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Hello fellow Evers and Nevers. I apologize for the cliffhanger but here is the next chapter of my story. Thank you GRACELYNNOFMADINVAIL, HONOREVERAFTER, AND JLB23 for allowing me to use their characters. Enjoy the story!
Chapter 10- Captured
Aura awoke in a small cell. She seemed to be in a dungeon. It was dark, ***** and the small bed was…[Read more]
Brittany tell me if you like my story it is called THE CHANGE OF THE SCHOOL MASTERS PATTERN here it goes. Katie tossed back and forth she could not go to sleep. tonight was the night where the school master kidnaps two children. she had waited all her life to be kidnapped. Everyone in Rapunzels kingdom thought she was going to be kidnapped as she…[Read more]
Nice. When I saw the black hair, I thought ” Agatha?”
Your story seems really good so far, but one suggestion I have for you is to use “quotation marks.” They help us know when someone is talking, and every time you have a new speaker, you have a new line (press enter).
An example is:
“What did you do yesterday?” Bob asked.
“Nothing much,” Joe replied.
As Bob walked away, he said “Okay, bye.”
AND YOU STOP FOLLOWING MY SISTER TO EVERY SIGHT SHE GOES ON!!!!!!! YOU BROKE HER HEART AND IF YOU DARE TRY TO GET HER BACK I WILL KILL YOU!!!!!!
@highflyer my only concern is how did he find the site…
Also do you need any help with hiding the body?
@Arian2 – Well you find out soon. Right now back to the massacre.
@Peppy – *Tackle-hugs.* you’re alive!!
Roselyn’s story : The Massacre part 3.
He stood at the balcony.
Kenny whipped round from his longing gaze across the horizon. Des stood in front of him. Standing…[Read more]
OF COURSE I’M ALIVE! ❗
*Crams Kat’s mouth full of cookies*
Your story is really tensing up, and is shaping out to be VERY interesting!
Or. . . No caramel shortbread.
*Hides caramel shortbread*
NOW GET WRITING!!!
YOUR BACK!!!!!!!! *bashes Peppy on the head* MY SECOND CHAPTER CAME OUT AND YOU DIDNT EVEN READ IT!!!!!! BAD ORIMIE!!!!!!
Aww…Thank you. ^_^
My dad’s coming to get me at half 1 so I’ll be out for some of the evening so the next update will be much later. he-he.
NO!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! TOO GOOD! TOO GOOD! HYPER…VENTILATING….
*collapses and dies*
OMG! I am in awe! This is AMAZING! I haven’t read many, if any, things that are better on this website!
Wonderful, Madam Kat. Simply splendid. I am drooling at thought of a update. 😈
Thank you guys i’m updating now finally. it’s almost half 8 pm here though >_>
Thankyou for the song! I’m serious: that seriously inspired me for my own story. REALLY helpful.
So…Cheshire comes back with a vengeance for those who have tortured him? Preferably with a wolf pack on his heels? Maybe with a throne or at least some sense of mastery? I doubt it…but it would be SO cool if that happened. 😛
Mmmmm. . . I listened to the song.
You know, your writing is scarily awesome, but then again, IT’S SUPER-SCARY!
Oh yes, and I do hope Laurence hasn’t got food poisoning from the cookies! ❗
NOW GET UPDATING!!
Song Of The Day sponsered by: @a-antal
Presenting…… SONG OF THE DAY:<*** class='evernevertv-video-wrap tv_screen_lrg'>
I love it!!!!!!!!! next time you do this could you do “So close” @fairestofthemall plz???????
GOOD MORNING PIZZAS.
I’ll be doing something productive at somepoint soon.
BTW who actually listens to the music I put with updates or clueful songs?
Depends. I listen occasionally, but Nightcore isn’t my cup of tea…though I do like some particular songs. Undead is a good one, minus all the swearing.
Undead like Undead by Hollywood Undead?
Hu swears a lot I know. I like nightcore because it means you can get through more songs quicker & it’s easy to find new songs or bands. And like the song there is quite slow.. so I thing it would be really slow in normal.
GOOD MORNING PIZZA KAT AND WAFFLE LEO!
***** CHANGED HIS AVATAR!
Anyway, Kat. Sometimes I listen, but most of the time I skip ahead to the actual writing. 😀
Also, when have I seen you do productive stuff other than eating caramel shortbread or eating people – not that those things are productive in the least, OF COURSE.
But I LOATHE…[Read more]
Wait ***** changed his hair?
Ohhh is his hair lighter.
I DO MANY PRODUCTIVE THINGS.
That don’t involve caramel.
How do you not like it?
Kat, HAVE YOU REALLY BEEN SNEAKING OFF TO DO PRODUCTIVE THINGS WITHOUT ME KNOWING? YOU KEPT IT FROM ME! 😈
Caramel is so sweet and gets all sticky in my mouth, so I don’t like it, 😛
Yes an update soon!!!
I listen occasionally but like Leo said, “nightcore is not my cup of tea…”
Nice hair Leo!!!
Uhhhhhh…….Hi????? I’m new here and…..that’s it I ****..this is what happens when a expert fan fiction writer goes to a site with stangers does an RP thingamajig ( should i **** by now like Agatha or stare at everyone like Sophie?Who may or may not be secretly judging people????…………):-)
Very, very EXCITED for update!
HELLO KAT THE PIZZA! HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR 4 DAYS!!!!! 😉 😉 😀
Wait. I had to look that up.
Is a Leo this:
Leo is the fifth sign of the zodiac. These folks are impossible to miss, since they love being centre stage. Making an impression is Job One for Leo’s, and when you consider their personal magnetism, you see the job is quite easy.
I copied and pasted that straight from the page, but IS IT RIGHT, OR HAVE…[Read more]
?? I don’t think it’s bad luck.
Rumours & superstitions you never know. Good be your best year.
Well. . . The Chinese Zodiac DOES say it’s bad luck – I just looked it up – but Kat is certainly entitled to have her own opinion, whether it’s TRUE OR NOT!
*Gives Kat and Leo the Evil eye for any random reason*
BUT WHO LISTENS TO ZODIAC.
Okay well.. whatever zodiacs can be say whatever they wanna say.
Just don’t believe it or things will be back because you think it’s going to be bad. 🙂
I can’t make any sense of that whatsoever. 😛
But what can you expect from Kat?
*Throws cookies to Kat* 😀
No, but I’ll think of a way before she eats me!
*hands Kat decoy-cookies shaped like caramel shortbreads*
Here you go! 😛 😛
Wait. I’M GUESSING THE NON-CAPITAL LETTER WAS AN ACCIDENT, RIGHT? RIGHT?
Why is it always CARAMEL shortbreads or CHOCOLATE digestives? I like digestives. I like chocolate. But chocolate digestives? Leave it in the tin thankyouverymuch. 😡
Yeah, I like pretty much everything, but I actually LOATHE caramel. 😛
Uh. . . My oven’s at home.
*Locks Kat in cookie-prison*
No more vampires or eating me or Leo!
YES, NO NEED FOR ANGRY FACE!