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Annyeong guys!! (I dunno if I spelled that right, hehe) So yup, it’s alreadyH 10:33 here in the Phillipines, and I successfully finished my seventh chapter. What time is it for you guys, and what day is it for you? Here in the Phillipines it is already Tuesday. So I’m gonna stop ramblin’ and start with the tags.
Tag list(and special…[Read more]
Nightmare that Haunts at Night 😀
Great job! That was amazing and I loved it! Also, thanks for the tag. Keep up the amazing work!!
Nightmare that haunts the night.
This is really good! Your writing has definitely improved, and if continue like this you’ll be writing like a pro in no time! Great job! 🙂
Nightmare that haunts at night Really good! The only thing that I’ll say is that Cal’s POV seemed repetitve. The other parts were SUPER creative! Amazing! When will you be doing your other chapter, because I really liked this one.
Hi guys!!! So sorry for not updating my chapters for almost two weeks. This past weeks have been very busy that I haven’t got the time to write. Sooo yeah, moving on here is the sixth chapter, if you have forgotten the last chapter you might wanna reread it @emberscarlet. And also if you want to be tagged just say the word. Oh! Also I don’t feel…[Read more]
So sorry I doubled the title, and I’m sorry if there are grammatical errors and typos.
Hey, good job! You put a few too many commas in some areas, but this is great! Keep it up! 🙂
Amazing job! You nailed Ana! Most people don’t, they usually make her mischevious, but you got the personality right! The only thing I’d say is that Romeo seemed a bit too outgoing. He’s a lot more independent, and doesn’t really tease or play with other people. Very introverted, and doesn’t make friends easily. I guess you could say he’s timid.…[Read more]
Thanks @otaku88! It became a little hard for me to put in Romeo’s supposed personality.
Here’s a chapter in his point of veiw to kind of get a feeling about his feelings.
I would never imagine that I would be sitting in the pews in the school for good. Then again, had I ever imagined anything that has happened in my life? I was quite perplexed on how I arrived here. Then, it hit me. I stared at my blond, happy-go-lucky…[Read more]
Nice POV… i’ll try to make him more ‘Romeo’ in my next chapter, but can I keep his friendship with Demarcus and Altair? Thank you @otaku88!
Hallo everyone! I know I haven’t updated the next chapter to my The Birth of Fire and Ice story, well I’ll try to update it this week. And so moving on, I have decided to write a new story after I finish The Birth of Fire and Ice. It will be a non- SGE themed story but there will still be a wee bit of magic, and yeah, romance, and also DRAGONS!!!…[Read more]
Cool! Would you mind if I tweaked her outfit just a tiny bit? It’s just that the students at the school in my story have a very ‘individual’ taste in clothes…I’d send an example to you for approval, don’t worry!
Whoops! I also forgot to tag @otaku88, and @bestgefintheuniverseisme.
Of course, @emberscarlet! That was already the plan! Here is the new outfit:
Everyday Clothing: High-waisted tie dye turquoise skirt, cream ‘off the shoulder’ top with silver embellishments, silver buckled tan Roman sandals, tan fine wrap choker, silver chain detail woven belt, penny tote bag, cubic zirconia star earrings, ‘squad’ necklace and…[Read more]
May I use this character, because, sadly, I may be ending The Twin of Good, and create a new one, (I will be focusing on The Life of A Blue Fairy too) thank you if you let m, and love the story!!!
Sure @amigoodorevil! Can you tag me when you start your new story? Thank you!
When I say I am ending The Twin of Good, I am not saying I will stop using Travers!!! (To all the fans of Twin of Good)
(@emberscarlet, that was kind of a question if you will use Travers in you story)
Sure! Just send me his bio, and can I use him in my The Birth of Fire and Ice story?
This character sounds super cool, and I’m sure the story will be too! When you do eventually start posting that story, can you please tag me? I love anything fantasy, and this sounds awesome 🙂
To the people involved in the RP Collab, I’m back and feeeeling better, and is it okay if I post my chapter today? Because yesterday I informed all of you that anyone who’s turn is next can post their chapter, well, since no one has posted yet I’ll post mine, PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!! If anyone thinks I am ruining the sched. 🙂
@emberscarlet I think you should tag the other people that are not in the group collab separately beacuae it will confuse the other group members. BTW Amazing Chapter!
YEEEES I LOVE HOW ITS LONGER THAN A LOT OF CHAPTERS ON HERE!!!
Lovely POV! Also, I am a member of the group RP, so tag me the next time you post a chapter.
