hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 1 month ago

    Hi everyone. So a couple of years ago, there used to be a group RP here, called The Tribute. However, it eventually disbanded, leaving the story unfinished. It bothered me there was never an ending, so I’ve written an epilogue:

    “The Forgotten”
    (Tribute Story)
    Epilogue:
    So what happened next?
    No one knows.
    It may seem unnatural to follow a story…[Read more]

        agatha303 replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        To be honest, it’s been so long since I had this idea. Now I’ve grown as a writer and I see this was not my greatest work, it still saddens me this has to close, as it still has memories with me

        happilyeveraftergirl replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        This is soo good!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Incredible!!! This story was nearly over when I joined here, but I read and loved all of it!

        fairestofthemall replied 1 year, 4 months ago

        omg i remember this!!! awww this makes me so happy!!! that was like four years age omg haha

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 2 months ago

    Horrors
    Chapter 5:
    The ground was slushy.
    Other girls ran across, holding their skirts to keep the hems from getting wet and yelping when mud droplets leapt onto their shoes.
    But Diana was not other girls.
    She marched confidently through the rain-soaked grass as if it was the normal thing to do. Her shoes and dress were black, save for her yellow…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Ooh!! Another super cool chapter!! Great job!! (I might be annoying with this, but when will my character be introduced?)

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 1 month ago

          @nadea
          Thanks.
          I’ll introduce your character whenever you want

          nadea replied 2 years, 1 month ago

          You can introduce my character whenever you are able. In the next chapter is okay!! I love this story, and honestly can’t wait for my character to be in it!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 1 month ago

        Amazing!!
        Jade is probably my favorite

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 2 months ago

    Horrors
    Chapter 4

    “Do I look like Clarissa Dovey?”
    “No.”

    Jade leaned toward the door. Despite it being shut, she didn’t have to try too hard to hear the conversation inside. She squinted, imagining the scene in her mind’s eye:

    “Then what’s your damage?” not Clarissa demanded.
    The other speaker, an older man whose ****** features resemble…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Loved your POV! Also LOOOOOVED YOUR HEATHERS REFERENCES

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Fantastical! Fabulous! Marvelously amazing!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Amazing!!

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 2 months ago

    Horrors
    Chapter 3
    It was her first and last time running away, so she had to make it work.
    Her boots splashed through puddles, but that didn’t stop her. She didn’t care that the rain was pelting her, making her tight bun heavier or soaking through her clothing. She ran toward the thick fog ahead, skirts balled up in her fists to keep them fro…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Wow, this is cool!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Amazing!!

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Cool!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Fantastically SAFE!!!

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 2 months ago

    Horrors
    Chapter 2
    “Little shop, little shop of horrors, oh, oh, oh, no!”
    “Good morning Cicely! This is Chris in the Morning bringing you the latest news and ideas. It’s a beautiful November 5th morning up here in Alaska. Bundle up, ‘cause the winter chill has already begun. Ha ha! Thank you to Ed Chigliak for requesting that last song. I h…[Read more]

        lwal8924 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        I like thar

        nadea replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        This is super cool!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Amazing!!!

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Yay!!! I love your writing! I can tell this series is going to be a good one!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Ooh, I’ve been waiting for this chapter!! Fabulous!!!

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 2 months ago

    Hi friends!! I hope you still remember me! Recently I started a new RP called Horrors, which focused on Rose Audrey Krelborne and Tammy Stevens. I’ve decided to add 3 more main characters. So here are their bios:

    Name: Diana Beinecke
    School: Good
    Age: 16
    Parents: Wednesday Addams and Lucas Beinecke
    Appearance: Short black hair, peachy skin, dark…[Read more]

        hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        *that word was supposed to be muggles, not muggers

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Great bios!
        I don’t know where @bostonhirsez2 has been market but I’m sure she would’ve liked this!

        nadea replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Great bios!! I remember reading your story, and that I made a character to join. Here’s the bio, in case you need a reminder, or something like that:
        Name: Emma W. Fulgardt
        Appearance: She’s short, around 5’3″, with gray-blue eyes, golden-brown hair, and a heart-shaped face. She’s thin, but not too skinny.
        Age: 12
        Wears: Mostly dresses, usually…[Read more]

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Ooh! I love the contrast between the characters!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome!
        I actually almost screamed when I saw mention of Heathers…

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 3 months ago

    Horrors
    Chapter 1:
    She couldn’t sleep.
    Something just kept telling her to go to him.
    So she walked briskly through the alley, the blustery city wind blowing against her skimpy nightgown.
    She didn’t quite understand what she was feeling. After all, she was about to live happily ever after, but something about it didn’t feel right. Things hadn’…[Read more]

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        You know me so well XD
        Definitely want to be tagged!!!
        Oh gosh, the drama!!! I love it! You made me appreciate drama! I declare it a miracle!!

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This is excellent!! SAFE

        nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This is great! Who is writing the next chapter? Could you please ask me before you use my character in a chapter? Could I write a more in-depth backstory as to how Emma’s life was before Good, how she received her letter, etc? This is amazing so far!

          nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Ooh, also, can you continue to tag me in all future chapters, because I’m going to be in the story?

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          @nadea
          Of course. I was going to do some more Rose and add Tammy before I used Emma.

          nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          @Hannahtheeel

          I was just wondering… will I get a chance to write a few chapters? Is it like a group RP, where we take turns?

