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Hi there! I didn’t post in about a month mostly because I’ve been on vacation and things, but also because I’m lazy and a procrastinator. Sorry to say, this will probably be my speed of posting from now on, every 4 weeks to 6 weeks or so.
Chapter 26: The Truth
Pearl had gone to sleep for now. She was hidden deep inside her own mind,…[Read more]
Hello!! For those who still read this, (If you do, sorry about keeping you waiting ) Livie’s bio that I posted a while back is very innacurate. Why? Because I thought the story was going in a certain direction, but then I got bored and completely changed it. So… I don’t even know what’s happening half the time! Anyway, enjoy if you still rea…[Read more]
Chapter 24: That Peculiar Thing
Sierra tromped through the lunch line with only one thing on her mind. Pierre, however, had at least seven different things on his mind at any given time.
“Woo! They changed everything! We were wearing a lot less gaudy uniforms, and who are those show- offs over there? Ha! If I could pick up a sword a…[Read more]
Chapter 23: The Impending Doom
Sierra walked up to the lunch table, the usual one. She smiled as she felt Pierre close behind her. She couldn’t wait. Jade was sitting with Pearl, no others.
“Hi Jade and Pearl, I’d like you to meet somebody,” Sierra said as she approached.
“Hi Sierra, haven’t seen you for a while,” Jade responded with her mouth ful…[Read more]
I didn’t take a three week break!! YAY!!
Chapter 22: The Girl and the Ghost
“Wha-wha-wha-WHAAAT???!!” Sierra screamed.
“I know that I am dead, but we can surely work around it somehow, can we not? Love always finds a way!” Pierre said in return.
“It’s not that,” she started.
Pierre’s face brightened.
“Really? Oh joy!”
“It’s that we just met, and I…[Read more]
Omg, Pierre seems like one of those Everboys: gets the girl, top of the class, muscular, rules the kingdom, etc.
ANOTHER THREE WEEK BREAK!!! SORRY!! (did you forget about me? 😉 hahaha) I will try my darnedest to get the next one out soon but SCHOOOOOOL is just a paaaain….. hope you enjoy and want more!!
Chapter 21: The Girl and the Piano (part 2)
Sierra wandered down the halls of Purity Tower, but this time, she wasn’t looking for just ANY s…[Read more]
I haven’t posted a chapter in 3 weeks… I HAD WRITER’S BLOCK!! 🙁 So I decided to take a small break and find my story’s next chapter elsewhere… and this is what I came up with. 😛
Chapter 20: The Girl and the Piano
A piano could be heard playing throughout the halls of Evil, comforting those who heard it. It was a soft, melanchol…[Read more]
Hello! I would like to stop and say that everyone here is soooooooooo helpful!! In lvl 0 (No offense lvl 0) everybody is all like “ZOMG UR GREAT!!” even when I post something that is absolutely terrible. Here people are like “That’s ok, but it can be better w/_____” That is pretty awesome and I would like to say thank you!!
Well, we are known for our criticism.
Is anybody available to meet up with my character? (I’m not exactly sure how this works, but somebody told me to do this, so I did.) I don’t know if you need a bio, but here it is anyway.
P.S. Sorry for being so inexperienced, please humor me.
Name: Harriet of the Country
Status: Neutral. Harriet prefers to stay out of the…[Read more]
Its good on whole but erm you say your neutral because you prefer to stay out of the way of good and evil. That doesnt make sense though as you are born ever/never/neuutral and it is not affected by what we want. Another point is that although i dont know anything about your parents, i am ready to assume they are both Evers. Am i wrong? Anyway to…[Read more]
Sorry I didn’t see the thing about Good/Evil/Neutral. The parent isn’t really good or evil, though. The tale that he is in is more of a moral story than a good v. evil one. I guess he’s good though? I don’t really know about the mother, I hadn’t quite decided if she was going to be a human or a mouse, but thank you for the criticism without…[Read more]