My Ranking Points
I know at this point it’s a bit boring, but I promise to try and make it more exciting and less typical of a princess story.
*Timeskip brought to you by Hester*
Amira ran through the huge garden, her feet flying as if they didn’t even touch the ground. She grabbed at blades of grass as she passed, but caught none.
Sometimes she fantasized about running away to the School for Good and Evil, sneaking in all by herself. Her parents would probably disapprove of her wild dreams, and she knew they were foolish, but she didn’t want to stay cooped up in Maplebeech her whole life, and she wasn’t stupid. She knew her odds of getting picked at this point were little to none.
Still, she hoped to be taken one day. She’d read the Ever Never Handbook cover to cover, soaking in the uniforms and alumni and funny comics by Professor Hort (she hoped to meet him one day), and she felt that each part she read brought her a little closer to the school. It was like . . . like the quotes helped her get to know Agatha and Tedros (though after reading The Tale of Sophie and Agatha, she couldn’t help thinking he was a bit conceited and puffed-up) and Anadil (whom she loved). She knew it was silly.
But she still couldn’t help it.
She reached a huge oak tree and located the different branches protruding from the thick trunk, scanning it for access points. It was a tree she’d climbed many times before, but she never stopped really enjoying it.
Amira grabbed the first low branch and swung her leg up to push herself up onto the broad branch. She was barefoot, like usual. At least, when she was in her garden. She propped herself up on the branch, climbing higher and higher.
Finally, she reached the last accessible branch. She gazed out at the small kingdom that would soon be hers.
But maybe she could escape it before then.
It’s a bit formal and typical of a princess’s story at this point . . . but like I said, I’ll try to fix that 🙂
She’ll end up at SGE . . . no surprise there . . .
Omg, such a cliffhanger! Great details! Please tag me! And also, you should do a bio for your character. Here is a template of what it should look like.
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Again, great job!