My Ranking Points
Um . . . I’m new to this and it’s my first try at fan fiction . . . please comment your thoughts. I probably won’t be able to do very many updates.
Amira sat up in her large pink canopy bed, the light shining through her windows prompting her to rub her eyes. She yawned, then swung her legs over the side of her bed and stood up.
Fluffy slippers awaited her and she slipped her feet into them, walking around her huge pink-themed room and turning on the lights.
All her life she’d been prepared for the School for Good and Evil, but she was thirteen and still hadn’t been chosen. Was there something wrong with her? She didn’t think so . . . She was a princess, a perfect pink princess with all of her manners and etiquette training finished. She wasn’t mean-spirited or angry or nervous or sarcastic. She was perfect.
Her parents couldn’t figure out why she hadn’t been taken either. They chalked it up to the fact that their kingdom, Maplebeech, was obscure and typically not noticed by people coming by, but they’d sent in so many letters that it seemed impossible she hadn’t been picked yet.
What were they doing wrong?
Sorry if you guys don’t like it, I haven’t had much experience with fan fiction. Trying my hand at it since yours are so interesting!
Maybe next time make it a little longer?
And make a bio for your characters?
I really like it! Plz tag me, but can you make it a little longer?