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Hi!! This is my next chapter of Terendils Arise. It is slightly shorter than usual, but I will be writing another chapter soon. Enjoy, and constructive feedback is helpful!!
As no one was now in the dining room, Sara had the whole space to herself, yet didn’t like the idea of it. S…[Read more]
Hi guys this is chapter 4 of Terendils Arise!! There has been a mixup with two of the characters names, so from now on Sara’s sister is Abbie, and the other girl in the class is Abigail. I hope you like it, and you can asked to be tagged if you wish. Constructive feedback is helpful!!
When the two g…[Read more]
Hi guys!! Here is Chapter 3 of Terendils Arise, and I hope you like it!! The capitals are meant to be italics, but italics don’t seem to work on here (unless anyone here knows how and can help me!!) As always, constructive feedback is helpful!!
Panting, and with her new shoes starting to scuff already, Sara found A…[Read more]
Hi and here is chapter 2 of my story, Terendils Arise. I hope you enjoy it, and as always, constructive feedback would be helpful!!
As the boy and girl stood to a standstill, they sent motions of awkwardness billowing around the Clearing. For a minute, nobody did anything.The boy folded his arms in expectation,…[Read more]
Thx for favouriting my post, @agatha2513 !!! Would you like to be tagged? No pressure tho, I don’t mind at all
This is Chapter 1 about Sara at SGE (my bio is further down)! I hope you enjoy, and constructive feedback would be helpful!!
When Sara first woke up, her first thought was, why is everyone dressed already? She was always the first one up, and looking up at the clock on the wall, she realised she wasn’t late – everyone was early.…[Read more]
Hi guys!! I’ve done a few chapters here before, but I have decided to start a new story so I would be grateful for feedback!!
Name: Sara of Pifflepaff Hills
Appearance: Dark brown hair, cut short above her shoulders, with cold blue eyes and a cheeky smile. She likes to dress in light blue dresses, with red heels. She is tall, but thin a…[Read more]
Here is chapter 12!!
Chapter 12 : A Price not to be Paid
What do you do when you’re about to be tortured to your death? Do you yell? Do you scream, kick, punch or even destroy?
Or are you like me and do nothing?
I shivered in shock as a pair of spiky claws dra…[Read more]
Here is chapter 11!
Chapter 11 : A Hefty Punishment
“Are you sure this will work? I mean, this is so old the magic may have run out,” toyed Kavia, as she gently handled the messaging device. She and Knavia would be able to send messages to help her earn top scores.
“Yeah I’m pretty…[Read more]
Hi guys this is chapter 10!
Chapter 10 : The letter
Tags : @swizza @princessrachael @elizaofjauntjolie @hester112
As she walked back down the stairs, Ariana realised she hadn’t actually known what happened. She’d had the distinct impression that somehow she had grown by over a metre just then, but that wasn’t possible. Who grew so fast just…[Read more]