My Ranking Points
Chapter 1: The Fall
It came before I was able to expect it. Normally I would crash and burn. There’s more to it than that. Life is inevitable. Tears rolling down my withered cheeks. I tumbled off the dashboard, thinking if how my life has come to what it is. I wheezed. You must be wondering who I am.
My name is Faith. Before you ask, it’s just Faith. When I was younger, all I could remember is my parents being ripped out from under me after birth. I was alone. An orphan with no place to hide. There was nothing I could do. That is until the Willmans took me in. All they replied when they carried me to their house, was “just do what you’re told and nobody gets hurt.”
I winced. I can’t take it anymore. I dashed through the courtyard. It’s time I left. All this abuse, I can’t take it anymore. Those freaks trashed and slugged me around every single and I won’t live to see another day if I stay here. I grabbed a pipe, and my eyes widened when I miscalculated my jump and fell splat on the rippling pool of water.
I panted and groaned and noticed blood was smeared on my legs. I Can’t take it anymore. More tears trickled their way down my cheeks and I let it all out. Why? Why did they leave me?!!!
“Mommy! Daddy!!! It’s not fair!!! Why didn’t you take me with you?!!!!” I clenched my fists and punched the ground. They don’t deserve this I do. If I could be reborn, I would make it so I did not them. That may be true, however, the past is in the past. Mommy and Daddy would want me to keep running.
I wheezed for the last time and kept running. “Hey girly!! You might want to stop there!!!” Huh? I withered away, like a fairy with no wings. So this is how it feels…. I thought, to die…. The car honked and my eyes widened, everything going dark. I guess I’ll be able to see mom and dad now.
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Hope you liked it!!!
Ah, oh my god, this is great! Your grammar could use some work, but there wasn’t too many mistakes in that department.
Can’t wait for the next chapter! 😀