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Sorry if its short! I have writer’s block! 🙁
Chapter 11 trial by tale part 1
As we dashed into the beginning of the Trial I saw Gabby’s eyes were glowing countinuously. we separated. I guess she’s looking for Dallas. I thought. As I went through, I saw a girl who was barley visible. She was a Never. I hid behind a tree and tried to get her by suprise. Instead, someone caught me by suprise. “Jason.” I said. I shot icicles at him, but he dodged them and made me splash water on myself. “oops, sorry.” he said joking. “big mistake” I remarked. I formed with the water and blasted as much as i could. He tried to stop it but my eyes glowed and it was even stronger than before. It was like I controled the whole ocean and it was coming to me!! Jason went up in the air and fell to the ground he was unconscious. I took his flag and let go he disapeared. I feel weird.. I thought. Then I balcked out I caught something in the glimpse of my eye It was that girl. Is she,.. I thought. A GHOST!! Everything thing went black after that.
I looked up at the board. It has only been an hour into the Trial and a never is already gone! I herad something in the bushes. I got ready for a sneak attack. I hexed and a sword appeared in my hand. Then long blond hair tripped me and I fell. “Ugh!” I said as I stumbled to the ground. Wait. I thought. What ever do I know with long Blond hair? “ruby is that you? I said nervously. “yeah its me.” she said. She grabbed for my hand and reeled me inside the bushes. I saw a girl, with swords and she kept getting bigger ones. “That’s like your talent.” She said very quickly. “no its not” I yelled. “No one can match my speed!!” “well lets hope someone can match your level of noise!” Ruby whispered. She was holding on to me very tightly. I blushed. “This is akward.” I said. As we were staying on watch for the girl, I was thinking of ways to break the silence. Then we heard something and attacked. Ruby had a frying pan and I hexed as fast as I could. But the girl slashed and knoncked Ruby out. she took her flag and ruby disapeared. but the frying pan was still there. She tried to slash at me but I ducked and got the pan. I hexed it to make it even more powerful and she attcked, I did to. Wind was in my hair but I didn’t care. Then we screamed and both fell to the ground. unless we one of us took our flag this battle wouldn’t be over so I crawled over to her and got her flag! While I was at it, I dropped it and we disapeared.
I searched and searched and i finally found him. “dallas.” I said. I drew my bow and arrow and got ready.
He had a blazing fire. There was two day left in the trial. We were going to win!!
Hope you guys liked it! 🙂 like I said I have extreme writer’s block so i won’t be making another chapter in a while! 🙂 Comment if you have any ideas! 🙂 fantasygirl12
Sorry if I got your name wrong! hope you liked it 🙂
Cool chapter. And when you make your character talk, they get their own line. So for example:
“Hey Lucy, are you ready for the trail by tale?” Ruby asked.
“Yes, I’m just waiting until we have to get to the blue forest.” Lucy replied.
Do you kind of understand what I’m saying? Good job on the chapter though! 🙂
Great! Like @kittywolf424 said, you really have improved.
This was awesome keep it up. Oh and hope your writer block leaves soon. 🙂