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so…here is just a little story i started a WHILE ago. wanna know your input. if you guys like it and i get over 20 comments than ill post the ******* not that great)
Sapphire and Janice were just walking through the forest with the leaves crunching under their feet and Sapphire was wondering the same question that she had wondered for her entire life: who are my parents? The only reason she had wondered this was because they looked nothing like her and on her birth certificate it had said she was born fourteen years ago when her parents knew that she was born thirteen years ago. It also said she had a sister which wasn’t true.but the main reason she knew this was that once she was snooping in her parents bedroom to find all of her letters to the tooth fairy because she wanted to find out if it was real or not, when she found a document. In the big fat file a slip of paper fell out that was permanently etched into her brain. It looked like this:
This is to certify that
Sapphire Iris cooper
Has been formally adopted by
Carter and katie cooper
With a signature from the adoption agency that looks like this;
She looked up at the trees branches exploding with flowers. “Look how beautiful those-”she was cut off by the sound of her own scream.
Janice looked beside her to see what was wrong, but Sapphire wasn’t there. She looked down and there she was, dangling off a small branch. She dropped to her knees, Sapphire was about an arm’s length away but Janice’ arms were especially short so she couldn’t get to Sapphire alone. A large rock slipped under Sapphire ’s foot and fell down the big hole. They waited to hear it hit the bottom, but nothing happened. “If you don’t grab on now you’ll die” Janice said in panic. Sapphire reached out her hand in return and thought eleven is too young to die. Now a worried expression was smeared across Janice’ face. Sapphire had always been different from other people, because she could read people’s minds. At that moment Janice was thinking I Can’t lose her too. As if she had another friend or family member in that same situation. There was a loud snap as the branch Sapphire was holding onto broke and Sapphire started to plunge down the hole and missed Janice’ hand by two millimetres. The last thing Sapphire saw was Janice leaning over the edge of the hole with tears welling in her eyes looking heartbroken.
This is great! But I think you should put these stories on rp. That’s the group chat where people post their stories. Keep writing!