        schuyleringrids replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Can I be tagged too, please??????

          electra replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Sure

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