poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 4 weeks, 1 day ago

    Unbreakable ~ Part 3
    Chapter 7

    PYPER
    Pyper closed her eyes, and leaned back against the wall, breathing out. She covered her eyes with her hand, hovering over and brushing her fingertips across her forehead. A headache pierced her skull, and she started breathing quickly, panicking.
    “Oh….oh my god..this can’t…oh my god,” Rae whispered. Tears w…[Read more]

        delilahkitty replied 4 weeks, 1 day ago

        I do not usually have time to comment.
        You’re so much better at writing than me. Keep it up!!

        jafaristhebest replied 4 weeks, 1 day ago

        I WAS RIGHT I WAS RIGHT I WAS RIGHT!!! BRYCE AND JUNE ARE RELATED!! I KNEW IT!
        THIS WAS AMAZING PENELOPE I LOVED IT KEEP WRITING THIS EVEN IF YOU DON’T GET A TON OF COMMENTS ‘CAUSE HAVING A FEW GENUINE FANS IS STILL GOOD! YAY GO GET KAL BACK RAEEE AND ALAN IS STILL MY FAVORITEEE

        bryannahstevens replied 4 weeks, 1 day ago

        AGH! THIS WAS SO GOOD AND AMAZING AND I LIVE IT!!!!!! I was actually thinking about this fic today and was wondering when you would post the next chapter! LOVE THIS STORY PENELOPE!!!!!

        anadilisawesome76 replied 4 weeks ago

        Amazing. Oh and could u pls untag me. Don’t take it personally. Its just that im going to be inactive for a while and don’t really have time for reading and catching up on chapters i have missed. But it was still amazing. And sooooooooooooo sorry bout it

          poco replied 4 weeks ago

          its fine! I believe you asked last time but i didn’t have my tag list on me and forgot to remove you….so, you’re off now!

          anadilisawesome76 replied 3 weeks, 2 days ago

          thx.

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 2 weeks, 6 days ago

        sry I haven’t been commenting, I haven’t been going through mentions later-
        BRYCE AND JUNE AAH I NEED TO READ MORE I LOVE THIS PENELOPE!!!

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 1 week ago

    Cough. Cough. Ya’ll. I just realized. I forgot to tag people for my last Unbreakable chapter. Somehow two people found it. But. I’m so sorry. That why it took so long. I will be posting chapter 6 of part three. Sorryyyyyy for the delay.
    And guys….we’re almost done with part three. After this, I believe there will be maybe three more…[Read more]

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        Oooooooo! Love it!

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        Amazing. Oh and could u pls untag me. Don’t take it personally. Its just that im going to be inactive for a while and don’t really have time for reading and catching up on chapters i have missed. But it was still amazing

          poco replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          sure!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        Oh I already read this one but still awesome as always!! I still think June & Bryce are related haha

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 1 week ago

        omgggg *gasp* it’s not Bryce?! JUNE-
        aah I love it!!!

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        delilahkitty replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        XD do The School for Boys and Girls-

          patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Haha I love the cucumbers. How about one for each book?? Like, for book five, you could include the crystal ball, a dagger, Reaper, a crown, etc.

        rayrayhannah replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Love it!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        *thumbs up* noice!

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Beautiful! Have you done just Reaper yet?

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        AMAZING!!

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        aah that was awesome!

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        everneveracademy replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        UGVUGXEAKHVOJCYFSUTOBO WHOA THAT WAS AMAZINGGGGG

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        hehe really?

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing!

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        lol you comment that every time you even commented that when i was saying how i it wasn’t a chapter….lol

        takan replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Tag me, please! 😀 Your writing’s really good! I can’t share my email on here, but I’ll try to look for the other chapters in your activity, if you don’t mind.

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          of course! You’ll have to search for a while..

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Awesome!

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        YESSSS GO MARAAAA
        THIS IS AMAZINGGGG

        effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Can I be tagged? I’m new, but I only have a school email address, so you can’t email me.

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          yeah! gonna take a dive in my activity lol?

          effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Maybe? Depends how cluttered it is. If I can’t find the story I’ll just start with this chapter and be confused.

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        lol okay. you’ll have to search for a while because i never favorited them

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        @effie i saw you favorited everything….i take it you found it?

          effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Yup! Took me a while. XD

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Go Mara go Mara wooo! Awesome! 😀

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Love it!!! He is a true legend.

        silver13 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        yess love it

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Yes! He is a legend!👑

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        ooh that’s awesome!! and yeah- he is a hero

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        YESS He’s the legend! Great!

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        AMAZING!

        bookwormcentral replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          buggirl13 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          LOVE IT!

