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@ms-granger @DaughterofAthena21, Moviestarawesome445
I’d love to join.I’m a huge Harry Potter fan I’ve read all the books and seen all the films.
1. Luna, Neville, ginny there main characters that don’t get enough credit
2. Harry and Ron were originally going to crash into the black lake and be helped by merpeople
3. Dean Thomas is a half…[Read more]
Very good! We’re not sure when the scores will come out, but thank you for your interest. Can’t wait!
Yello
Sorry I haven’t written in a while and sorry it’s so short I did try to make it longer but it didn’t really work. And don’t expect anything from the 8th to 22nd as I’m on holiday. Anyway hope you like it
Chapter 10
Threats
POV Marcos
“ you could of killed her, she not use to the difficulties in life “ roared Marcos pining Edmond to the wall
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Sorry I didn’t post this sooner but her it is hope you like it
Chapter 9
Punishments
POV Alexandra
Marcos dragged Alex out the room . When they got out the room two other guards took Alex from Marcos they obviously didn’t trust him to take her to the torturers, this thought made here shiver. The two guards dragged her down corridor after cor…[Read more]
Woah…….
Oh my gosh! Thanks for tagging me!
Chapter 8
Dangers
POV Alex
****! Alex threw the door to her room open ran in and flung herself on her bed . She started to sob it’s so unfair why dose the male get to “own” there wife she thought. Luna may be ahead of all the other countries but it still is stuck in the dark age.
Alex lay there thinking about this and didn’t notice the door op…[Read more]
Oh no! Edmond can’t boss her around like that! I need to know what happens in the next chapter! Please post soon!
POST SOON PLS
This is SO GOOD! Please tag me!
Chapter 7
The funeral
POV Alexandra
Alex was stat next to her mother in the throne room. Thousands of people had gathered to honour the memory of her father. That was a lie all the top citizens of Luna wanted to do was show of there new morning clothes, which didn’t even look like morning clothes. Alex herself felt pride when she put hers on.…[Read more]
Good job! Now I’m really wondering what is up with her mom.
Please note this bio is only to give more information and this character won’t be having many POV
Name: Rose baker
Age: 15
Gender: female
Nationality:Luna
Parents: her real parents are unknown. Her foster parents are bakers
Siblings: none that she knows about
Personality: she’s intelligent and determined
Flaws : will do what ever it takes to…[Read more]
Interesting……..
Chapter 6
The getting ready
POV Alexandra
It had been a day since Alex’s mother had broken the sad new and today it was the funeral. Alex had cried herself to sleep that night. She had had dreams of her mother smiling face as her father died right in front of her . Alex’s maid nocked on the door then entered . Alex rolled over and placed her ***…[Read more]
This was wonderful! Maybe just fix your errors before you post so it’s easier to read. I think you misspelled a few things. But other than that, this chapter was amazing!
Okay thanks for the advice
Chapter 5
Sad news
POV Alexandra
It was three days after the ball. Alex was just finishing her breakfast and was thinking about her father. Alex’s father had been admitted into the medic centre there still hadn’t been any news ,well there probably had been news but no one had told her. Just then her maid walked in “your mother wants to see you”…[Read more]
Oohh, I like this chapter! Poor Alex tho! Keep writing!
Please tag me
Course I’ll tag you
yaaaas! so great!
Chapter 4
The ball
POV Alexandra
Alex’s father led her to the entrance of the ball room. Then disappeared into a room leading door to the ball . Alex took a deep breath and tried to calm her nerves. Suddenly a voice cried “presenting princess Alexandra white of Luna “. The doors to the ball room opened and Alex stepped out onto the stairs …[Read more]
Oh man! No offence, but I absolutely hate her mom! Wait, did her mom do it?! Did her mom poison her father?!
She might have done
Well, it was a great chapter! You’re good at rp! Please post another chapter soon! I really like this story so far!
Thank you
Will you ever come to the UK in a tour again
Please come to Australia! That would be amazing
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