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A CRYSTAL (I feel the crystal, obviously is Dovey’s magic ball.) of TIME (Wasn’t Dovey sick by the ball, maybe she did something she wasn’t supposed to do, like travel back. But at the end of QFG, we find out that now Agatha is in possession of the ball, and we know that she is running from being put in prison (with Tedros in the jail already),…[Read more]
Chapter Twentyfour: POV Adriel @fantsaycat1357 @electra @em0689 @thewitchyone @mizzie
It’s not like I’m under pressure, cause I’m not, but it feels like it. A hard rock resting on my shoulders and off balancing my posture. The only thing I knew has been taken away, and the thing I most fear is turning into a reality.
A clean white world, that…[Read more]
Nice!! I really like how short it is. How it sums up Adriel’s emotions in like 200 words.
Chapter Twentythree: POV Danica @em0689 @electra @thewitchyone
Lacey’s hair was a rich shade of mahogany. It flowed in waves to adorn her glowing, porcelain-like skin. Her cheeks were a flushed a soft pink that cherried the clean white under her eyes. Lacey’s eyes, framed by long lashes, were a bright, midnight blue, that seemed to brighten the…[Read more]
Chapter Twentytwo: POV Lacey @em0689 @fantasycat1357 @electra
Hi, I’m @franzzie13 and this is my twenty second chapter. I haven’t posted for a few days because I’ve had homework overload. I hope you enjoy this chapter. I will leave a question at the end for you guys to answer.
My prince, my beautiful, sweet prince, my abusive, violent princ…[Read more]
Sorry I forgot to add the question at the bottom.
The question is – *drumroll* –
What is Lacey’s prince’s name?
I think it’s the guy named Blue Beared (I’m not so sure if he’s the one who killed like um…. how many of his wives) I think it’s wrong or its correct
So good! I love your story so far! Maybe once we move on to a different RP level where we have to team up to write a story, maybe we could work together… if you want… this is kinda weird saying this, so…. yeah.
Chapter Twentyone: POV Danica @em0689 @electra @fantasycat1357
Lacey has always been a Miss Congeniality, she accepted me for who I was … who I am. I was branded Evil, my title said it all, Danica Herrington of Bloodbrook.
My Pa was a rogue pirate, my Ma was a powder monkey, meaning she kept all the guns and explosives with her. Sometimes she b…[Read more]
Nice Chapter! I was like “*gasp*, NO!* because your chapters are soooooooooooooooo good. Really liked the parts with the mother.
Obviously Agatha and Tedros get married, see Hester’s invitation.
And if that isn’t proof enough the pages when it says Ever After and Nevermore, that’s Agatha and Tedros at their wedding, Agatha is wearing the same ruby necklace she wore at the circus of talents. And isn’t that Sophie for Nevermore? Wearing that crown, Sophie even stated herself…[Read more]
1) Yes, it’s obvious Agatha and Tedros are getting married.
2) No, it could be a different necklace, and those two in the Ever After picture don’t really look like them to me…
3) Sophie wouldn’t go to Nevermore. You get eternal solitude as well as infinite power there, but Sophie needs Agatha and Tedros in her life–also, she craves attention…[Read more]
Chapter Twenty: POV Adriel @em0689 @electra @fantasycat1357
Hi I’m @franzzie13 a few twist for next time. And I’ll leave a question at the end that I hope you guess will answer.
“I’m scared Danica.” Tears spilled onto Lacey’s cheeks.
There was silence, Danica sat there comforting Lacey. The two of them sat for a while…[Read more]
I unsteadily cling onto a nearby tree. My stomach flips and I bend over and dry-retch. A ***** came over me, possessed my body. I waited for something to happen in a bated breath. Suddenly I’m spinning rapidly, I drop to the ground. I turn my head to see the same forest around me, but in a dimmer light. I spin my whole body around, I hear a girl s…[Read more]
Chapter Eighteen: POV Adriel @em0689 @electra @fantasycat1357
Hi I’m @franzzie13 and I’ve got into the habit of writing short chapters … which I hate … but hopefully an amazing next chapter will come out of this dunce!
A tingle runs up my spine, that sends me into a fit of uncontrollable shivers. The thing that worries…[Read more]
This a cool chapter but I have a question there’s a word that has **** instead of words so what was the word?
This is really good but I haven’t been reading the other chapters that carefully(I have a lot of extracurricular homework) so can you please summarise the plot up in a few sentences for me? Thanks.
So basically when a child between the ages of 12 and 16 want to enter SGE they have to go through this initiation. And only children with gifts get in, if they make it through the trial. Basically Dean Sophie hates Adriel’s parents. (Who are still unknown.) And Dean Sophie has taken all the gifted students out of the trial and left Daisy and…[Read more]
It’s ok … I bored anyway, it’s my dad’s 50th (btw I’m younger than 10) and he and my mum have been gone all day. So I’m home alone with my older brother and my dog. Now I’ve decided I’m going to watch Home and Away, my favourite show. Hope I explained it well, I just posted my next chapter … hope u read it.
The front cover was so deceiving!! It looked like Agatha and Tedros at their wedding … but it wasn’t 🙁 🙁 🙁 … And when was Sophie ever like that??