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Where were you born
Really?! Don’t you ‘Milky wayers’ have only 2 legs or something? Or is that just what we say on my planet……
What does XD stand for
What should I call chapter 3?
Hi guys I’ve just got back from school I hope you liked c1 the cutroat blade and c2 evils story, please give feedback and tell me if you want to be tagged ( I hope you guys do) 🙂
Hi guys time for chapter two,
I hope you liked c1 cut throat blade
Why? Why does it have to be her? Rhian thought , I don’t want to be the bad guy just the King
” Aaaaaaarrrrrrraaaaaahhh” he roars pounding on the door, he was just as much a prisoner as his soon to be wife…
With his mother pretending to be him…[Read more]
Sorry but your story doesn’t make any sense.
And that you keep switching tense throughout your story. You go from present tense (he roars) and then past tense (as he slowly walked). You need to watch out for that and you need to check over your writing. Every single time. What direction are you heading in this story? What is going on? You need to…[Read more]
Thanks, I was half asleep when I wrote that 🙂
That was not me