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Good afternoon guys! As I have promised, here are some bios. Although I just promised Akira and Tatiana’s bios, I made more than two. 🙂 The appearance of the characters are short, but I still hope you like them. And if you want to be tagged on my next chapter, or if you want to borrow a character or if you have questions. Just say so…
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How do you post pictures here? Mine wouldn’t post with the links, that is why the some of the clothings are blank. Sorry!
Find the picture, press and hold the picture. Click on the copy option, and paste.
Well, I guess it’s Kenzie to the rescue. @soulreaper has some guides on how to post photos, videos and even how the get some cool font stuff in your posts. Follow the tag above or tag him in another post asking for help and I’m sure he’ll answer as soon as possible 🙂
These are great! I didn’t expect so many bios in one post, but they all seem like very interesting characters. Keep up all the awesome work and improvement you’re doing. Can’t wait for the next chapter! 🙂
Annyeong guys!! (I dunno if I spelled that right, hehe) So yup, it’s alreadyH 10:33 here in the Phillipines, and I successfully finished my seventh chapter. What time is it for you guys, and what day is it for you? Here in the Phillipines it is already Tuesday. So I’m gonna stop ramblin’ and start with the tags.
Tag list(and special…[Read more]
Nightmare that Haunts at Night 😀
Great job! That was amazing and I loved it! Also, thanks for the tag. Keep up the amazing work!!
Nightmare that haunts the night.
This is really good! Your writing has definitely improved, and if continue like this you’ll be writing like a pro in no time! Great job! 🙂
Nightmare that haunts at night Really good! The only thing that I’ll say is that Cal’s POV seemed repetitve. The other parts were SUPER creative! Amazing! When will you be doing your other chapter, because I really liked this one.
Hi guys!!! So sorry for not updating my chapters for almost two weeks. This past weeks have been very busy that I haven’t got the time to write. Sooo yeah, moving on here is the sixth chapter, if you have forgotten the last chapter you might wanna reread it @emberscarlet. And also if you want to be tagged just say the word. Oh! Also I don’t feel…[Read more]
So sorry I doubled the title, and I’m sorry if there are grammatical errors and typos.
Hey, good job! You put a few too many commas in some areas, but this is great! Keep it up! 🙂
Amazing job! You nailed Ana! Most people don’t, they usually make her mischevious, but you got the personality right! The only thing I’d say is that Romeo seemed a bit too outgoing. He’s a lot more independent, and doesn’t really tease or play with other people. Very introverted, and doesn’t make friends easily. I guess you could say he’s timid.…[Read more]
Thanks @otaku88! It became a little hard for me to put in Romeo’s supposed personality.
Here’s a chapter in his point of veiw to kind of get a feeling about his feelings.
I would never imagine that I would be sitting in the pews in the school for good. Then again, had I ever imagined anything that has happened in my life? I was quite perplexed on how I arrived here. Then, it hit me. I stared at my blond, happy-go-lucky…[Read more]
Nice POV… i’ll try to make him more ‘Romeo’ in my next chapter, but can I keep his friendship with Demarcus and Altair? Thank you @otaku88!
I love! That was awesome!! Feel free to use Kyla as long as you want!
Why are you always so mean to people? If they do have bad writing, you don’t need to say mean things about it.
@schoolforgood1 OK, you do realize that most of us here are still in middle and high school, right? Maybe even elementary, I don’t know. That means that we’re all still learning to write, and we all make mistakes! That’s why professional writers have editors to look over their work before it’s published, to make it the best it can be and to get…[Read more]
Leave ember alone ember don’t believe her your story is brilliant
That was an amazing chapter! You nailed Jane! I’m excited to see where this goes. 🙂
Ok….. @schoolforgood1 You ******* inconsiderate little **** shut up and get off of this forum. You **** and I hate everything you stand for. How did that feel? Don’t you feel hurt? Well, that is exactly how you treated @emberscarlet. Unlike most people who commented, I don’t want to be your friend. GET THE H*LL OF THIS FORUM! GOT IT? THE ONLY…[Read more]
@otaku88 WHOA! Where did THAT come from?! Yes, there are younger children on this site, but they have every right to be here, just like you! My god, why is there so much fighting and bullying happening?! What happened to the friendly community this site used to be?!
Ember, I’m sorry this all has to happen on your post! You didn’t do anything to…[Read more]
Alright, sorry about what I said earlier. I was just really mad, because I don’t like any type of bullying. Going along with what @kenziecrystai said, I didn’t mean that young children shuldn’t be on this site, I said I wasn’t going to say anything further because younger children are on this site. I don’t like to fight fire with fire, but…[Read more]
I’m so sorry ember for spamming on your post. I didn’t know about the situation until now. Your chapter is great, and please forgive me for saying those things on your post. Please ignore them. But seriously, it was great.
Thanks guys, its fine I’m not affected by her bitter-talk. Thanks for standing up for me guys. And For You-Know-Who your acting like an immature kid.
I’ll make the bio of the other Nevergirl soon. So stay tuned! 🙂
Hey u know what i just realised!? You’re the same person who has been bullying @beautiful321 ! Stop the bullying! Maybe someone should go to the website central! This is cyber bullying and cyber bullying is a crime!! These people could go to the police!! You’re lucky they haven’t already!! Leave them alone before someone else reports you for them!!
Sorry for any typos or grammatical error it was just that I finished this in 2:30 in the morning, so its kinda jumbled or rushed. Anyways, Enjoy!
And I just realized Ember and Demarcus had the same name for their Dads so I’ll change Demarcus’ dad’s name from Faix to Friz :)…
Good job! Your grammar and punctuation need some work, but this is fabulous. Keep it up! 🙂
Good! Sorry it’s taken me so long to comment, I just never had time to read this. Also, I know you probably don’t need them, but here are some characters you can use.
Name Ana of Maidenville
Appearance she has light blond hair that is about shoulder length hair, bright blue eyes, very pale (to the point where she looks sick) small…[Read more]
Aloha everyone I just finished my third chapter and here it is, hope you like it. And if you wanna be tagged just say the word.
@fairytalegirl123 thanks for letting me use Jane,
@sge9878, @smartcleverbunny560, and @otaku88 I’ll probably use your characters on my next chapter,
@kenziecrystai thank you for your advice last time, it…[Read more]
Good job! Don’t worry about the errors and typos, we learn from our mistakes 🙂
Keep up the great work!
Hey guys, I just finished my second chapter and would love to share it with you. If you want to be tagged just say the word, and the characters that I have borrowed, I will be using them probably on my next chapter. Hope you like it!
Chapter 2: Banished from…[Read more]
This is really good! You definitely could improve your grammar and punctuation, put this seems like it’s going to be a great story 🙂
Finally, I have finished doing my first chapter and here it is, hope you like it. And to those who have recommended their characters to me I will be using some of your characters for future chapters. And one more thing I will be changing the title of my story from Out of Place to The Birth of Fire and Ice. Hope you like it!
“The Birth of Fire…[Read more]
This is great! Can you tag me in the rest of the chapters please? 🙂
I really like it could you tag I definitely want to read the rest
Hi guys! Here is the sixth chapter my story. Please reply in the comments if you would like to be tagged, have one of your characters in my story, like a bio of one of my characters, or maybe just say…[Read more]
Hello everyone! I’ve got the fifth chapter of my story here! I’m sorry that I’m not sorry, but I just had to follow the feeling that I had to do this in this chapter (you’ll see!). Please reply in the comments if you would like to be tagged, have one of your characters in my story or would like a bio of one of my…[Read more]
OMG I love it! I’m definitely going to read the first four chapters!! Keep up the awesome work!