Sorry, I haven’t done anything in forever I just sorta forgot to abut this cause school started and I had writer’s block. Cause I haven’t done anything in a while I thought I’d start by putting everything I started on.
This may be super long but it my opinion I think it’s…[Read more]
Chapter 1 :
On we go
” Chloe , what’s going to happen when we leave ? ” Says Cat the day before they have to leave for the school for good and evil .
” Cat like i told you a million times we will end up in the school for evil and cause we have the same last name well be…[Read more]
Cool! I like the dialogue but l think it would be better of they described it more instead of just straight out telling us. What are they feeling?
This is good but it could be better. Right now I have no idea where they are, or how they’re feeling. Also, check some of your grammar and things like saying ‘you’re’ instead of ‘your’ so it makes sense. Another thing, (sorry to drone, I have a tendency to do that) don’t add a space after an opening speech mark-this will make it go the wrong way…[Read more]
It’s a really good chapter but I think you should write what they are feeling instead of just what they are saying. But other than that it was great I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Yes, exactly. You can still do talking but also do thoughts
Don’t worry, you don’t have to start off perfect at writing for the best story, in fact it’s almost better that you learn as you go along so by the end you can compare it with your first chapter and it should be much better 🙂
@Sapphy made me think about doing something that happened to the coven so in response here you go sapphy .
This is my version of what happened after the war against the snake/Rhian ….
In the eyes of Anadil , Hester and Dot –
Dot : After the war Dot left Anadil and Hester to…[Read more]
chapter one will be coming soon for chloe and cat
Name : Cat Claw ( Named after her god parents ( Anadil and Dot ( C for her sister A for Anadil and T for Dot ) and father ( a man wolf ) )
Born in the Kingdom of Blood brook but moved when she was 6
Following the path of her sister and Hester ( her mother ) and was also raised by Anadil and Dot at age 10 she is going to the school for good and…[Read more]
Name : Chloe Claw ( Named after her grandmother and father ( a man wolf ) )
Born in the Kingdom of Blood brook but moved when she was 8
Following the path of her parents a unknown werewolf and Hester and was also raised by Anadil and Dot at age 12 she is going to the school for good and evil hoping to get in to evil .
She has long brown locks of…[Read more]
Okay. This could be an interesting concept. BTW, your username is awesome 🙂
Can you please tag me? BTW I love how you have the coven in this and how your character is raised by Hester
this seems really interesting, maybe you should do stuff for cat too.