emerald886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 1 week ago

    Hi everyone this is the 1st chapter if you have any ideas on what to name the story comment it 🙂
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    @INDIGOSKY12
    @ELVIAOFCAMELOT
    @BEACHBIONIC
    @EVERGIRL391
    CHAPTER 1 THE LETTER
    *EVIE*
    ”Posture!” ”If you want to be…[Read more]

        effie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        I like it! Very surprising. However, it’s kind of rushed. I think it would help it you broke it into paragraphs and added a bit more detail. I could help you, if you like.

          emerald886 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          Ok thanks for your criticism it’s very helpful and if you wanted to work together that would be great 🙂

          beachbionic replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          Yes…I agree, a bit rushed. NO OFFENCE WAS MEANT THAT WAS GREAT

          effie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          I might be able to work with you. I don’t know, though, I have way too many stories going on.

        evergirl391 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Ooh suspenseful.
        One writing tip for you: In the English language, When someone says something and then someone else says something it has to be on a different line, for example
        “Did you do your homework?” Said James
        “Yes! I did it last night!” Exclaimed Shaya
        I know that wasn’t a great example but do you see what I mean?
        Anyways this is an…[Read more]

          emerald886 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          thanks that’s very helpful 🙂

        evergirl391 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Your welcome! Glad I was able to help!

          aliceross4 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          your story is amazing. I like the twist. If you slowed it down, it would be even better!

        thestoriangirl replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        It’s amazing, but I agree, it’s a bit rushed, and there are some run on sentences. Other then that, I love it! Please tag me <3

        thestoriangirl replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Also maybe the story should be called Supposedly a Never?

          indigosky12 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          @emerald886, maybe you can take time to carefully describe something to slow the events down a tiny bit. I know this works because i did the same thing as you did when i was a tiny bit smalle :))

        elviaofcamelot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        This is really good, I do agree with what everyone else is saying tho. Tag me please

    emerald886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 1 week ago

    Hi so i’m starting to write my first rp/series and thought i would introduce the main characters kinda like a blurb about them so here goes comment any ideas for the story if you have any 🙂

    *Evie*
    Evie has known she would one day be queen since she was born and has been training for it ever since. She can’t wait to get to the school for good and…[Read more]

        indigosky12 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        oh wow, this is quite incredible, @EMERALD886. Can you comment on my post below?

        beachbionic replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Awesome! Tag me please!

        evergirl391 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Tag me!

        elviaofcamelot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        This sounds so good, tag me please

    emerald886 posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 6 months, 1 week ago

    who’s your favourite character in the school for good and evil series?

        carrot123 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        It’s Sophie

          emerald886 replied 5 months, 2 weeks ago

          thx

        princessrachael replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Merlin, Teddy, Rhian or Tinkerbell

    emerald886 posted an update in the group SGE MOVIE FANTASY CASTING 6 months, 1 week ago

    maybe Dove Cameron for Sophie or Beatrix

        nevermore2 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        She’s a lil bit too old, a good age range is about 14 to 20

          saskialip replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          actually maybe 13-16 for the students
          I don’t know but it seems fair

          purpleunicorns8 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          I would say more 12-17 but that’s just my opinion

        evernever4eva replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        To old in the first book they were kidnapped at age 12

          pamzeis replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          They’re 12-16

          nevermore2 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          They were 14 in the first book bc they are\turning 16 in the third book

        bookworm87654321 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        No, they were 12-15 in the first book, and Tedros was 14 in the first book, because he was turning 16 in the third book.

          bookworm87654321 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          SGE admission rules. I think I might have read that in either the Handbook, or QFG, or TLEA, or AWWP. And anyway, it’s just logical. If you have to be at least twelve, and admission happens every four years then it’s only fair for it to be 12-15, as each applicant, no matter what year they were born, gets one shot and one shot only.

          nevermore2 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          We know that the age to get into SGE is 12\15 I was just saying that in the first book Sophie, Agatha, Hort,Tedros,Ravan,Beatrix etc were all no younger than 14

        pamzeis replied 6 months, 1 week ago

        Where does it say they’re no younger than 14? I’m curious because I don’t remember seeing that in the book!

          nevermore2 replied 6 months, 1 week ago

          Ik right, they are 14!!!