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Hello everyone. This is not the long awaited first chapter, but this is a sneak peek as to what the bad guys are up to. Here are the tags:
Prologue Part 1:
“Did you do it?” Demanded a very cruel and very malicious lady.
“Your majesty, I tried, but he was too strong” A man whimpered.
“TOO STRONG? TOO STRONG? Are you telling me I hired someone who not only is a fool, but is TOO WEAK to do what is asked of him?” replied the queen.
“Perhaps he should be disposed of.” Said a new voice. A voice that made you want to run away. A voice that reminded you of your worst nightmares. And you could tell it was a males voice. “He could be working for them.”
“You are right. He should be disposed of. This man claims he is a Hunter, but yet, despite the life of him, he can’t do what we ask.” The Queen paused for a moment, “A hunter traps their prey so they can do what is needed. Take a look at cats. I bet they could do your job so easily.”
“Sorry my queen. It shall be better next time.”
“Leave, before I get mad”
“Y-Y-Yes my Queen. You shall win. I know you will.” The man ended his sentence more confidently.
And the man scurried out.
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What are your theories? What were they up to? And How does this connect to Ray? Comments are welcomed as well as constructive criticism. Thank you, and I hope I wasn’t a bore.
*** the typical story
we all know how it ends
He is alive
the queen and that voice dead
everyone is happy
well in real life nothings like that