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        THE BEST ONE YET

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        That’s fine! I understand, don’t worry!

          delilahkitty replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Bry’s right!😊

          anastasiaofwoodsbeyond866 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          No problem! Ur a great writer and great writing takes time 😊

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        that’s alright, don’t worry!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Oh that’s fine! *remembers I haven’t posted my RP chapter for three weeks* You are WAY more consistent than I am XD And school makes everyone busier, I understand!

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing

        everneveracademy replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Don’t worry about it, I completely understand. Take your time! ❤️

        jasmineever01 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        thats ok

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        bookwormcentral replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Awesome!

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        I love it!

          buggirl13 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          It’s awesome!!

        rayrayhannah replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Nice!

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        So pretty!

        effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        It really represents the school.

        alanasge replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        AH WOW i love it!!!

        anadilisawesome76 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing(Yes I did see the previous ones as welll)

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        AWESOME!

          patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          I love it!! You really captured the *magic* of it.

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        whoa that was amazing!

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Ooh, I love it!! For some reason, I always pictured Beatrix to look different than described. Soman said she had “Topaz eyes” which can be brown or blue. I always imagined her with brown hair and amber eyes. But I really liked this collage!

          patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Like this:…[Read more]

          cocostar replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Li always thought she had blue eyes and blonde hair

          cocostar replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          *I

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        hmm….she’s really pretty.

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          *doesn’t know what else to say*

          patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          I didn’t mean anything against your collage-I loved it!! The picture above is just how I imagined her.

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        aah this is so amazing!!!!!!

        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        oh yeah, i know! Yeah, my interpretation of characters varies a lot, sometimes i just can see it, sometimes i sit and imagine them and what they;re wearing, etc. I always imagined Bettina pale, red haired, and freckly when she’s actually brown haired.

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        cool!

        effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        That’s exactly how I imagined her, actually! I love it! Tag me!
        (Way too many exclamation points.)

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          of course! lol to the exclamation points, once i wrote like a 7 sentence paragraph and every single one ended with one lol

          effie replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          I feel like I have to point that out whenever I use too many. It sounds kind of . . . fake chipper, in my head. And wow, great job.

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Oooo I like it! I always had imagined her eyes as a topaz blue honestly, so this was nice!

        book-lover77 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Awesome!!!!!! And that was exactly how I imagined her (when I reached AWWP. Before she was a pretty dark haired girl with blue eyes.)

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing! I love it!

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        This collage perfectly pictures the elegance of Beatrix! Love it!

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        In 100% honesty my first image of her looked like bellatrix lestrange-

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          …wut
          lol

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        yes i made the name connection and i just can’t get bellatrix beatrix out of my head now xD

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        OoOoOooooooo! Noice!

        rayrayhannah replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        The four leaf clover is so pretty!

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        oOh awesome!!

        mithu4eva replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Who’s the girl? In the collage

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Maid Marian

        book-lover77 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Awesome I love it!!!!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Coolio! 😉

          patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Love it!!

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        cool!!!!!!!!!!

        cheesycrackerss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        aaaaaahhhh I don’t think I’ve ever asked to be tagged!! Tag me!

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          of course!

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        I think that’s awesome! Robin Hood holds a place in my heart because I was in a play titled The Many Disguises of Robin Hood and I played Luciana, the spoil bratty daughter of the Sheriff of Nottingham. It was the most fun I had on stage.

          buggirl13 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          (:

    poco posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 month, 3 weeks ago
        patronus16 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Aww, love it! I’m not a Jaric fan either, but this is cute!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Noice! I’m not for Jaric, but it’s still great!

        bryannahstevens replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Nice!

        anadilforever7 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        AEEEE I LOVE JARIC ITS SO COOLLLLL

        mithu4eva replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        This is cute. I like it, even though I’m not really a fan of Jaric. That’s a little too creepy for me (like Japeth and Aric together, because they are both evil, not because they are both guys.)

          poco replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          haha yeah. want to be tagged?

          buggirl13 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          I love Jaric!

        rayrayhannah replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Nice! I don’t love Jaric, but I do think we need more lgbtq in these books!

        evergirl391 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        cute! I love it!

        baguette101 replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        YES JARICC

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        ooh I’m not a Jaric fan but that’s super cool!!

        bookwormcentral replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        Love Jaric!!!!! (tbh i just need as many gay/lesbian ships as i can get)

          rayrayhannah replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

          Agreed

        rainbowlion replied 1 month, 3 weeks ago

        YAS!! This one is awesome!! Thanks for taking my recommendation!

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