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This is great! I’m so glad your back on Level 1! I really missed your stories!
        Love how you included Esmeralda and Linor in this new series! They were good characters.
        Last thing, please tag me! I know I didn’t always comment on every chapter of your last story but I definitely read them. So please tag me!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Amazing!!!!

        ivypool2005 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Wow!

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 3 months ago

    Hello friends! Remember me? If not, my name is Hannah the Eel , and it’s nice to meet you. Last month I finished up my story Daughter of Oz and I realized that I want to write something else now. I have started working on a new story called “Horrors.” Here are my bios:
    Name: Rose Audrey Krelborne
    Age: 16
    Parents: Seymour Krelborne and…[Read more]

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This sounds so cool!!! I can’t wait to see where this goes!! 🙂
        I love how you connected your new story to the old one!

        nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Ooh! These are cool!! I’ve been looking for a roleplay collab… can I join? You’ll probably have to make some information for my character, such as if she’s friends with your character, but here is a pretty basic bio to start!

        Name: Emma W. Fulgardt
        Appearance: She’s short, around 5’3″, with gray-blue eyes, golden-brown hair, and a heart-shaped…[Read more]

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          @nadea
          I would be glad if you joined! Emma sounds great! The majority of the story will take place at the School for Good, do she’ll fit right in.
          Don’t worry. I won’t kill your character. From the idea I’m working from now, Horrors will be about two orphans from nonmagical backgrounds, who suddenly find themselves at the School for Good. While…[Read more]

          nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          That’s great, @hannahtheeel, but I’m not sure how this will work… will we take turns writing chapters, or you write and include my character, or…?

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        This sounds really cool! Would it be alright if I joined? Apologies if it’ll take me a bit to make my bio though.. I have a POV in another level I’m working on, so..

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Of course!

        nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Ooh, I read your first chapter! It sounds amazing!!! Can you post a bio for Hona-Lee, please?

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Ok!
          Name: Hona-Lee Hatter
          Parent: Siri Hatter
          Adopted sister: Rose Audrey Krelborne
          Appearance: green eyes, pale skin, chestnut curls, full pink lips
          Personality: bubbly, naive
          Age: 10
          Home: Wonderland
          Flaws: no filter, cursed (as explained in Daughter of Oz, Siri’s bloodline is cursed with internal darkness and madness)
          School: homeschooled

        nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Ok. Sorry, I’m just commenting to get some things cleared up. I’ve been wondering about these:

        1.) Will we take turns writing in the collab? I mean, will we take turns writing?
        2.) PLEASE, please, please ask before you use my character.
        3.) PLEASE follow my character’s personality. Emma is very, very smart, sweet, and sometimes sarcastic.

          hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          1. I was thinking us just writing when we feel like it and playing off of each other’s chapters.
          2. I’ll ask.
          3. Why would I differ?

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        I love it!!!
        And Little Shop of Horrors is great!

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 4 months ago

    Daughter of Oz
    Epilogue- Emeralda

    There is a girl I know. She has porcelain skin and bright green eyes. She’s always singing and she loves to laugh. Everyday I watch from my window as she plays, her auburn braids chasing her across the grasses of Wonderland. I can’t help but smile when I see her. She reminds me of myself when I was jus…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        This was amazing! It’s great you managed to finish a story.

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Fantastic! Just such a perfect ending!!! I hope you’re planning to write another story now that you’ve finished this one 😉

        fairytalegirl123 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Woah, that was great! I know I didnt comment on any of your previous chapters, but I did follow your story. 🙂

        ambireth replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        I am in love with this.

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Noooooo! This is the last one! Must. Have. More. Pleaseeeee tell me you’re going to write another story!!!! Please!!!!

          inlovewithbooks replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          ^^^^^& THIS WAS SO GOOD. AND I MISSED SOME CHAPTERS AT THE BEGINNING, BUT IT WAS STILL SOOOOOOOO GOOD, AMAZING, SAFE, ________ *insert mega compliment.* tag me whenever u write something pls!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Incredible!!!!!

        t-q-yun replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        You sure did an AMAZING job!!!!! (And your welcome!! >_<)

    hannahtheeel posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 4 months ago

    Daughter of Oz
    Emeralda POV:
    “Wake up. Emeralda. Wake up.”
    I opened my eyes to darkness.
    “Awake?”
    “Who’s there?” I whispered.
    The darkness split itself into shadows, “Forgotten us already?”
    I stiffened, “Why are you here?”
    “Don’t sound so afraid. We’re you’re friends. We want to help you.”
    “What could I possibly need from you?”
    The shad…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Fantastic job! I like how it’s very easy to imagine even though there’s not a lot of actual describing.
        For me, the dialogue was a tad cliched so I suppose that’s why it didn’t hit me as hard as it might have- that, and how I haven’t read the full story of your characters.
        I’m not sure what’s missing, but I feel like the emotion is right on the…[Read more]

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        I have no words… no words forever. I will drift alone in silence forever, wondering how I can express how I feel to this chapter. I could put in a word such as “superb” or “oustanding” but that just doesn’t describe your writing. This was very emotional and I could feel how Emeralda felt, sort of.

        hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 4 months ago
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