emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 5 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter Eight
    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber
    @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
    @everafter2007
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    After a few more days at the school, Phoenix was finally finding her place. Had a few friends, had gotten used to the classes, occasionally flopped in her classes… Oops… But overall was getti…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Hey, glad to see you still on! Good chapter!!
        In my head I’m already imagining a love triangle between Orion, Dune, and Phoenix (I love these names)

          avekather23 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          Could you tag me to your story please?

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          hahahaha, we’ll see…

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          and @avekather23 i’ll definitely tag u! 🙂

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 7 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter Seven
    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber
    @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
    @everafter2007
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    To be honest, Phoenix thought princess classes were plain terrible.
    Phoenix was finally at lunch- and after just four classes that day she was already grumpy and very unhappy.
    Biting i…[Read more]

        luna11111 replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        I like it! And I have a question. Do you want to make a crossover between your story and mine? That could be cool!

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 7 months ago

          Thanks!! And i would love to do crossovers, but sadly I don’t think i have enough time to work on that 🙁 i’m so sorry! It definitely would have been pretty cool.

          luna11111 replied 1 year, 7 months ago

          Oh then thats ok Emma.

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        Cool chapter!!! But I’m sure you’ve been practicing your writing more than me, so yours has to be better. 😉

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 7 months ago

          Thanks!! Ehehe I wouldn’t say my writing’s tooo good lol but i know yours is definitely awesome!! Practicing takes up so much time tho uGhHh

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 8 months ago

    BIO FOR ORION 🙂
    (Trouble In Paradise)

    (As you saw in chapters 5&6, there is a character named Orion. He will play a big part in my RP, so here is his bio! Hope you like it 😀 )

    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber
    @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
    @everafter2007

    Name: Orion Of Foxwood
    Gender: Boy
    Age: 15
    Home: Foxwood
    Parents:…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 8 months ago

        AHAAA and no, friendliness and animals being attracted to him is not strange at all. 🙂 I have a read book about a girl who has made friends with a boy who loves animals, and in return, they love him. Good bio!! 🙂 The backstory is a tad short, though.

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Ah thanks!! 🙂 But yes, the backstory is quite short as he didn’t have too much of an interesting childhood lol, but i should work on lengthening that!

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 8 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter Six
    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber
    @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
    @everafter2007
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    Phoenix had only woken up fifteen minutes before, with barely had time to shove herself into her uniform, brush her rats nest of hair and then stuff half of a steaming hot pancake into her mouth sh…[Read more]

        goodandevil5050 replied 1 year, 8 months ago

        I loved it! It was Amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter.

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Thanks!! 🙂

        theglowinglego replied 1 year, 8 months ago

        It was amazing. You might need to work on adding who said what on more lines, because I got confused. Besides that I’m excited to see if they end up together or don’t. There are a lot of directions to take this.

          spyingclimber replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Nice!

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Sorry that u werw confused! Thanks for the advice- and yeah, there’s many different ways i could write this hahaha 😀

        cakeordie replied 1 year, 8 months ago

        I have some basic advice for you (not to be mean or anything):
        1: space the beginnings of your paragraphs, it’s a LOT easier on ppl’s I’s
        2: what @THEGLOWINGLEGO said
        3:Connect your sentences
        hope that helped u edit baiiiiiiiiii
        (hewph my mom walked away)

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Thanks for the advice !!! I’ll try to do that lol 😀

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 8 months ago

        What a lovely way to proceed onto a small display of amorous congress. XD Kidding, they’re still so younggggg, and I’m even younger… Jeez, I wish I could display that kind of friendliness towards others. Unforunately, I don’t show much trust towards people anymore, and it’s just been plenty harder to open up, hence why I don’t make many…[Read more]

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 8 months ago

          Aww, well you are such a sweet girl Lyn and opening up to others can be hard sometimes… But thank you ! 🙂

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 9 months ago

    Trouble in Paradise- Chapter Five
    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
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    The girls were running as fast as their dainty heels could take them, so not the most practical attire for the occasion, but alas it was what they had.
    The three had just finished sprinting down the two…[Read more]

        everafter2007 replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        I love your story! can you tag me?

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          Sure thing! 🙂

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Great chapter!! 🙂 Sorry for not commenting earlier… we seriously need to talk more.

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          Thanks! And yes we need to catch up

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 year, 9 months ago

    Hii!! I’m Emma! 🙂 So i’ve done rp for a while on Level 0, and i just joined the FanFic group, and i’ve made fanfics before, but never from a book series. If there are any specifics I shoild follow, do you know if I am supposed to stick exactly to the story as it is, or am I allowed to change things up, sorta like an alternate SGE world??
    Beca…[Read more]

        mysticalteen replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        You can basically do anything. Just try and set a time and place in your fanfic before starting. Because it’s a series people can get confused. But it’s just a suggestion XD

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          Thanks!!

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Trouble in Paradise- Chapter Four
    Tags:
    @evilerruler845
    @glinda7
    @spyingclimber @aricaofthewoodsbeyond
    @bookgirl2007
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    It was a quite a time later that day, and after hours of doing nothing and only worrying about every single little thing, Phoenix had just struggled into weirdly tall glass high heels, and a fluffy, pink dress…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        It was. 🙂 Good chapter!!

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thanks 😀

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter Three
    Tags: @evilerruler845 @glinda7 @spyingclimber
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    She couldn’t believe it, she really couldn’t believe it. How did it actually end up that she was chosen? How could this be??
    It was very much quite strange.
    No, actually, not just “quite strange.” That was one huge understatement. It was extre…[Read more]

        aricaofthewoodsbeyond replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Awesome! Could I be tagged?

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thanks! And sure thing 🙂

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Yay!! 🙂 Cool chapter!!!

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thank youuu 😀

        bookgirl2007 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Please tag me

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Sure!!

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter Two

    Tags: @evilerruler845 @glinda7 @spyingclimber
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    Phoenix was in the village center, with every other kid. It was incredibly crowded, as nowadays mothers and fathers left and right wanted their kids to be chosen for the Schools, since they could potentially become Kings and Queens of great lands, or…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Cool chapter!!! I thought that the children would be unknowingly taken at night, though.

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Oh yeah, i changed it a little so at the beginning it says how nowadays children wabted to be taken, so they could become queens and kings and villains. And thanks!

        cottoncandywolf replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        That was so good. I love it!

          emmathewemma replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thanks!!

          spyingclimber replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          cool!

    emmathewemma posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Trouble In Paradise- Chapter One
    Tags: @evilerruler845 @glinda7 @spyingclimber
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    Phoenix rolled her eyes.
    “Come on Phoenix, it is true!” Lillian said, her big doe eyes practically begging Phoenix to believe her, but Phoenix wouldn’t budge.
    “Lillian, i’m not going to this School For Good. They can take, uhhh, Susan, yeah. Susa…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Good chapter! 🙂

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