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Here is my bio UPDATED and here you go @demonz4life 🙂
Fairytale Relative:Archer named Vic
Plague (yes or no): no
Summary of fairytale realitive:Vic is the kind of “parent” You’d barely ever see. He tends to always go out to hunt for food, but always comes back in within a year. He leaves Arisa to frnd for herself. Vic has his ways of being resourceful like teaching Arisa the way how to protect herself in swordfighting and hand to hand combat whch isn’t very fun becuase Vic stops in between and says “You’re too weak to learn this quickly. WORK HARDER,but when it comes to personal things he gets to agressive so Arisa finally tries to leave herself, since she has never been able to leave the house only in the forest to practice swordfighting.
Appearance:Green eyes, freckles that cover akmost all of her face
Clothing:blue and yellow stripped shirt with a black shirt with butterflies on it
Weapon: Swordfighting- favorite sword is ruby red
Talent:Telekinesis, can sense from a mile away when ther’s danger
Backstory: When Arisa was only six years old her mother and father died from the plague. The only realitive who could take her in was Vic who looked at her with disgust when he found out because he wanted her to be a boy. Arisa had to act like warrior even though it wasn’t in her nature, The only time she was able sneak around was a day when Vic goes to “hunt for food”, so Arisa practices her sword skills and stops when she sees him coming. hence, there’s the day she found out she had telekinesis. She fell to the grond and without even knowing how, she was floating!!
You need to add personality, as well as more detail to appearance and clothing. Also, a summary of fairytale relative would be a summary of the parent’s fairytale. Here’s an example from one of my bios:
Summary of fairytale: Somewhere out there, there is a well. If you passed it, you wouldn’t think it was a particularly interesting well. In fact, the well is extremely good at hiding itself and blending into the background. This well is not an ordinary well; if you looked inside the well, you wouldn’t see stone and water. Instead, you would find deep red liquid resembling blood surrounded by blocks that seem to be made of bone. But on the outside, the well is perfectly normal.
Every few year or so, the well creates a person. Sometime they’re a girl, sometimes they’re a boy, but whoever it is will always grow up to be extremely powerful. Sometimes this is good. More often than not this is bad. People come from far and wide to see the well and hopefully receive the child that the well created to harness their powers. The well isn’t always found, as it changed locations constantly, and the child doesn’t always find a safe place to live. There’s never been definite proof that well was real, as those who come from it don’t even know it exists. The child normally assumes they were just abandoned as a baby and left to die in the woods. That is, if they survive until adulthood and their power doesn’t self-destruct.
What color is her hair? and you need a lot more detail for Appearance
Hey, Um, can you change her finger glow and eye color? Its the same as my character.
Um and my talent for Angelina is invisibilty. Sorry. I picked a while ago, i just didnt really tell anyone