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Heres my story. Wat happens next…
SOPHIES POV
Chapter4: 2 days later.
” here are the forums, miss Sophie.” A toad croaked as he handed me he forums.
The muder fourms.
I tried not to cry as I sat down.
Lucy, little Lucy, my beautiful niece, DEAD!
I blinked back tears.
All I wanted was someone to care for. Someone to love.
But she had to get…[Read more]
That was quite sad.
Thnx
Im crying now, but awesome chapter!
I’m literally crying. Awesome chapter!
Thnx
Really good and sad. I am now in tears!
☺
Cool, good job.
Thnx
My story is back. At last. I have a name.
Raised in dark.
Chapter 3.
” where are we going?” I asked hort.
We had been walking in silence for ten minutes now.
” why to Neverland, of course.” He answered.
” but why Neverland.” I questioned.
He smiled. ” I was born in Neverland.” He told me. ” it’s a wonderful place and it has some wonderful…[Read more]
Cool!!
This will be my last chapter in 2016. See u guyz later.
Chapter 2.
Me and aunt sophie walked through the halls of evil.
” its so quiet here.” i marveled.
Aunt sophie nodded. ” since its the last day of summer break, i declared it a work free holiday for all teachers.” She told me.
We walked down the hall.
” wait…” i said suddenly. ” the tube…[Read more]
Great chapter! Enjoy your break, and I look forward to your next chapter! 😉
Thnx
Great chapter!
Nice chapter. 😉
Thnx 4 such positive feedback! Be sure to raed the proluge first at @hortlover to catch up.
Chapter 1.
I was in a forest.
Runnning and running.
I stopped running and rested against a hollow tree.
I was starving so i picked a berry of the tree and shoved in my mouth.
I was delicous so i grabbed another one.
And another one.
Eventually, i had…[Read more]
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Great chapter! Enjoy your holiday. 😉
Thnx ☺
Cool chapter, enjoy your holiday!! 🙂
Thank u! ☺
Amazing chapter!
Amazing chapter!
Cool!
Nice chapter, enjoy your holidays. 😉
Hello!!! So many people said hi. I’m gonna start my story now. Hope u enjoy.☺
Proluge.
I have been at this castle for as long as i can remeber. I have had lots of good experiences here; my first word, my first steps, my first loose tooth. but I’ve also had the bad;
Flashbacks.
Every once in a while, i have this horrible dreams.
” night t…[Read more]
This is awesome! Loved it 🙂
Amazing!
Fabulous chapter! 😉
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Thnx everyone!!!
Helllo!!!
Im back!
So im gonna start a new story.
Name: lucy
Gender: girl
Age: 13
School: evil
Hometown: camelot.
Linage: daughter of agatha and tedros.
Siblings: peter ( eldest,) ella ( second eldest,) max and mike
( youngest/ twins.)
Looks: long, wavy blonde hair, lightly tanned skin, green eyes with a turquoise tint, basicly a duplicate of…[Read more]
Yay! You’re back! Amazing bio by the way!
Thnx ☺
Very cool bio!!
Nice bio! The personality could have a teeny bit more detail. But good job. And welcome back! 😉
Ok sure!
So so sorry @dot111
I must have typed it wrong once now ur name pops up with only 2 ones. So sorry.
No problem @hortlover, I don’t mind. 🙂
welcome back!!!
Thnx
Hey welcome back! Also the bio was good I personally just think that some pieces could have more detail. 😉
Hi @joann
Why does the site block of some words. I understand for swearing and stuff but some are just confusing.
I wrote one fan fic and it blocked off ********** don’t understand why. I am able to say idiot. Any idea why this happens
Thanks
Sorry, it did it again.
It means teens.
Surly you know what worrd i mean
Yeah. It’s annoying.
What was the word. Can u at least space it out to show the word. It looks quite interesting. (When I say space out I mean like o p i n i o n )
I did that and it still blocked in off.
Oh that’s weird.
The word meant the same as teens ( it’s not a bad word.)
Will the movie be about all 3 books or just the first?
I believe the movie will just be about the first book. I may be wrong, but I think that’s right. 😀
^^
Ok thnx
I hope the movie will just be the first book. If not it would be too rushed and some of the good parts might be missed.
10000% agree
it better be just book one because then their leaving out too much
imagine if they make movies for all the books that would be awesome but super expensive plus take a lot of money
yes but it would be sooo awesome.
I would love to watch it. Getting hyped just imagining the movie. Can’t wait for 2018…
why is it soo far away why would they do this to me
The. Wait. Is. Too. Long
this is why when they were making the HP movies, i wasn’t into the books yet so there was no iticipation
IM BACK!!!!!
i haven’t been here in agggges.
Im going to start a new story soon.
Heres a bio.
Name: lunar
Gender: girl
School: evil
Age: 13
Hometown: nettle forest.
Linage: ophan -no memory of parents
Siblings: twin sister named starr
Looks: sliver eyes, long black hair dyed dark blue and pale skin
Wears: long blue robe and a sliver…[Read more]
The Looks, Personality, and what she wears could use some more detail, but otherwise great bio!
Nice!
Cool bio, well done. 😉
Thnx 4 the amazing feedback. I was sooo happy! ☺
And ohh… I changed the name of the story. Hope u enjoy.
The investigations of muder.
SOPHIES POV
Chapter 5: face it.
I sobbed, not even bothering to hide my tears.
I just wanted my niece back.
Hort hugged me. ” it’s ok sophie.” He said in a gentle voice that he used when he wanted to make me s…[Read more]
Cool! Just make sure to capatalise words that need to have capital letters. 🙂
Thnx! 🙂