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Hi! Writer’s block strikes again! I hope you enjoy this chapter.
CHAPTER THIRTY-SIX
Eliza / Third Year
Eliza watched as Charles attempted to apologize to Raven. She was nervous knowing that the first time she had tried to apologize to him it had not gone well. And Charles had done things that were probably worse than what Eliza had done.…[Read more]
I like it! Great, surprising chapter!
Love it, suspenseful!
please tag me!
That was amazing geek!
Loved it!
Sorry I haven’t in a while, I had MAJOR writer’s block. Hope you enjoy this chapter! Also I think I’m going to end this story at Chapter 40 because I finally figured an ending. Just wanted to let you guys know.
CHAPTER THIRTY-FIVE
Raven / First Year
Parent visiting day was in less than a week and everyone in school seemed excited for it, excep…[Read more]
Ahhhh! Omg ! I’m so sad it’s ending so soon! Great story tho!🙃
ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh. It’s time for some Dad time!
“If you hurt him i will end you”, I’m gonna say that to my older sister’s boyfriend next time i see him, lol. That was great though!!
Amazing TAG me
Ok, this chapter doesn’t feel like my best work but honestly writing Charles right now is sooo hard. If anyone has any tips PLEASE put them in the comments. I want to redeem him (kinda) but I obviously don’t want to let any of the stuff he did slide.
CHAPTER THIRTY-FOUR
Eliza / Third Year
Eliza looked up at Charles, not bothering to hide her…[Read more]
It was great!
Okay, so that was amazing as always Geek, but i have a few ideas for Charles’ redemption
1. If you wrote a chapter in Eliza’s POV and it was the Trial by Tale and a Never was about to stab Eliza in the back for some reason but then Charles jumps in front of the knife therefore taking the blow that was meant to end her life which is something that,…[Read more]
Thank you, those are all great ideas, I’ll probably use one of them or maybe a combination.
OMG YASSSS THAT WAS SOOOO GOOOD!
I NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. TELL ME NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome chapter as always!
Thanks for tagging, THAT WAS GREAT!
Hi, really fun to write another Raven and Kevin date!
CHAPTER THIRTY-THREE
Raven / First Year
The first few days after everything happened with his Dad, Raven barely wanted to get out of bed. Kevin had to practically drag him out. Granted, it’s not like he regretted it or anything like that but it hurt so much that his own family didn’t want him…[Read more]
So sweet!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! they are literaly the cutest couple ever!
Loved it!
EXACTLY!!!!!
so far… BEST chapter!!!!!!
Hi! Hope you guys enjoy this chapter!
CHAPTER THIRTY-TWO
Eliza / Third Year
Eliza felt a pit in her stomach. Her mind kept wandering back to what she did to Raven back in first year. She had asked Charles to apologize but she hadn’t even apologized herself.
She walked up to Raven nervous that he wouldn’t forgive her if she brought it up. But she…[Read more]
Ooh! A cliff hanger!
i hope that didn’t ruin their relationship
nice chapter!! i cant wait for the next raven pov
Past is Present and Present is Past. Sorry, just felt like it. But in this case, it’s true! Awesome chapter!
SKSKSK AND SHE OOP AND SHE OOP
Hi! Feedback is always welcome!
CHAPTER THIRTY-ONE
Raven / First Year
Raven nervously followed Professor Espada to Dean Dovey’s office, where his dad was waiting. The only reason that his dad would be there was if he knew about Kevin. And if he knew about Kevin then things were not going to end well.
Professor Espadad opened the door r…[Read more]
Woah. Love
Wow. God job Raven for standing up for yourself.
Go Raven !
Eliza wHY U DO THIS
Go Raven!
But, why Eliza whyyyyyy?
YAS RAVEN
Ugh! I thought I liked Eliza, now I’m not so sure. Great choice, Raven!!!
Woah. This is so good like seriously, could I be tagged in the next on you write please?.