Amazing! I’m completely speechless since it’s so deep! This is one of the best things I’ve read! Thanks for including Murder 🙂
To all those who are involved with the RP Collab, I’m afraid that I will cannot post my chapter today cause I’m not feeling well today and I can’t focus on writing my story, probably another day. So anyone who’s turn is next can do their chapter first.…[Read more]
It won’t clog the forum, its important, thanks for telling us
Yeah. Please feel better! And this is an important post, so it did not clog the forum.
It is a great privilege to be a part of this RP Collab – The Woods, thank you for this amazing idea @itsmejazzy. This is the Jeremy’s bio, I might be posting the chapter tomorrow or the next day after that, it’s just that I’m busy this days with exams and schoolwork but I promise to post my chapter.
Amazing! It seems like Zora, Murder and him have something to bond over. Maybe Murder and Jeremy can be friends? Or enemies. It seems better if they are friends because they have so much in common, but I don’t know. And now I’m rambling. Okay, I’ll stop now. 🙂 I’m just so excited! Let me know whether they should be friends or enemies! 😉
🙂 But Zora still isn’t trusting Murder fully… yet. She’s gotta get him to spill all of his secrets, then they can really be friends. 😉
Good! Also, I don’t think that doctors will know someone is sick only three days before they die…
I agree with her. I’ve already posted twice and it’s getting worse by the minute. We need your help immediately!
Seems suspicious, huh @peetalover10604? But you might never know, let’s just no jump to conclusions until then let’s just wait patiently for clarification.
It’s alright @peetalover10604 I kinda thought that it was suspicious too.
Actually, she started off by targeting @beautiful321, but then she moved on to whoever disagrees with her. I think if we all ignore her and keep doing our own things, she will eventually get bored and leave. And if you see this, cyber-bully, then I know you’re going to tell me to leave or that you won’t leave. That’s fine. By all means, keep…[Read more]
I love! That was awesome!! Feel free to use Kyla as long as you want!
Why are you always so mean to people? If they do have bad writing, you don’t need to say mean things about it.
@schoolforgood1 OK, you do realize that most of us here are still in middle and high school, right? Maybe even elementary, I don’t know. That means that we’re all still learning to write, and we all make mistakes! That’s why professional writers have editors to look over their work before it’s published, to make it the best it can be and to get…[Read more]
Leave ember alone ember don’t believe her your story is brilliant
That was an amazing chapter! You nailed Jane! I’m excited to see where this goes. 🙂
Ok….. @schoolforgood1 You ******* inconsiderate little **** shut up and get off of this forum. You **** and I hate everything you stand for. How did that feel? Don’t you feel hurt? Well, that is exactly how you treated @emberscarlet. Unlike most people who commented, I don’t want to be your friend. GET THE H*LL OF THIS FORUM! GOT IT? THE ONLY…[Read more]
@otaku88 WHOA! Where did THAT come from?! Yes, there are younger children on this site, but they have every right to be here, just like you! My god, why is there so much fighting and bullying happening?! What happened to the friendly community this site used to be?!
Ember, I’m sorry this all has to happen on your post! You didn’t do anything to…[Read more]
Alright, sorry about what I said earlier. I was just really mad, because I don’t like any type of bullying. Going along with what @kenziecrystai said, I didn’t mean that young children shuldn’t be on this site, I said I wasn’t going to say anything further because younger children are on this site. I don’t like to fight fire with fire, but…[Read more]
I’m so sorry ember for spamming on your post. I didn’t know about the situation until now. Your chapter is great, and please forgive me for saying those things on your post. Please ignore them. But seriously, it was great.
Thanks guys, its fine I’m not affected by her bitter-talk. Thanks for standing up for me guys. And For You-Know-Who your acting like an immature kid.
I’ll make the bio of the other Nevergirl soon. So stay tuned! 🙂
Hey u know what i just realised!? You’re the same person who has been bullying @beautiful321 ! Stop the bullying! Maybe someone should go to the website central! This is cyber bullying and cyber bullying is a crime!! These people could go to the police!! You’re lucky they haven’t already!! Leave them alone before someone else reports you for them!!
The bullying should be stopped, please you’ve gotta to do something about schoolforgood1. Don’t wanna tag her, cause she might cause more trouble. PLEASE DO SOMETHING!!! ASAP!
Sorry for any typos or grammatical error it was just that I finished this in 2:30 in the morning, so its kinda jumbled or rushed. Anyways, Enjoy!
And I just realized Ember and Demarcus had the same name for their Dads so I’ll change Demarcus’ dad’s name from Faix to Friz :)…
Good job! Your grammar and punctuation need some work, but this is fabulous. Keep it up! 🙂
Good! Sorry it’s taken me so long to comment, I just never had time to read this. Also, I know you probably don’t need them, but here are some characters you can use.
Name Ana of Maidenville
Appearance she has light blond hair that is about shoulder length hair, bright blue eyes, very pale (to the point where she looks sick) small…[Read more]