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Annaliese stood in front of the seat next to Harriet. Normally in this class she’d sit next to Nicolas, but her prince could wait. Right now, she needed to secure the other aspects of her plan. He understood well, as he had done the same the week before to find his goofy and charming but not spotlight hogging best mate.
“Can I sit…[Read more]
wooo 10000 points
Two weeks into school and Annaliese still hadn’t found anyone to be her quirky best friend, the one who would humanise her but also not compete for the spotlight. That isn’t to say she made no progress during those weeks, in fact, she made quite a bit. She had cleared the way for her becoming the highest-ranked evergirl with Nic…[Read more]
this girl is a literal MASTERMIND. taking notes of the other girls and systematically planning out every move to create the best possible future for herself. that spells out genius oml. auditions? i am just blinded by how serious and analytical Annaliese is wdhejfjewgfkwehkfhqkh i want the next chapter rnnrnnrrnrnrnrnrn
PLEASE WRITE MORE A MONTH PASSED DO NOT PUT ME THROUGH THIS MISERY
Annaliese had become the new owner of the communal vanity in her dorm room. Her two roommates didn’t question it. It was a natural fit for Annaliese to be in control. Mentally she scolded herself for being so unflinching in her dominance over the other girls. It wasn’t feminine of her.
She watched her reflection closely for imp…[Read more]
why are u so good at writing, like why ahahahahahah the description is just absolutely exquisite – i could read ur writing all day and Annaliese is such an intriguing character, her perspective and thoughts seem quite calculating and observant. i liked the contrast between how she seemed perfect initially and then during the comparison with Briar,…[Read more]
Anneliese took her seat in the hall, carefully watching the girls around her, the way a hawk would its prey. She knew how to have the best chance of getting into a storybook and wasn’t going to waste any moment. She had spent her whole life studying fairytales and knew there were three things she’d need to get her own story.
A cute best fri…[Read more]
vvbsgurglyutrjefj i loved reading this and her thought process, tag me please – ur writing just absorbs me in oml jdegdeberbvrje
thanks! and sure ill tag you, also make sure to read the second part which has already been posted btw
ooo, i’ll read it right now, gwen! is ur plan to go to perth still running then?
actually no, the borders got closed at the last moment because of a few new cases in Sydney
aw, shucks – curse ye, fate! —> oh well 🙁 random question – have you ever tried or heard of biryani? i say this, because im making it whilst im typing at this very minute (i know, i can multi-task ahaha), as my mother wants me to learn to cOoK during this winter break ahhhhhh – so yh, ur staying at home – well, continue writing from the safety…[Read more]
i have heard of biryani actually! A group of boys in my class call themselves the biryani boys
seriously- “biryani boys” ahahahahah! i love that name, that has seriously made me chuckle – yh, i had to cut like 6 onions and i had tears running down my cheeks, it was not a fun experience – i also have my headphones on and am listening to music because vibing whilst ur cooking is just 🤗👌🏼 lets hope i dont burn myself
thank u so much 🙂 everybody shall marvel at my fine knack of bewitching the taste buds. it will be the best biryani that my family has ever tasted. that, or i just burn it, or it turns out very salty, or not at all salty beekegeedbe i once dropped an entire bowl of rice into the sink whilst i was trying to sieve them oops
The good brother
“You weren’t exaggerating about that harpy attack,” Rhian muttered, his eyes skimming over the school in front of him. The two castles looked more like half burned candles than actual castles. The castle on the left – a dull brown in colour – seemed to have it’s whole top half either burned or all together missing…[Read more]
the half burned candles is really funny to me idk why
it’s really good though
‘Cause it’s something immature people joke about, and by the way, thank you for the tag!
Cool! The burnt cancels tho-
I love how the chickens are such a big part of this, keep the awesome work up!
omg I loved it oh and old tradition, favourite one was,
‘“We’ll have to do some serious redecorating,” Rhian said, turning back to the castles, lifting up Missy (his now unapologetic favourite chicken) in his arms.’
