emanresu1234 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Hello everyone! I decided to write a second chapter for my story… tale…thing…whatever. Read chapter 1 here: @emanresu1234. WARNING: minor spoiler for The last Ever After (S.G.E. book 3). Once again, a big thanks to @iceprinces and @iceflower322. Their characters are amazing. Also, I NEED YOUR CRITIQUES!!! Please don’t hesitate to point out…[Read more]

        peppy replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I can’t think of any critisicm, it was pretty perfect! The grammar was flawless, there was an interesting plot and I was excited to read on. 😀

          emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Well thanks for reading it! 🙂

        iceprinces replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing!!! 🙂

        emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        @iceprinces Thanks! 🙂

        sparrow replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Brilliant!!!! Maybe you could add my characters? You can find them at @sparrow in my activity. 😀

          emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          @sparrow Do you have a specific character that you want me to add? I just looked at your bios, and I couldn’t choose because they are all amazing. 🙂

          sparrow replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          @emanresu1234 Hmmm. Main ones are Cass and Mel. 🙂

        emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        @sparrow Thanks! I’ll try to weave them into my story. 😀

        iceflower322 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I just saw this! (Haven’t been on much, but I’ll be on more now 😀 ) It’s awesome. Can’t wait to see what happens next 🙂

        fairytaleendings replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        That was great! I love how you included Sophie!

        snowy3000 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Oooooh good job! And stop telling me its cheesy (even if its a little, but still brilliant!) @emanresu1234