ellablla posted an update 2 months, 1 week ago

    wow i forgot i had this account

    ellablla posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 7 months ago

    Chapter 10

    OK today we r going to be doing history of villainy said hort, ooh my favourite class said ivy, now i am a student teacher and advice for all students make friends with the weirdos. There’s usually more of them than the popular kids, witch means you’ll actually be the popular one said hort, now to r history class please rite an essay…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        Awesome!

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        Cool! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        agatha-tedros replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        love it! but it’s still kinda confusing to read without the quotation marks

    ellablla posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago

    name:
    chapter :9
    hi my name is ivy and you must have met my brother said ivy, hi i am Agatha and yes i have met your brother said Agatha, girls i have a name you no said ivy’s brother, yes Luke said ivy with an eye roll. Well we should go to the old oak to eat breakfast said ivy, OK said Agatha and Luke, hi andil and Hester said ivy, hi said…[Read more]

    ellablla posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 7 months ago

    name:
    chapter :9
    hi my name is ivy and you must have met my brother said ivy, hi i am Agatha and yes i have met your brother said Agatha, girls i have a name you no said ivy’s brother, yes Luke said ivy with an eye roll. Well we should go to the old oak to eat breakfast said ivy, OK said Agatha and Luke, hi andil and Hester said ivy, hi said…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        I loved it!
        I would suggest using quotation marks around dialogue and starting a new paragraph when a different character starts speaking so it’s easy to understand who is speaking.

          agatha-tedros replied 2 years, 7 months ago

          Love it! but I agree with @impossiblegirl It was a bit hard to read

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        I agree, I love it! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        ellablla replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        sorry i am still new at this

          donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 7 months ago

          That’s fine. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ellablla posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 9 months ago

    Chapter 8:
    him this is neat said ivy, as she looked at haveway bridge,
    good with good, evil with evil, back to your tower before there’s upheaval said her reflection.
    No i need to see my brother now let me bye said ivy, her reflection cleared it’s throat
    good with good, evil with evil now GO!! cried her reflection. But i have to save some pup…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        Cool!

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        I love it! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ellablla posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago

    Chapter 8:

    him this is neat said ivy, as she looked at haveway bridge,
    good with good, evil with evil, back to your tower before there’s upheaval said her reflection.
    No i need to see my brother now let me bye said ivy, her reflection cleared it’s throat
    good with good, evil with evil now GO!! cried her reflection. But i have to save some…[Read more]

    ellablla posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago

    hi @winx7

    ellablla posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Hi! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        ellablla replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        thanks for liking my story

          ellablla replied 2 years, 9 months ago

          πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ellablla posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago

    chapter 8 comeing soon

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        I look forward to it! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    ellablla posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 7:

    welcome to the school for good i am dean Clarissa dovey my dearest evers welcome to your new home evil is under a new regime now and that appears to play by a different set of rules. Be respectful, be welcoming. . .but be wary. They r still the enemy, probing our weakness like snakes in the sand
    STEP UP LUKE OF GINNYMILL hear is your…[Read more]

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Cool! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome!

        ellablla replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        thanks for the comment sorry if my next chapter is not posted for a while i am swamped in homework

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