missy is my favourite chicken too
Gwen, this is really good! I do love the little chicken addition, i think that’s really cute! I hope ur okay tho, its been a month, im sure ur caught up in ur life but just think of my comment as a ‘check-in’ lol
not me tearing up over this comment lol. Yeah, I’ve just been caught up in life but things do get difficult here and there, but your comment definitely made my day, thank you so much
Awww its fine! Yep, i understand, things do get difficult especially in our current situation! Im really glad that my comment made you feel happier, and ill always be checking on ur activity 🙂
hello – gwen im still checking up on u, its been a month since my last comment and i pretty much do still check ur activity periodically. i hope ur in a good state of mind and that u haven’t been too stressed about anything – well, i mean stress is always going to be a part of us humans but that’s beside the point. genuinely tho, how are u – i…[Read more]
you keep making my day man holy moly. I’m doing pretty well, nearing the end of the school year and then Im going to Perth during the school holidays. I’ve slowed down on writing and I’ve been barely doing it at all lately. I’m trying to get back into it buts its tricky. I know its egotistical but a big part of the reason i was able to write for…[Read more]
im really happy to hear that you’re doing well and wow, perth! that’s in scotland, right? that seems so exciting, and don’t worry, writing is something that seems to just fall into the abyss of our minds and just float up now and again – but don’t completely forget about it, even if its a few paragraphs about anything – i think writing about…[Read more]
Perth is actually in Australia lol. And yeah, every now and then I write a random paragraph or two but it just doesn’t feel fufilling, in the same way that long stories do. This is the first time in a long time that im not just jumping from story to story and I just don’t know what to do with myself. I have old projects which I’ve tried to go back…[Read more]
Perth is in australia?? Why’d I think it was in Scotland oml. I’m fairly bad at knowing about cities and geography etc aha ~ this is rather 💫 embarrassing💫 that must be hard tho, I always end up getting over-excited with one writing project/idea but after a while my writing adrenaline just vanishes and I end up scrapping the idea until I find a…[Read more]
I’m going to try and write more while I’m in Perth since I’m expecting to have a lot of free time. And yeah, I live in Australia, Sydney actually. There have been maybe seventeen COVID cases in NSW today so there’s a chance I won’t be able to go to Perth at all, so fingers crossed
The good brother
And there they were, Rafal in all his angst glory, waistcoat and all, Rhian taking a sip from his tea in a pair of old overalls. To this day it still confuses the pair how they could ever be twins since they were quite literally opposites, but genetics will be genetics.
Rafal wore his typical dark clothes with fancy…[Read more]
I love the chickens.
Absolutely chef’s kiss.
Yes. Just yes.
Also, I noticed a typo (perhaps?) in the phrase where it says
‘Rhian couldn’t keep the smile off my face’, I’m assuming you meant ‘his face’?
Also, still going with tradition, my favourite phrase was definitely
‘After a few moments, Rhian spoke. “Yes, on one condition,” Rhian watch…[Read more]
This is awesome! And XD the chickens… I’m really getting a feel of their personality even though the chapters aren’t very lengthy, and the descriptions are great as well. Amazing story!
I’m definitely feeling something from both of the brothers, both of them different. I I’ve the description! Amazing chapter!!
The good brother
When you think of two infinitely powerful sorcerers meeting, you think of dark clouds, rainy skies and bitter winds. However, the reality of it was quite the opposite. The breeze was sweet, the sun streaming and the birds chirping.
Rhian would’ve preferred if this meeting waited a day or two, as his favourite hen (…[Read more]
Here we go with tradition, favourite phrase was
‘The memory of the two of them as children constantly trying to scare the other brought a smile to Rhian’s face – though Rhian was hardly ever the winner of those games.’
‘When you think of two infinitely powerful sorcerers meeting, you think of dark clouds, rainy skies and bit…[Read more]
So I’ve been very busy lately, I’m not sure too many people have noticed because I’m pretty sure most people hate me because of what happened with cove, or are at least worried to talk to me.
Again, i don’t think many people really noticed or more importantly cared, but I haven’t been writing lately. But i still want to. What normally drives me…[Read more]
I did actually notice your disappearance and I’m glad you’re back! I’ll always be here if you need someone, I’m not the best with advice but I’m a great listener! If you do decide to continue writing, I can’t wait to read them!
I was wondering where you went! I would love to read your writing. If you’re continuing.
If there is anything you need, you can always tag me and we can talk. ♥
woah what? i don’t think anyone’s talking bad about you or anything. and yeah i did notice the lack of writing lately, sometimes i would spoe in your activity to see if there was any new writing (i needed writing tips lol) and i wouldn’t see anything
struck me as weird.
and i really enjoy your writing, so if / when you start it back up again…[Read more]
I literally have no clue what happened between you and Cove but I haven’t seen anyone talking behind your back. And yes, I would totally read your writing!
im so glad to hear that you guys still want to read what I write! I’m about to post a story I’ve been working on in my spare time (its about the good brother) so ill make sure to tag you
Awww, gwen, honestly- I really did notice you were gone- I always would check your activity for anymore of your written work and it was unfortunate not seeing anything else written. Sort of as if I was missing something. I wanted to like tag u or something and ask if everything was okay but then I thought that may seem nosy and obviously you have…[Read more]
hey @cocostar, you mentioned me somewhere but i can’t seem to find it, could you help me?
I think somebody was trying to mention you but they didn’t use the dash, so it didn’t work.
if it wasn’t working then i shouldn’t have gotten a notification about it?