hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 1 month ago

    Tags:
    @hesterisqueen
    @elvish
    @noelleshin
    @Sapphy
    @everagathaneverhester

    Sorry, I haven’t done anything in forever I just sorta forgot to abut this cause school started and I had writer’s block. Cause I haven’t done anything in a while I thought I’d start by putting everything I started on.

    This may be super long but it my opinion I think it’s…[Read more]

        hestersthebest replied 1 year, 1 month ago

        Sorry about how long it is

          everneverstories replied 1 year, 1 month ago

          Wow, it’s really long. Writers Block? I hardly think so!

        sapphy replied 1 year, 1 month ago

        wow

    hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 9 months ago

    Tags :
    @hesterisqueen
    @elvish
    @noelleshin
    @Sapphy
    @everagathaneverhester

    Chapter 1 :

    On we go

    ” Chloe , what’s going to happen when we leave ? ” Says Cat the day before they have to leave for the school for good and evil .

    ” Cat like i told you a million times we will end up in the school for evil and cause we have the same last name well be…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Cool! I like the dialogue but l think it would be better of they described it more instead of just straight out telling us. What are they feeling?

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          Thanks for the feedback
          All work on it

          galvaldon replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          I agree. I totally understand that though, I always think I do too much dialogue when I write.

        hesterisqueen replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        This is good but it could be better. Right now I have no idea where they are, or how they’re feeling. Also, check some of your grammar and things like saying ‘you’re’ instead of ‘your’ so it makes sense. Another thing, (sorry to drone, I have a tendency to do that) don’t add a space after an opening speech mark-this will make it go the wrong way…[Read more]

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          Sorry they were in Camelot in Chloe and Cat’s room
          All work on the grammar its never been my best subject

        everagathaneverhester replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        It’s a really good chapter but I think you should write what they are feeling instead of just what they are saying. But other than that it was great I can’t wait for the next chapter!

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          So i should do more of there thoughts then speach

        everagathaneverhester replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Yes, exactly. You can still do talking but also do thoughts

        elvish replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        grammar, spelling and punctuation, all need a little work.

        sophie0102 replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        That’s a good start.
        Can’t wait to read chapter 2

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          For doing thoughts do you do them third or first person

        hesterisqueen replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Don’t worry, you don’t have to start off perfect at writing for the best story, in fact it’s almost better that you learn as you go along so by the end you can compare it with your first chapter and it should be much better πŸ™‚

        ccxinyiofwoodsbeyond replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        tag meeee

    hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 9 months ago

    @hesterisqueen
    @elvish
    @noelleshin
    @sapphy
    @everagathaneverhester

    @Sapphy made me think about doing something that happened to the coven so in response here you go sapphy .

    This is my version of what happened after the war against the snake/Rhian ….

    In the eyes of Anadil , Hester and Dot –

    Dot : After the war Dot left Anadil and Hester to…[Read more]

    hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    @elvish
    chapter one will be coming soon for chloe and cat

        hesterisqueen replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        That’s great! But please don’t post one-liners as they clog up the forum and push people’s stories down. You probably didn’t know this but just for future reference. Thanks for understanding πŸ™‚

    hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Name : Cat Claw ( Named after her god parents ( Anadil and Dot ( C for her sister A for Anadil and T for Dot ) and father ( a man wolf ) )
    Born in the Kingdom of Blood brook but moved when she was 6
    Following the path of her sister and Hester ( her mother ) and was also raised by Anadil and Dot at age 10 she is going to the school for good and…[Read more]

        noelleshin replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        :O πŸ™‚ wowza

        elvish replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        when you start writing, please tag me

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          kk

        sapphy replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        So it’s Anadil and Dot who are together now? Cool even though l always shipped Hester and Anadil. Please tag me when you start your story

    hestersthebest posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    Name : Chloe Claw ( Named after her grandmother and father ( a man wolf ) )
    Born in the Kingdom of Blood brook but moved when she was 8
    Following the path of her parents a unknown werewolf and Hester and was also raised by Anadil and Dot at age 12 she is going to the school for good and evil hoping to get in to evil .
    She has long brown locks of…[Read more]

        hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Enjoy

        hesterisqueen replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Okay. This could be an interesting concept. BTW, your username is awesome πŸ™‚

          sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Cool, can you please tag me.

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          How kind

        everagathaneverhester replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Can you please tag me? BTW I love how you have the coven in this and how your character is raised by Hester

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thanks

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Sorry im new how can i tag someone

        elvish replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        this seems really interesting, maybe you should do stuff for cat too.

          hestersthebest replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Ill do that thanks for the idea

        everagathaneverhester replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        You tag people by putting an @ in front of their username like this: @HESTERSTHEBEST I just tagged you. So to tag me you put an @ in front of my username like this: @everagathaneverhester and you tag people in each post about your story. I hope I explained well