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The good brother
And there they were, Rafal in all his angst glory, waistcoat and all, Rhian taking a sip from his tea in a pair of old overalls. To this day it still confuses the pair how they could ever be twins since they were quite literally opposites, but genetics will be genetics.
Rafal wore his typical dark clothes with fancy…[Read more]
I love the chickens.
Absolutely chef’s kiss.
Yes. Just yes.
Also, I noticed a typo (perhaps?) in the phrase where it says
‘Rhian couldn’t keep the smile off my face’, I’m assuming you meant ‘his face’?
Also, still going with tradition, my favourite phrase was definitely
‘After a few moments, Rhian spoke. “Yes, on one condition,” Rhian watch…[Read more]
This is awesome! And XD the chickens… I’m really getting a feel of their personality even though the chapters aren’t very lengthy, and the descriptions are great as well. Amazing story!
I’m definitely feeling something from both of the brothers, both of them different. I I’ve the description! Amazing chapter!!
The good brother
When you think of two infinitely powerful sorcerers meeting, you think of dark clouds, rainy skies and bitter winds. However, the reality of it was quite the opposite. The breeze was sweet, the sun streaming and the birds chirping.
Rhian would’ve preferred if this meeting waited a day or two, as his favourite hen (…[Read more]
Here we go with tradition, favourite phrase was
‘The memory of the two of them as children constantly trying to scare the other brought a smile to Rhian’s face – though Rhian was hardly ever the winner of those games.’
‘When you think of two infinitely powerful sorcerers meeting, you think of dark clouds, rainy skies and bit…[Read more]
So I’ve been very busy lately, I’m not sure too many people have noticed because I’m pretty sure most people hate me because of what happened with cove, or are at least worried to talk to me.
Again, i don’t think many people really noticed or more importantly cared, but I haven’t been writing lately. But i still want to. What normally drives me…[Read more]
I did actually notice your disappearance and I’m glad you’re back! I’ll always be here if you need someone, I’m not the best with advice but I’m a great listener! If you do decide to continue writing, I can’t wait to read them!
I was wondering where you went! I would love to read your writing. If you’re continuing.
If there is anything you need, you can always tag me and we can talk. ♥
woah what? i don’t think anyone’s talking bad about you or anything. and yeah i did notice the lack of writing lately, sometimes i would spoe in your activity to see if there was any new writing (i needed writing tips lol) and i wouldn’t see anything
struck me as weird.
and i really enjoy your writing, so if / when you start it back up again…[Read more]
I literally have no clue what happened between you and Cove but I haven’t seen anyone talking behind your back. And yes, I would totally read your writing!
im so glad to hear that you guys still want to read what I write! I’m about to post a story I’ve been working on in my spare time (its about the good brother) so ill make sure to tag you
Awww, gwen, honestly- I really did notice you were gone- I always would check your activity for anymore of your written work and it was unfortunate not seeing anything else written. Sort of as if I was missing something. I wanted to like tag u or something and ask if everything was okay but then I thought that may seem nosy and obviously you have…[Read more]
oh thank you so much @LIFEASABOOKWORM, that really made my day
hey @cocostar, you mentioned me somewhere but i can’t seem to find it, could you help me?
ignore this if it doesn’t happen but for whatever reason i feel like the open chat is going to come back relatively soon (I’m just posting this so if it does happen i can officially tell people im a psychic lol)
I’m gonna favorite this so I can check back on it later and see if it came true
9000 pointssss whoop whoop
The smell of the valley drifted through the trees, lingering in every inch and pore of the surrounding forest. The woods collectively took in a deep breath, lulled into a blind delirium by the intoxicating nature of the smell. This, though making most creatures of the woods blissful, was ultimately disastrous for more than a few of those…[Read more]
so great, I love it! (just one note, “you hunt, or are hunted” are you TRYING TO MAKE A REFERENCE TO UNDERTALE OR IS IT JUST MEEEE???)
L O V E L Y OMG YES I LOVE THIS
Hehe favourite phrase as always, this time I have two,
‘In the woods, the rules are very simple: you hunt, or are hunted.’
‘Of course, you’d assume that the monsters would then know to stay away from the sweet smells, to concentrate on the gritty taste of meat – the hunt. Or at least, that’s what you’d assume.…[Read more]
Yes!! This is amazing– love it! (I agree with Shade on the two favorite phrases)
Ahhhh, Gwen, you continue to absolutely astound me with such gorgeous writing! I will forever be in your debt for literally inspiring me to write with such deepness. It’s vvvvvv good. Never stop writing.
Ahhh that was great, I love how you can write even the smallest things and yet they can have so much meaning behind them!!!
Beautiful as always Gwen!!
*Hands Italian ice*
We got these a couple days ago, they’re actually pretty good.
Your writing is awesome, and please tag me for those! I would love to see more of your writing
*brings all my tea cups*
*brings my ramen and my boba*
*i take out a lovely floral patterned teacup and smile serenely*
Now you don’t get my cookies, Jess hehe *dabs myself with a napkin and eats a cookie*
*i put out some pretty silver tea trays with fancy handles and those super cool tea towers with 3 tiers, all filled with scones and tiny sandwiches*
we feast now for tomorrow, we leave for the age-old hunt of the chicken
Noooo I wasn’t tagged
*Descends with my boba and mochi onto a blue, purple, and pink diamond-pattern picnic blanket and lays out food and tea*
I wasn’t tagged but I found it so I’m staying now teehee.
Tea would be lovely Eliot.
I wasn’t invited but I come baring boba and mochi, may I join in?
*I take out my frog and put him on my shoulder*
This is Naveen, but you may call him prince Naveen
Chapter four (part one):
Being on the exposed surface of Mars, or any planet other than Earth for that matter, was still an odd feeling. Out of the corner of Andromeda’s eye, she could see the edge of the Academy’s protective bubble. On the other side, was the small, block-like building, where 20 or so people watched the students through thick gla…[Read more]
Awesome chapter! My favourite phrase is ‘ The outer layer consisted of interweaving scales’.
BTW it also didn’t show in my notifications that I was tagged, quite strange.
ah I was wondering why no one was commenting, glad to know its not because people don’t like it lol
maybe we should bring this up with jun? it keeps happening
Well it’s good to hear other people’s opinions, I understand not everyone will like my stuff, but that’s ok.
I understand that not everyone will like my writing, if someone only likes horror and I write a fantasy story, I can’t expect this person to like my story. I will try to take your comments with my writing, though it is a bit difficult to not come to the conclusion that you are only saying this to try and hurt me when you make annoyed comments o…[Read more]
If someone is making hurtful comments report them to Jun and then say what they said to you, but saying hurtful comments back to them will not help!