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Chapter 10 (I think)
Angie’s POV
I continued cutting the Rose and Ross leaned over from beside me to have a look. Butterflies exploded from my stomach, but I kept doing what I was doing, not showing that when he’s closer I feel, better? Nervous? Excited? They’re all things I don’t normally feel. “I hope…[Read more]
I can’t wait to find out what she’s going to do write soon
Thank you! I’ll try.
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Chapter 9
Angie’s POV
The welcoming finished and Pollux and Castor were done bickering. We went to our classes that were super boring. I payed attention to almost nothing and got low ranks. At least it was only the first day. Lunch was just around the clock. I couldn’t wait, I was starving because I…[Read more]
I liked it.
Thank you!
Oh, i forgot. @yoshichico helped me with this chapter.
Hello, I put a new character in my rp in my last chapter so I’m going to do his bio.
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Name: Peter
Age: 13
School: evil
Personality:
smart, doubtful, he thinks he has no choice but to be in evil, does bad stuff, is good at the challenges, is near top rankings, not a teachers pet but they all like him,…[Read more]
Ok…….let’s see what happens in this chapter! Since I’m one of those authors who doesn’t have a clue what’s gonna happen and just writes, I have no idea how this chapter will turn out.
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Chapter 8
Peter’s POV
My finger started glowing. It started red but then was flickering gold. I know why. My…[Read more]
Don’t worry. I write like that too.
Mabye em and you could work together My character coukd be the other girl in your story
Nice chapter keep writing
Aw… Don’t kill me but I kinda ship Peter and Ramona…
No problem. They may or may not end up together, you never know………
Love the name Ross. From the show Friends, he and Phoebe are my favorite characters.
Lol, I was about to post my seventh chapter but I was in the middle of tagging but then accidentally pressed submit! Anyway, let’s try this again.
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Chapter 7
Angie’s POV
A boy came up to me. He had sandy brown hair, hazel eyes, and skin the colour of a desert. Why am I describing him?! He holds out a…[Read more]
Whoops, I meant to say *he caught me in his arms. There might be a few spelling errors, just letting you know.
Not sure. Someone evil, definitely.
Nice chapter
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Chapter 6
Angie’s POV
All of the stupid ever boys came in, sword fighting, blah, blah, blah, yadda, yadda, yadda, roses. They all smirked, smiled brightly and dashingly, or smiled shyly. Mostly just looking dumb with smiles so big they looked like they’re cheeks we’re going to explode. They also all…[Read more]
Whoops, a few spelling errors, stupid autocorrect. And I meant that this was my sixth chapter, oops.
Nice chapter
Thank yooouuuu!
Really? Ohhhh…
Soman, I remember you saying that you don’t create a character to be a villain and that even though they’re the villain of the story, they have a point of view. Is your intention to make Rhian right? And make him the “good guy” (the person we root for) or, can you not tell us?
Hello, I’m gonna post the……….5th chapter? I think it’s the fifth. Anyhoo, thanks to @sapphy for helping me come up with a new character for my rp. (She’s Ramona and Angie’s other roommate. Anyhoo, here we go!
(Oopsie, almost forgot)
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Chapter 5?
Ramona’s POV
Angie was silent while we walked back to…[Read more]
Sorry, there were so many words autocorrected.
I think Jade and Ramona will defiitely be friends! Can you try to develop thye sentences further, so you use more complex and compound sentences (ignore me, I’m going full-on English again)
Nice chapter
Hello, here’s chapter four!
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Chapter 4
Ramona’s POV
I think I like this girl. I know I like this girl. I feel like we just click. Is this how you make friends? Is it always this fast? I’m the slowest at making friends. I’m a friendly, talkative person, but back in Gavaldon, I always kept to myself. But…[Read more]
Balck hair… green eyes… Clover? Jade?
Maybe she could be… I dunno, fiery and argumentative but also a total princess at the same time.
Ya, that seems like a good idea. I already have an idea on how she will introduce herself to Ramona and Angie.
Nice chapter
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Hello, I’m super sorry but I’m discontinuing my story on this site. Bye bye.
Omg, sorry. I forgot about the one-liner rule. Anyway, hope you don’t mind. Btw, if you already tag me in your story you can keep doing so.
Awww… that’s sad. Are you going to start another?
That’s so sad
ok