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The ride over to the Murmuring Mountains was a long one, the group of nevers only arriving late in the afternoon. Ellie came out of the obsidian carriage first, the evening fog licked up her legs, ending in the middle of her thighs. She offered her hand up to Christine who took it with a smile, stepping out with slightly more control…[Read more]
Yeah, I was checking my motifs when I got this within the seconds that it had been posted
Not sure what the ship name is for Ellie and Christine, but they’re honestly so cute. Good writing!
A buzz ran through the air of the school, eyes wide and smiles bright. Leaders stood tall and proud, helpers and henchmen were nervous and morgrifs tended not to show their faces. But nonetheless, they were all excited. Excited to flex the muscles they’d grown in the past three years, excited to no longer have the school’s sup…[Read more]
The characters are cool! Give me the next chapter immediately!
I think your new chapters are great; I like Chrillie the best, but the one with Flynn was so mysterious and this seems really good!
I like it a lot! Is this part going to be following them more, or Chrillie, or both?
That was great, I can’t wait to learn more about both of them!!
Oooh they seem interesting. I’m curious about what their interaction with Chris and Ellie will be like
oh my gawd I love this, I’ve left so many hintsss you guysss
(this is still the same story guys,we’ll get back to Chrillie soon)
I’m trying to think, maybe spelling the nmes backwards will get me there?eilsi and norola… hmmm
um okay? none of my characters are named chris, I just have a christine
a bit too much of a stretch to be interesting, considering her nickname isn’t even chris
jeez im sorry i was just making a statement no need to be rude!
Hmm, you said newISH characters. Time to do some sluething!!
hey gwen, I’m really really sorry but could you please untag me? I love this story but i have so many things getting tagged, but can you please stop tagging me? I’m really sorry.
Elliotte and Christine sat alone on the balcony of Ellie’s room, relishing in each other’s presence. Ellie kept one arm anchored on Christine’s waist, rubbing comforting circles into her side with her thumb.
The moon was swollen, a cut from the skin of the world, revealing the white bone underneath. The blood wept out in the form…[Read more]
this is truly amazing, I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Awwww that’s such a beautiful scene, I love the mood that it sets.
omg yesss! so glad they’re together for their quests. Chrissie!
The winter theme of the ball was meant to celebrate the Evers, but more and more it felt as though it stood to remind everyone of Christine’s icy victory. The spiked crown stood proudly atop the never’s caramel locks
Grey met blue in a passionate gaze between Elliotte and Christine. Ellie’s hands lay firmly on Christine’s hips, p…[Read more]
Ahhh I loved it! So glad you started if back up. Love the ‘win’ ‘one’ line XD
YYYyEEEESSSS!!! CHRILLIE!! Thank you so much for writing more!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Okay so in relation to my story about Ellie and Christine, I have finally figured out the plot of part two. I’ll be posting the first chapter of it soon 😀
yay for Chrilie! Yay for also Cassy and Flynn! (I love the name Flynn. I used it in one of my stories a while ago and was surpised you did too.)
“Hello. I’m trying to find the music room 27, but I’m having a bit of difficulty,” His accent was odd, one Cassy couldn’t recognize, but it didn’t take her long to realize why he spoke that way. He pointed down at a black and white map of the school with a long, pale finger.
Cassy was taken back by his presence, by the fact she co…[Read more]
Word spread quickly about the new student, like wildfire in summer. Cassy heard his name was Flynn through the gossipping students, but people started calling him Fin teasingly. She found herself musing which corner of the school he belonged to. She doubted he did circus, leaving music, drama, art, and dance.
“My guess is some p…[Read more]
Yes…yes!!! You are such a amazing writer Gwen (I bet a milion people have told you that)
Chapter one: (tell me if you want to be tagged!)
History was always a drag. People didn’t care how we came to this self-proclaimed utopia, they cared that we were here, and that was that. The History teachers struggled to find topics that would interest the students, but Cassy thought Mr Hayton did a pretty good job. Pandemic was a new word for m…[Read more]
Ahhh Ioved it! Can’t wait to find out more about the atargatis
thank youuu. I don’t like this story as much as I like Elliotte and Christine’s, but knowing myself if I only write one story for too long I’ll get bored and I don’t want that to happen
Yeah that makes sense! I’d be happy to write a story with you at some point, some of them really take of *wink wink* Felix and Oliver *wink wink*
yeah that seems cool. I mean I offered to write a few stories with you but you didn’t really care at the time
I was really busy then, but now with quarantine and what not I’m freed up
Nice! I liked Elliote’s and Christine’s better, like you, but this is still really good!
So this post is in relation to my story (Elliotte and Christine). The most recent chapter I posted will be the last and I’m considering doing a part two for their story, but I want to move onto different writing projects in the meantime. A couple of people have already asked to be tagged for my future writings, so if you also want that, feel free…[Read more]
YES AWESOME! Can’t wait for your future work! And romance is great, I like any genre really! Mysteries are fun as well. 😀 <333
I’ll read anything that you write! I am the same as Cove, I like any genre! But my favorite is mystery, romance or adventure. I will like to be tagged for any other story you write.
I loved your last story, and I will love to be tagged for any future ones! 😀
Gwen, you are such an amazing writer then I know I will love anything you write. I love romance, but I also like thriller/fantasy genres. And yeah, mysteries are great too!
@merqueen23 I love romance too, but I also like thriller/fanasty too! I like love fanasty and fiction, like I never read non-fiction. My favorite series is His Dark Materials. And I am also a book nerd 🙂
alrighty! thank you guys for your input
FYI, I already have a new story idea I plan on pursuing. It involves romance, fantasy and to more specific, mermaids, well in this case a merman
Chapter twelve: (I wanna say that I’m sorry this chapter took so long. I got a bit stuck and considered giving this story up. But then I saw @YESITSANASTASIA‘s chapter inspired by mine and it just made me want to continue writing for you guys, so credit to her lol)
The school watched through the talents with amusement, none too serious or good,…[Read more]
That was really good! I love the way you use similes to add more description to your piece. Well done!
(and I’m glad I motivated you, I was looking forward to this! 😀 )
YASSSSSSS! THIS JUST MADE MY DAY EVEN BETTER THAN IT ALREADY WAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your chapters. I just admire your vocabulary and the way you put it in your context. A writer-in-the-making! Im currently writing my second chapter and I have seen you comment some very good constructive criticism so Id appreciate it if I could get some.Once again, your writing REALLY inspires me so DONT STOP
Happily never after. They could not be any sweeter together!! Gwen you are such an amazing writer, and I have loved every single chapter!!!!
Thank you guys so much for reading! I think I’m going to end the story here. I did have some other stuff planned for them but this seems like a logical end to the story. Tell me what you guys think
Nooo don’t end it! I want to see more! Pleaseeeee your such a good writer Gwen don’t end it now
*puppy dog eyes*
haha I might make a part two one day, but for the moment i think I want to move onto other writing projects (I’d be happy to tag you for those if you want)
I haven’t even read the rest of this story cause I haven’t been on in so long, but its reaaaallly good! Tag me for your next RPs or stories pls!