- Load More
wow i forgot i had this account
Chapter 10
OK today we r going to be doing history of villainy said hort, ooh my favourite class said ivy, now i am a student teacher and advice for all students make friends with the weirdos. There’s usually more of them than the popular kids, witch means you’ll actually be the popular one said hort, now to r history class please rite an essay…[Read more]
Awesome!
Cool! 🙂 🙂 🙂
love it! but it’s still kinda confusing to read without the quotation marks
name:
chapter :9
hi my name is ivy and you must have met my brother said ivy, hi i am Agatha and yes i have met your brother said Agatha, girls i have a name you no said ivy’s brother, yes Luke said ivy with an eye roll. Well we should go to the old oak to eat breakfast said ivy, OK said Agatha and Luke, hi andil and Hester said ivy, hi said…[Read more]
name:
chapter :9
hi my name is ivy and you must have met my brother said ivy, hi i am Agatha and yes i have met your brother said Agatha, girls i have a name you no said ivy’s brother, yes Luke said ivy with an eye roll. Well we should go to the old oak to eat breakfast said ivy, OK said Agatha and Luke, hi andil and Hester said ivy, hi said…[Read more]
I loved it!
I would suggest using quotation marks around dialogue and starting a new paragraph when a different character starts speaking so it’s easy to understand who is speaking.
Love it! but I agree with @impossiblegirl It was a bit hard to read
I agree, I love it! 🙂 🙂 🙂
sorry i am still new at this
That’s fine. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Chapter 8:
him this is neat said ivy, as she looked at haveway bridge,
good with good, evil with evil, back to your tower before there’s upheaval said her reflection.
No i need to see my brother now let me bye said ivy, her reflection cleared it’s throat
good with good, evil with evil now GO!! cried her reflection. But i have to save some pup…[Read more]
Cool!
I love it! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Chapter 8:
him this is neat said ivy, as she looked at haveway bridge,
good with good, evil with evil, back to your tower before there’s upheaval said her reflection.
No i need to see my brother now let me bye said ivy, her reflection cleared it’s throat
good with good, evil with evil now GO!! cried her reflection. But i have to save some…[Read more]
hi @winx7
hi @donutqueen11 hi @impossiblegirl 🙂
Hi! 🙂 🙂 🙂
thanks for liking my story
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
chapter 8 comeing soon
I look forward to it! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Chapter 7:
welcome to the school for good i am dean Clarissa dovey my dearest evers welcome to your new home evil is under a new regime now and that appears to play by a different set of rules. Be respectful, be welcoming. . .but be wary. They r still the enemy, probing our weakness like snakes in the sand
STEP UP LUKE OF GINNYMILL hear is your…[Read more]
Cool! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Awesome!
thanks for the comment sorry if my next chapter is not posted for a while i am swamped in homework