emerald886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago
Hi so i’m starting to write my first rp/series and thought i would introduce the main characters kinda like a blurb about them so here goes comment any ideas for the story if you have any 🙂
*Evie*
Evie has known she would one day be queen since she was born and has been training for it ever since. She can’t wait to get to the school for good and…[Read more]
indigosky12 replied 11 months ago
oh wow, this is quite incredible, @EMERALD886. Can you comment on my post below?
beachbionic replied 11 months ago
Awesome! Tag me please!
evergirl391 replied 11 months ago
Tag me!
elviaofcamelot replied 11 months ago
This sounds so good, tag me please
emerald886 posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 1 year, 3 months ago
who’s your favourite character in the school for good and evil series?
carrot123 replied 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s Sophie
emerald886 replied 1 year, 2 months ago
thx
princessrachael replied 11 months ago
Merlin, Teddy, Rhian or Tinkerbell
Hi everyone this is the 1st chapter if you have any ideas on what to name the story comment it 🙂
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CHAPTER 1 THE LETTER
*EVIE*
”Posture!” ”If you want to be…[Read more]
I like it! Very surprising. However, it’s kind of rushed. I think it would help it you broke it into paragraphs and added a bit more detail. I could help you, if you like.
Ok thanks for your criticism it’s very helpful and if you wanted to work together that would be great 🙂
Yes…I agree, a bit rushed. NO OFFENCE WAS MEANT THAT WAS GREAT
I might be able to work with you. I don’t know, though, I have way too many stories going on.
Ooh suspenseful.
One writing tip for you: In the English language, When someone says something and then someone else says something it has to be on a different line, for example
“Did you do your homework?” Said James
“Yes! I did it last night!” Exclaimed Shaya
I know that wasn’t a great example but do you see what I mean?
Anyways this is an…[Read more]
thanks that’s very helpful 🙂
Your welcome! Glad I was able to help!
your story is amazing. I like the twist. If you slowed it down, it would be even better!
*You’re
It’s amazing, but I agree, it’s a bit rushed, and there are some run on sentences. Other then that, I love it! Please tag me <3
Also maybe the story should be called Supposedly a Never?
@emerald886, maybe you can take time to carefully describe something to slow the events down a tiny bit. I know this works because i did the same thing as you did when i was a tiny bit smalle :))
This is really good, I do agree with what everyone else is saying tho. Tag me please