My Ranking Points
Hello, I am new, and this is my bio:
Name: Ezmia of Ravenswood
School: the school for good
Appearance: Brown hair with red strips, brown eyes, and hair mostly pulled back.
Clothing: Narwhal socks, pink or blue shirt, skinning gens or legings, and in school for good, wears the Sophie era good uniform.
Personaltly: Loves to hang out in the libary reading books, kind hearted, and loves riding horses.
Flaws: Her first flaw was on the trial by tain a dragon the was 24 ft tall. She trided to fight him and broke her arm and could barly reach her flag.
Fairytale lineage/ parnets: daughter of Snow white.
Talent: reading minds
Back story: She grew upon a farm and stayed there till the evil zombie queen killed her mother.
Pets: a black cat
Friends: Agatha and others.
Cool bio! I suggest to add more description in a couple of your areas of your bio, though, such as Ezmia’s appearance, flaws (add more flaws please, or otherwise your character may seem a bit too perfect), talent, personality, and backstory. Everything else is good, so good job!