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@peppy you are in this part and will be in a lot more 🙂
Chapter 3: Pink and Perfect
When I walked in I saw three girls decorating the already pink and perfect dorm room that I was staying in. When they saw me they all turned around and rushed to meet me like I was their birthday gift. One girl said “Hi I’m Julie of Avalon! Pleased to meet you!” Another girl said “My names Crystalline but you can call me Crystal. What’s your name?” I was about to tell her when yet another girl greeted me by saying “My names Jane! Daughter of The Dragon!!! And the musketeer!”All three girls overwhelmed me with questions. I couldn’t here myself think! Finally there was a gap in their conversation. I took the opportunity to say “My name is Ella Enchanted my father is a knight for Camelot and my mother is an elf!” I started panting from talking so fast. There was an odd silence. I realized my hood had fallen off revealing my pointy ears. Usually I would quickly pull my hood up but this time I didn’t. It felt like I was giving them a statement. I kinda was. What we’re they staring at anyways, Jane had tiny wings and scales! I realized Crystal wasn’t looking at my ears at all but was staring at my clothes! In fact everyone in the room was looking at my drab outfit! “Ladies we’ve got some work to do.” said Crystal. Just like that I was plopped down on a stool and Julie started doing my hair! Crystal was rummaging through someone’s makeup bag and Jane was… Emptying my bag! “Hey!” I yelled. “What are you guys doing?!” “You have to look nice for the boys! Don’t you want a prince to throw you his rose?” Julie told me “No.” I replied. All three girls gasped. To brake up the tension I added “Only if it will give me good grades.”
“It will! You see, if you don’t have a price you’ll get bad grades and you might fail.” I had heard that if you fail bad things happen so I let them perfect my face and clothes by giving a small “Ok.” And I let them do their magic. I could feel Julie braiding my hair and putting it in an updo while Crystal put lipgloss on my lips and some clear mascara on my eyelashes. Jane had picked out a dull dress from my bag asked me if she could spaz it up a little bit. I told her she could do whatever she wants. I gasped. I had never looked so beautiful in my life! All my hair was at the top of my head in a braid, my lips were a light pink colour and looked fuller than ever, Jane had done a fantastic job on the dress, it was now a lot shorter with poofy sleeves that went halfway down my arms the neckline was embroidered with with flowers, Jane handed me my done up sandals and I put them on. “You look beautiful.” Said Crystal. “Thank you I replied.” I replied “Now for you.”
We had only be together for 2 hours and I already felt so close to my new roommates. I wonder what other surprises there are at the school for good.
I hope you enjoyed it! Read more @ellaenchanted 🙂
Thank you for using Julie! 🙂
It’s simply wonderful and I can’t wait for your next post 🙂
I like it! Would you maybe consider using Cheshire? 🙂 Here’s his bio:
Name: ***** Cat (everyone just calls him Cheshire or Chess)
Parents: The Cheshire Cat and Peter Pan
School: Good for Boys
Age: He doesn’t remember. The Cheshire Cat always sent him to the unbirthday parties so it all kind of got mingled together. He’s pretty sure he’s 13, but it might be 15. Or was it 14? Maybe…
Talent: Can ripple away, teleport, disassemble himself and become invisible like the Cat in the stories. He can fly and fence like Peter Pan and he has his own special power: the ability to weave magic threads into spells that do impossible things.
Appearance: curly blonde hair, sparkling green eyes, tanned skin, combination between masculine handsome and feminine beautiful: sort of mysterious, but cute, scrawny and casual at the same time. Lanky but not weak. Hates the Everboy uniform, instead “customized” his to be a green and orange stripy linen jacket with cute square buttons and scruffy green jeans. He has jabberwocky-skin (the dragon-ish creature from Lewis Carrol, author of Alice in Wonderland) boots and sometimes wears a fedora (a sort of hat, if you didn’t already know) with a long band jammed over his head (it once belonged to the Mad Hatter).
Personality: Has an incredible (sometimes cocky, sometimes corny, sometimes satirical, sometimes important), unfaltering sense of humour that can lighten up any situation. He often uses jokes as something to protect him in awkward, shocking or dangerous conversations and is very easygoing, not caring much what other people think. It takes a lot to provoke him and it is not often he shows real anger or fear. He prefers to fight with words before swords, but is fiercely loyal to his friends and is an excellent fencer (taking after his father Pan). He loves parties, young children and is very kind-hearted and sensitive when you look closer. Happy, optimistic and loves to joke and prank around. He is, however, quite rebellious against Good and tries to tell people how arrogant and impure the school has become. He tries to convince people that being Good is not being beautiful or skilful or being a prince, but being truly Good is Goodness of heart and soul.
Friends: Laurence (@peppy), Dawn (@hesterandanadil99chocolatedot), Orion, his father’s cocky talking sword, Trace and Esmerelda (his half-siblings) and Professor Espada.
Weapon: Orion, a thin fencing sword with a hilt carved with dancing fairies and a handle bound in green leather. He is sometimes even cockier than his master, and hovers in the air. Cheshire can fence in the air, and Orion will follow his movements, allowing Cheshire a much wider distance and things he could never do with a normal blade. However, he must treat Orion as he would treat his friend: if the sword is not happy, he WILL sulk.
Pet: has a scarlet pixie he released back into the Blue Forest. Cheshire can call him back three times, and he will be there to help.