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hi everyone 🙂 first chapter to my new story!!! enjoy 🙂
Sharp claws dig into my shoulders, I look up, scared of what is ripping me off the ground, I see a horrifying creature, it has no flesh no guts it is just bone. A bird made entirely of bone. It pulls me off the ground, I scream, afraid of this **** creature, I look down at my feet to hear my mother’s piercing scream, my father’s pale face and my brother, Tristan. Tristan… his face, I cannot read, but his eyes, his eyes are a dark void, a screaming, dark void. He starts running for me, he leaps up reaching for my feet, suddenly the bird digs into my skin, causing to scream in pain and agony as blood starts trickling down my stomach. I hope Tristan can save me from this horrid creature but he does not. It is too late, the bird has already dragged me far too high for his reach. I am doomed, doomed. I start to say my goodbyes to my family, my kingdom and everything I know but I am cut off. The bird lets go of me and I start to think I’m saved… until I look down at my feet to see ***** muddy water that I am going to drown in. Now, I am REALLY doomed. I take a deep breath before I splash into the filth, My last breath. I think about making an effort to swim but thought passes by as fast as it came. This is the end. My life will end at the age of sixteen. Before I get the chance to close my eyes and accept my destiny something tugs me up to the surface, someone, actually. I gasp for air, then turn to see who has saved me and am surprised to see a girl, I barely have time to take in this girls features before she snarls at me. “Fool.” She says menacingly and then she swims through the muck towards shore. Land. I had been too busy accepting my death to realize that land was right next to me. I swim after her, the water is thick and hard to swim through but I am strong and soon at the shore running after the strange girl that saved me. “Wait!” I yell after her. She stops and waits for me to catch up to her. “Where am I?” I look around and stop short at the sight of a huge black castle. “This place?” the girl stops and gives me a frightening glance “Is the School for Evil.” I can feel my jaw drop, I am astonished, my parents told me, promised me was going to the school for good. The girl strolls off leaving me paralyzed in astonishment. Anyone can betray anyone.
END CHAPTER 1
who is this mysterious girl? post your bios don below!
P.S. I am going on vacation so I won’t get back to you for a week.
AWWWW! Oh well, have fun on your vacation! That was an AMAZING chapter! 😉