My Ranking Points
Apperance: Blond hair, hazel eyes, average pink lips, slim, sweet face
Charicter traits: sweet, caring, perceptive, humble, loyal, persuasive, people pleaser, somewhat clingy.
Backround: lived with mother and father who were in charge of entertainment centers in the kingdome of Lohalla. Her sister Halena has already attended the school for good with the highest ranks possible and is already on her fourth year quest in the kingdom of Mandalori with her prince Joe haling the peoplefrom a toxic disease. Elora got the acceptance letter at the age of 14 to start her year at the school for good.
coolio!! i know that you mentioned much info abt Elora in her backstory and personality, but it would help if you put those info in separate categories like this:
Talent (only if you want to thooo this is optional)
Fingerglow (also optional!)
Backstory*** (which is great that you already included it!! most RPers don’t realize how important the backstory is when they first write a bio 🙂 )
overall, good start!!