Hey guys, I haven’t been on this forum in several months. I kind of lost motivation to keep writing, so my story is incomplete. Can anyone explain what happened to Kas and Leo? Just wondering since I used to see them all the time on this site, but I haven’t seen either of them for the past few months. Have a nice rest of you day! 🙂
Hey guys I used to RP here, and I haven’t posted anything in several months. I kind of lost the motivation to write. Do you think I should continue? If you want to read my story, read it here: @emanresu1234
Hello everyone! It has been SO SO long since I have posted! Well, I finally stopped procrastinating and finished chapter 5! So, let’s get started with the shout outs. Shout out to @iceprinces, @iceflower322, and @sparrow. They are all amazing. I am also going to tag my cousin, @snowy3000. Let’s get on with the story.
Even after opening…[Read more]
(I used to have a character named Melody/Mel as well) 😉
well well well….. Looks like someone FINALLY decided to POST!!!! But anyways loved the story and next time don’t make me wait to LONG!!! Love you cous! 🙂
Hello Everyone! It has been over one month since I have posted! Remember last time I posted I said that I felt like a terrible human being? This time I don’t even feel human. I am tremendously sorry for the wait, my life has felt like a tornado for weeks. So, as usual… thank you to @iceprinces, @iceflower322, and @sparrow. They are fabulous for…[Read more]
Great job, thanks for letting me know you updated! I would have hated to miss this.
Hello everyone! I feel like a terrible human being because I have not posted in nearly 3 weeks! Anyway, this is another attempt at writing. If you haven’t read my previous two chapters, read them here: @emanresu1234. @iceprinces and @iceflower322, you guys are fabulous. @sparrow, I added Cass to the story. He’s only in it for a short amount of…[Read more]
Ok, I just re-read this and noticed several mistakes. Sorry guys, I was trying to type this chapter fast. So, first off, ‘fro’ is supposed to be ‘for’. ‘Actually, I have two?’ is supposed to be ‘Actually, I have two.’ Those are just a few mistakes I noticed, and I had to correct those two because they were bugging me the most. 🙂 Once again, sorry…[Read more]
This is awesome! I love how developed your characters are and the way you described Sophie.
Just one thing in terms of grammar, instead of:
“This is where Paublo and I come to “escape everyone else.”
The quotations should look like:
“This is where Paublo and I come to ‘escape everyone else'”
But other than that it’s really good!
@fairytaleendings, I did notice that, but it was after I posted that correction. @rikki237, I did not notice that! I was trying to type this chapter really fast, and I forgot to do that. But thanks to both of you for pointing those out to me!!!
@iceprinces, @sparrow, and @isabellucy0531 Thanks for reading it!!!
@fairytaleendings, it might be a while. 🙁 We currently have family visiting, and it takes me FOREVER to type these chapters. I have already written a rough draft of chapter 4. Once that has been revised I will write chapter 5. However, I don’t know when I will get the chance to post that. Stay tuned, I’ll try to post ASAP. 🙂
Hello everyone! I decided to write a second chapter for my story… tale…thing…whatever. Read chapter 1 here: @emanresu1234. WARNING: minor spoiler for The last Ever After (S.G.E. book 3). Once again, a big thanks to @iceprinces and @iceflower322. Their characters are amazing. Also, I NEED YOUR CRITIQUES!!! Please don’t hesitate to point out…[Read more]
I can’t think of any critisicm, it was pretty perfect! The grammar was flawless, there was an interesting plot and I was excited to read on. 😀
Brilliant!!!! Maybe you could add my characters? You can find them at @sparrow in my activity. 😀
@sparrow Do you have a specific character that you want me to add? I just looked at your bios, and I couldn’t choose because they are all amazing. 🙂
I just saw this! (Haven’t been on much, but I’ll be on more now 😀 ) It’s awesome. Can’t wait to see what happens next 🙂
So, I was inspired to create some new bios (Grins mischievously), and these two are boy bios… Here we go:
Parents- Huntsman (from Snow White), and unknown
Appearance- curly black hair, hazel eyes, fabulous smile 🙂
Personality- jokes around (a lot), but also very sweet and caring. Quick thinker, and fiercely…[Read more]
My character, Claudia (Claude), is the daughter of the Huntsman! Do you want our characters to be half-siblings in my story (He won’t be mentioned very much).
My name is Cierra and I am the daughter of Cinderella!
I cannot wait to meet Princess Uma, she and my mother were quite good friends!
In my story, I want Claudia and Isaiah to be Nevers, but he can still have all the qualities you gave him. Their purpose in the story is to show my character, Emerson, that the School for Evil is not just full of **** dishonest people, but actually has some pretty cool students.
Okay guys, this is my very first story… thing… I uh don’t know what to call it… Anyway, this is just a story that I attempted to make with my character. HUGE shout out to @iceflower322 and @iceprinces for letting me use their characters! This chapter is kind of an experiment, I need your critiques and advice! So here we go:
CHAPTER 1-…[Read more]
Really good job. There were only a few grammatical errors.
Anyway really good job!
OMG THIS IS AMAZING!!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter (include a boy)
Omg, Dashy! I love that!
Anyway, great beginning of your story. I can see you know your basic grammar! I am really excited to see your next chapter.
Ok, so I’m new to the whole roleplaying thing. I decided to make myself a bio. Here goes:
Parents- Belle and The Beast
Talent- very smart, can sing, dance, and act. She is also good at fencing and using a dagger.
Appearance- Fair skin, grey eyes, long, wavy, dark brown hair. Wears school uniform (obviously),…[Read more]
I really like it especially the part about her not liking pink and having a dagger princesses don’t have to be helpless