takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 1 month ago

    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 12, Part A: A Temporary Joy
    Lilian
    Nearly two months have passed after Katherine, Rena, and Lina’s disappearances. The rumors slowly fly away, replaced by the spirit of the cheerful holidays. Her parents had persuaded her to go outdoors, interact with friends, and enjoy the celebrations. However, she k…[Read more]

        thecoven4ever replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        will you tag me for this? its really good!

          takan replied 2 years, 1 month ago

          I will, thanks! 🙂

        lauraofnetherwood replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Amazing!

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Really good!

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 1 month ago

    Part 2, the School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 11.5: Arrogance, Trickery, and Death
    The School Master
    “So, then…. Have we lost yet another opportunity?” The voice behind him, calm yet arrogant, appeared out of nowhere. He was still looking outside, thinking, when the Shadow suddenly interrupted.
    “What do you want this time?” The School Master…[Read more]

        natt2007 replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Why Decimals as far as I know no one uses decimals for chapters.

          takan replied 2 years, 1 month ago

          Oh yeah, I just don’t like writing 11 1/2 because it bugs me to have so many large numbers.

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 2 months ago

    This is the longest chapter I’ve ever written, so feedback & criticism is much appreciated! 🙂
    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 11: Lost
    “What do I have to do, then?” Rena asked wearily.
    “Ah, it’s simple.” The School Master walked over to the Storian’s table and began to rummage through the pile of books. Then, after an agonizing m…[Read more]

        shadesofevil replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        AWESOME! Keep going you’ll achieve a lot!

        lauraofnetherwood replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Amazing!

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Love it!

        princessrachael replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Please tag @NiaofAvalon
        Perfection

        lilystarling replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        very neat. I like how this story has come out.

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 2 months ago

    Chapter 10.5: Blade Of Protection
    Part 2, the School for Good and Evil
    Tomoya
    Panic threatened to overthrow him as more attacks came his way. Each of them was startlingly accurate, even at such an incessant speed. Clumsily, Tomoya tried to dodge the blasts of magic.
    “Stop! Who’s there?” Tomoya wanted to scream. Unfortunately, the words…[Read more]

        shadesofevil replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        AWESOME!

          takan replied 2 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks, ShadesOfEvil! 🙂

        lauraofnetherwood replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        It’s brilliant!

          takan replied 2 years, 2 months ago

          Ty! 😀

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 2 months ago

    Sorry this chapter took so long! I was sick, so I couldn’t get to it soon (and when I did, this old childhood show distracted me…) Anyways, feedback & criticism is appreciated! 😀
    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 10: True or False
    The next thing she sensed was the sunlight streaming through the window. The air was surprisingly warm,…[Read more]

        lauraofnetherwood replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Ooooh… mysterious!

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 9: Cursed
    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Climbing a tower was much harder than Rena had expected. She barely managed to escape the Stymph Security Patrol, and was forced to jump off the bridge and swim towards the tower. However, climbing was far more challenging. It was a huge tower, and the supplies she brought with her didn’t m…[Read more]

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Great job!

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 8: Decision
    Sunlight streamed through the rag curtains of the Evil dorm. Rena sat up in her bed, haunted by a strange exhaustion. Trying to seek comfort in the empty room, she watched as Fuko rolled on Lina’s deserted bed.
    Solitude, what she had thought was inspirational and entertaining. It was i…[Read more]

        shadesofevil replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        awesome!

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Good job!

        takan replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Thanks!

        lauraofnetherwood replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Wow! Exciting!

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Chapter 7.5: Anger
    As soon as the wolves notified the start of lunch, Rena dashed hastily across the fields. Various Nevers scowled as they reluctantly avoided her, but such annoyances were trivial. Lina was far more important. She had to tell Katherine about the incident. Surely, as the Everly friend…[Read more]

        shadesofevil replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        please tag this is awesome!

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Oh this is good tag me too pls!

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 7: Banishment
    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    Rena awoke to the howling of the wolves. She could tell something was off, so she glanced at the clock. 10:01. She had missed an entire morning class. Shivering at the thought of being sent to the Doom Room, Rena jogged over to Lina’s bed, threw the blanket up in the air, and screamed “…[Read more]

        princessrachael replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        I love it💖

    takan posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 6 ½
    Part 2, The School for Good and Evil
    (Tomoya)
    From what he had experienced at home, Tomoya had gratefully thought that the School for Good would be absolute heaven compared to home. But maybe he put his expectations too high. Ever since he encountered the girl named Katherine, everyone’s been… Noticing him. Gossiping. Staring. And all…[Read more]

        thesgeturtle replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This is very good!

        princessrachael replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        ❤️😄 amazing I love it

        shyla replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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