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Finishing chapter 2!!//
Kiko knew someone had stopped her fall, but she still wouldnt open her eyes. The only think that showed up in her head was Tristan, her prince, but instead of his sweat, casual smile and soft eyes, they were glowing red with a twisted smile to match it. As the hand who saved her pulled her up she sobbed quietly, feeling…[Read more]
Starting chapter 2, but instead of Heidas POV its Poppys, to catch up go to @heida //
Poppy glared at the back of Heidas turned head, wishing she could throw her across the room. She imagined her mother, the perfect example of an evil witch. And how her mothers tale had just gone down in history, like some old, worthless event in the past,…[Read more]
Continuing that wild idea from last week! Oh, and im tagging ‘NeverEverSpirit’ to boost SGE’s spirit. Ok, chapter 2!//
Gazing into her loves eyes, Kiko wondered if she had made a mistake. She hadnt meant to bring Tristan back to life using the wish fish, it was all purely by accident. And she herself still wasnt even sure if he was real or a…[Read more]
I know! He threw her! Why would he throw Kiko? Keep writing!
Need more nowww seriously I can’t sleep until I find out ???? !!!!
Waaa? You HAVE to write more! You left every one at a total cliffhanger! I really like your writing style, and nice job adding suspense!
I was wondering if, instead of everyone having to have to type my username, but instead of giving out my real name, how about the nickname Kaite?
I know, i know, i just wrote a fanfic, but i just came up with this wild idea, and i just had to share it. Hope you dont mind// Kiko sat by the good lake, letting the lace of her uniform dip into the cold water. Her sad face looked back at her, reminding her why she was sad in the first place. It had been a year now since her true love had been…[Read more]
Sophie was rudely awakened from her beauty sleep as the carriage lurched forward to stop. She jumped up and hit her head on the small roof above her, yelping in pain. Her cheeks reddened, and, furious she slammed open the carriage door. “Excuse me sir,” she smiled sweetly and then glared at the driver. “I thought i asked you to slow…[Read more]
Continuing chapter two from heidas POV//
I squirmed in my seet, sure that the girl i encounteeed ealier had pulled some trick on me. My seat felt like daggers and thorns digging into my back. The girls around me sat up straight with kind smiles, some applying pink blush to their faces. “Did you hear? Dean Sophies brother is a prince here! I hope…[Read more]
@ladykatrina i posted my bio in the comments for chap.1, im gonna start chapter two and weave your character into the story~~Chapter 2//
Our first hour in the school for good wasnt as fantastic and exciting as i hoped it would be. All we did was sit around in our dorm rooms trading secrets and trying on eachothers shoes. It was sooo, boring. And…[Read more]
Maybe concentrate on your grammar, new speaker, new line, and then your writing will be perfect!
Keep writing! 😉
Sophie stared off into the distance, her thoughts stuck on the image of a handsome prince with broad shoulders, strong arms, sparkling blue eyes… The carriage bobbed up and down as it rolled over a crack in the road. Sophie sighed and crossed her arms. She was finally going to see Agatha after one year. She could see agatha running up to her,…[Read more]