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Soman will you ever come to other countries like Australia?
I think he said once that he’s going to Australia. Not confirmed, don’t take my word for it. You might find information on his blogs, EverNever TV, or his website, somanchainani.net
Hi again. comment if you want me tag you please tell me in comments. i would love feedback on this as well.
“Yes Hester” Agatha sighed
“Have you seen Hort I can’t find him”
“I have to um… I have to kil- uh I mean give him the herbs for the lamb”
“Right. But to answer your question I haven’t”
“Argh I look…[Read more]
hi guys sorry i forgot to post this chpater last week any i hope you enjoy.
Chapter 5 Dinner
After that there was a huge problem. Everyone wanted to eat different thing for dinner. Sophie wanted smoked salmon with garden salad followed by a strawberry mousse, Agatha and Kiko wanted chicken soup followed by a chocolate mousse because it was easy…[Read more]
hahaha! This was really funny and l love how you have incorporated all their personalities but still making it your own work! Just correct the grammar and it will be perfect!
hi this is chapter 4. plz if you read this tell me if it’s good or not.
Chapter 4 The Castle
After Sophie left everyone started to walk back to the palace to try and sort out Dinner on the way there was an awkward silence. But then Agatha spoke up “Maybe not make another School for good and Evil”. “Yeah… Something dramatic might happen. All bec…[Read more]
It is pretty good but maybe it would be easier to read if you put it in paragraphs. The description of the castle is what I want my house to look like!
Hey Guy this is the third chapter. If you do read it then please tell me how it is, if you like it or not comment to be tagged. Tags: @sapphy and @paulie1942-mccartney
Chapter 3 Sophie gets mad
Kiko finally reached them and jumped in front of them.“WHAT?! Innocent, cute, kind, sweet girl! What do you want?!” Hester asked Kiko“Leave her be. She i…[Read more]
I think the speech is amazing but maybe you could develop the actions and what they do a bit more
Hi guys I’m all done with the second chapter. Please comment and I will tag you next time. Tags: @donutqueen11 and @Sapphy.
Chapter 2 the coven wants to kill people
“Why that weasel! He saved Sophie before we could drown her in a pit of her own skincream!” Hester complained. “why does this always happen when Agatha and Sophie and Beatrix are in…[Read more]
this is so funny! maybe correct your capital letters next time that is all apart from that it is great
Hi guys I haven’t done this before sorry if it’s not good. @princessmiki and @sapphy helped with this to. This is about what would happen if Agatha, Sophie and Tedros founded a kingdom. Hope you enjoy
Chapter 1 The Opening
“Agatha dear go address the crowd with the speech you prepared” Dean Dovey said
What speech she thought .
“hey, eve…[Read more]
I love it all. There’s something about the way that it’s written that makes me like it a lot.
Yes, please join! Add much humor as possible! You’ll enjoy!
Soman if Sophie was to name a kingdom would it be called… Kingdom of a Million Sophie’s
Soman is the movie going to be about books 1-4 or just one book