No problem
darn it Raven you made me cry
GO RAVEN!!!!!!!!! whoooo Dont let anyone tell you that you cant be whoever you want!!!!
Great chapter and story! Go Raven! I don’t like Eliza that much anymore…
Hi! Before I start this chapter I wanted to say that Charles is a complicated character. He did a lot of bad things and he is only just feeling remorse now. No one is obligated to forgive him. Everyone can come to their own conclusion.
CHAPTER THIRTY
Charles / Third Year
Charles was escorted by a wolf guard down to the Doom Room. The Nevers…[Read more]
I love that
I have come to a conclusion!
I am still mad at Charles because he beat up Raven and Kevin, and was a j.erk to Tia and Eliza.
But I do feel a teensy bit bad for him, cuz I’m pretty sure I figured out something about him that I don’t want to say just in case your waiting to reveal it later.
This chapter was great as usual @GEEK
angel is big sadness for charles
Such a good chapter!
Love it! Thanks for tagging!
Hi! If you want to be tagged ask in the comments!
CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE
Raven / First Year
After being caught after the Snow Ball, no one really looked at Raven or Kevin the same way. Of course everyone knew they’d been dating and people have seen them kiss but for some reason this felt different.
Raven and Kevin made their way back to their w…[Read more]
Oh my gosh noooo. His dad can’t be there! I love it! Great Job!
Oh snap. Gotta love some good old family drama
Woah. That’s all I can say at the moment.
Oooo. This means DRAMA
DRAMA INCOMING!!!! AHHHHHH!!!! ALERT! ALERT! Raven really doesnt need this now. UGH!
… oof raven… RUN!!!!! you too kevin!!!! hide!!!!
i literally just went through and favorited ever chapter in this story bc of how much i love it. It. Is. AMAZING!!!!!
Hi, guys, the next Eliza chapter will be in the POV of Charles. Excited for that!!
CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT
Eliza / Third Year
Eliza and Tia were hanging out in their dorm room when Kelsey came barging in, holding a note.
“Charles told me to give this to you, Eliza,” Kelsey said, “Do you want me to burn it instead?”
“No, no, I want to see. Mayb…[Read more]
I almost feel bad for Charles.
Almost.
But then I think of what he did to Raven and Kevin and Tia and Eliza and want to punch him in the face.
But then I think of Charles’ dad and…
Ugh!
Brain decide if you hate him or not!
Sorry.
Chapter was amazing, as usual. Thx for tagging and pls keep tagging!
same lol. should we like him or hate him? ok srry but im going with hate =. he beat up people for being gay.
Yeah I have to agree.
*whispers
i haven’t read all of the chapters but i don’t want to hate charles bc even tho he is a homophobic piece of shoot that is what society has made him and he doesn’t deserve to be hated for doing what most people think instead of us trying to educate our youth with more accepting mindsets
true but still. he punch people for being gay.
Okay. This almost makes me feel sorry for Charles. almost. But then i think about everythingthat he’s done and then i go, nah, he deserves it. Which i realize that makes me sound like a terrible person but:
1: He kissed Tia without her permission which you should NEVER do.
2: He beat up Raven and Kevin because of his homophobia which i hate him…[Read more]
i agree with every single one
Ah. Good old fashioned remorse.
Okay im caught up and I agree
Hi, hope you enjoy this chapter!
CHAPTER THIRTY-SEVEN
Raven / First Year
Raven panicked, turning around to find his dad and his grandma standing behind him. His dad could see the fear in his eyes and he smiled.
“Have you seen your sister, Raven? We were talking to her for quite some time before she left to find you,” he asked. Of course tha…[Read more]
Darn it Raven, you made me cry again.
Yes Rapunzel! You go queen!
oh my god that was an amazing chapter thanks for tagging as always!
Omg I love this so much. Me and my friends all think this RP is really special, especially since my two closest friends are both Lesbian ( not with each other but, still Lesbian )
Aww thank you, that means a lot.
Cool
KAVIN! KAVIN! KAVIN! KAVIN!