Why should good always win Do you think it’s fair?
Hard question.
Wait, Good doesn’t always win. Before The Evil School Master murdered his brother, Good AND Evil won. They both had glorious victories.
They were once balanced.
Good and Evil were even. Sometimes Good won, sometimes Evil one. After the Great War, when the Evil Brother killed his Good brother, the Storian punished him and all Evil to lose for 200 years. That is, until the arrival of Agatha and Sophie.
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Chapter One-
I lucked out yesterday. When you see the mad Queen Of Heart’s descendant, hope you luck out too! After all, Leanne is just a bit- Coo-Koo, if you know what I mean! Anyway, I was hiding behind the rosebushes of her royal garden near the entrance of her castle when one of her servants, Mary Jane R, walked out, looking like she was in a…[Read more]
Nice! 🙂
Cool. It could be a bit longer, but it’s good.
Cliffhanger! but cool! 🙂
Cool nice job.
Nice job!
Cool! 😀
The Beginning
OH WHY OH WHY OH WHY?!
I did not get it. Yesterday I was all up like a pretty princess and now I’m a witch? That doesn’t even make sense! I mean, now I’m on the run from her! I can’t even believe that princess banished me from her castle! I don’t want to go to jail, yet that’s excactly what will happen to me if Queen Melody will do…[Read more]
Do you have a character and bio. Overall, I find it interesting (your story)
Interesting do you have a bio? 😉 either way its really nice
Cool story
Nice. It just needs to be longer, but good job. 😉
awesome! 🙂
Nice prologue 🙂
Nice!
Anyone else think the part about Sophie and Rafal not having a happily never after was a bit unfair?
Sophie did have her Happily Ever After.
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Yeah
She did have her happy ending. And I really hope she’ll find her happily ever after with Hort!
I think Rafal is evil enough that she would be hurt one day for betraying her friends.
Sophie wasn’t pure evil. She just thought she was cause she wanted here happy ending. She is way better off with Hort. Rafal was just using her for his youth
I’ve said this so many times, but I want Hot.
Tbh i think she would be happier with Hort.