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sorry i didn’t write for so long, feel free to scream at me in the comments.
sorry if i forgot to tag you or if you want to be tagged please tell me.
Chapter 13 (i think)
As I see Charles and Evan appear they both look extremely scared. as they realize that they are in…[Read more]
Yay! You’re back! FINALLY! Don’t ever leave me again! Please keep writing! I can’t wait to see what happens next! Which is why no need to keep writing! Anyway, I’m glad you’re back!
I woke up in the hospital wing with Evan coming in and quietly closing the door. I pretend to be asleep.
“how is he doing?”
“just fine, if he stays in the hospital for a few more days.”
“thank you. May I see him?”
“He’s right over there.”
I pretend to wake up as she…[Read more]
I see a never casting a spell, it was Lettie! I float over, and kick her in the face. As I fly away, I see Charles following me, and get a feeling that I wasn’t the only one who saw that vision.
“Evan, stop, PLEASE!!”
“NO, leave me alone!”
“please we need to talk.”
Bio for Charles and Lettie!!!!!
Name:Charles of Camelot
Appearance:skin lightly tanned, hair blonde, eyes shock blue, heart-melting smile
Personality:charming, annoying, snappish
Lineage: King Tedros, Queen Agatha
Fingerglow/weapon: to inherit excalibur, fingerglow is a bronze colour.
Backstory: born and raised in a castle,…[Read more]
In clearing, i see one of my classmates, Cleo, enter the forest. She is going to be going in with a girl named Erin, who i am sure will kill her at a moments notice, and in a poof they disappear. I am going in last with a girl named Lettie, who is the daughter of Dean Sophie, and is beautiful just like…[Read more]
Please keep tagging me! You didn’t tag me in this one! Really good chapter though! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 🙂
i didn’t believe it. i was the first in ranking points. and the trial by tale was in a week. and gods up above was i scared. i was sitting down in class one day when dovey pulled me out and said, “Evan, you have made an enemy of one of the most powerful people you could.”
“Charles of…[Read more]
oooo! This is interesting. I have been reading your story so far and I think it’s really good. Can you tag me?
One day, at lunch, I was reading a textbook, when a prince came over, he was tall and lithe, some would say handsome, others, like me, would just call him a rich boy. when he walked over he said, “well, well, well who do we have here.” He said it super slow and was being…[Read more]
I also want to make an adjustment to my character. she is gender fluid, which means that she switches gender everyday or so, and is lesbian/gay.
I love your character! Can you please tag me in your next chapter?
I go into the groom room and see a magical swirl of colors. waterfalls and makeup stations, spas and saunas, it was paradise to some girls, but to me it was just a privilege. i brushed my hair, and took a bath. then i got dressed in my uniform and saw that i looked nicer than I had in a really long time. i got my books in a bag, and…[Read more]
can u please tag me
this is one of the best stories I’ve read
“Ya. I arrived with the king and Queen of Camelot. that doesn’t mean that i’m special.”
“ooh, this one’s got a temper,” Said the Asian girl. “I’m Cleo.”
the short one said, “I’m Sheri.”
” I’m Bella.”, said the beautiful one.
“I’m Evan.” I said. they were going to make fun of me I was sure of it.
“Is that short for something, Evangelina,…[Read more]
When I arrived at the school for good everyone started asking me questions. “Are you the princess of Camelot?”
“Are you famous?”
“who are you?”
I am not very happy to admit it, but I got kind of flustered. I ran to the closest exit, but before I could get there a woman stopped me. “Where are you going?”
it’s not the best, but I post every day except Tuesday, and i really like reading other peoples stories!
Good job! Just keep in mind what I said on your previous post, but it has improved! Also, try indenting a little more often; it just keeps things organized. Perhaps try to write a little longer next time, too. You have improved!! :D!! I love your descriptions of the girls and Dean Dovey!