erynofmaidenvale posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Tags: @stormycat @sapphy @elvish
    Chapter 3:
    Quietly, the beast sat out side his dungeon. Behind the iron bars were his beloved weapons: axes, swords, shackles and other horrific torture related instruments that you could get nightmares from simply looking at. Their wickedly sharp bladed commanded attention and struck fear into the most hardened…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        yay eryn! you’re back! i don’t like this chapter…
        no, just kidding, it’s great. i just think that this is a bit to early in the story for the neverending doom. can you please do a bio for bella and angie? also describe the first day from different povs. is mimi related to robyn? i like bella and angie’s a character that i feel needs a little…[Read more]

          elvish replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          what was that last thing @sapphy?
          p.s the p’s do count, it’s just post postpostpostpostpost stated

          sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          It’s a secret code…

          sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          We go to school together elvish

        elvish replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        yay!

    erynofmaidenvale posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Tags: @stormycat @sapphy @elvish
    Chapter 2: Bella-Donna POV
    I have heard that Evers ride the flower ground to school. The sickening system of obnoxious flowers really suits them. I mean it’s easy, it’s exclusive, it’s pink! What more could they ask for?
    Nevers, however, ride stymphs to school. The bony creatures are a bit thick but pretty easy…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Nice story! Can you make a bio for Angelina and Bella?

        elvish replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        really nice! and I agree with sapphy!

    erynofmaidenvale posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Tags: @sappy @stormycat @elvish
    Chapter 1 continued:
    “How’s my beautiful daughter?” Dad asks, scooping me into a big bear hug.
    “Tip-Top and ready to go!” I replied as Dad sits me on his broad shoulders and carries me outside.
    In front of our house wait my smiling mother and squabbling siblings. They are packed into our black car. I climb inside an…[Read more]

        erynofmaidenvale replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Revised tags:
        @stormycat @sapphy @elvish

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        To my favorite Katty
        Maybe make it a bit longer next time, also don’t bother tagging people in the comments because it doesn’t work.
        Check spellings! (don’t worry, they’re perfect but I’m horrible so l like getting on your nerves)
        From the awesome sparkling sapphire that l know you secretly look up to and admire and you probably can’t spell

    erynofmaidenvale posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    My first story. It’s name is undecided.
    Tags: @stormycat @sapphy
    Chapter 1: Mimi POV
    Dusk was settling over the garden. The shadows lengthened until the darkness was as thick as treacle. I couldn’t see the pink roses or the emerald trees. Tiny pinpricks of twinkling light hovered high above the rooftops. It was truly night.
    I sighed. I was…[Read more]

        elvish replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        wow, please tag me in the next chapters!

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Yay! I can’t wait for the next chapter! Have you made a bio? Just check for spelling errors hahaha

          erynofmaidenvale replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          [Sticks tongue out]!

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        (laughs manically) I will get you at school!
        Go die in a hole

          erynofmaidenvale replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          YOUR sanity has been exterminated dying in a hole.

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Also try not to switch tenses

          erynofmaidenvale replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Well aren’t you just a ray of sunshine!

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Your sanity never existed to be exterminated dying in a hole

    erynofmaidenvale posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    My first post!
    Character profile.
    Mimi
    14
    School for good
    Personality: Wild, fierce, loyal and clever
    Appearance: Grey hair, blue intelligent eyes
    Power To transform into a wolf
    Weakness: Losing control as a wolf and forgetting herself, her fiends and even her family
    Parents: Rita. She doesn’t know who her father is.

        rose17 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        I like it! You could make it a little more in depth, though, by adding things like flaws, backstory, etc.

        sapphy replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Also, transformation talents are not as good because people can just mogrify