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Wow… It’s been
ages a month or so since I’ve been here. I wanted to propose the idea of a comment chain RP in my activity about the daily life of a student at SGE (but that may be a little boring to some) and I wanted to know if anyone would be interested.
Thank you and have a good whatever-time-of-day-it-is-in-your-time-zone.
Guys if you see that nothing’s on the open chat doc I accidentally deleted everything… and I’m trying to get it back. Sorry.
Chapter 3: Maryellen (Kristen)
I wait hours and hours until I’m finally free from the evil clutches of school. The girl is still there, asking for directions somewhere. I run out of the building, determined t…[Read more]
So good! I love love love that it’s set in the real world–i was a bit worn out with all of the SGE kingdoms and that being the only setting. Great!!!
I thought you might want to check this out: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EGozRn2VHLWgXnhBNbnzNj6ILgE3gX-vvPRthz3YwI4/edit#
Chapter 2: Falling (Maryellen)
“Maryellen, wake up!”
I wake up to the sweet voice of my mother, Belle. Living in this kingdom is a little hard, especially when your mother is the queen, but I’ve gotten used…[Read more]
Chapter 1: Secrets (Kristen)
I have secrets.
Of course everyone has their non-secret “secrets”, like obvious crushes on boys, or hobbies they like to keep secret, even though everyone has seen them do the said hobby multiple tim…[Read more]
@princezzdot I figured you might want to see this but I forgot to tag you, sorry.
This is great avocado! (Not a surprise though since your RPs are always great)
This is sooooo good! This Savannah though. . . she sounds a lot like me. . . .
Every superhero has their origin story.
Mine’s a little different, though. I’m not a humanoid alien like Superman, or just Hydra, like Batman’s just… Batman.
I was just born with powers. I can make anything from wa…[Read more]
Can I offer a bio for another character in kristen’s story? a villain, perhaps?
but putting those two things side by side seems really dumb. And if anything, adding ‘i get A’s’ is really expositional. I mean it’s okay to have exposition but when it’s obvious, it’s horrible. She’s trying to describe how average she is, then she says she gets above-average marks? before saying she’s average directly after? it comes off as whiny…[Read more]
Omg, the beginnings are so amazing! Please tag me!
Also, the Batman thing was hilarious
You say that you aren’t criticizing the author, then you say her work needs a lot of improvement to her any good. That was rude and unneeded. Can you even comment on a post without being rude Gwen?
excuse me? I don’t even know who you are and you already have an opinion of me? wow okay
I referenced that specific line about A’s and said that what I had originally said wasn’t really against the author, everything else is constructive criticism. Yes, it needs improvement, you can’t expect her work to be perfect at this age, no ones is. She said…[Read more]
@gwen-elodie thanks for the feedback, I’m glad someone actually gave criticism because nobody ever does that.
Actually I do know you a little. Not as a friend though. What I was saying, was instead of just going “this needs more work to be actual good”, you could’ve just told her how to improve.
I gave her feedback on how her character came off as, am i expected to write as thesis on every piece of writing i see?
you either know me, or you don’t, theres no inbetween. You’re opinions about me don’t really matter since you don’t know me. You’ve either been fed information from someone who has already made their decisions on me without…[Read more]
So someone has to be with you 24/7 to ‘know you’? Whatever this is stupid, I was merely commenting on the rude way you told my friend to improve her story.
I decided that I should make another solo RP about alternate dimensions. There are two main characters whose bios I will post here.
Here’s the first one:
Name: Kristen “Hydra” Jones (you’ll see why she goes by Hydra)
Personality: Very solitary and doesn’t really trust anyone at first. Those who she would trust with her…[Read more]
@evilxaudrey you’re probably the only person that will care about this but this kid in my class (I’ll call her Pearl) said to just go away and get out of her business and just leave (she’s my ex bff btw and hates me)
I think that just triggered suicidal thought mode because (yay) I think I might have mild depression and mild ocd
It felt like she…[Read more]
oh noooooo, I’m so sorry that happened. I’d assume that you weren’t actual bothering her in any way, just because you don’t seem like you would be. I have almost no idea how to help, but I’ll try.
Why aren’t you guys friends anymore? Did she do something wrong and start acting cocky and just like she was better than you? If she hates you then I’…[Read more]
It’s okay you wrote so much
And basically this girl was my best friend once upon a time. But she keeps ditching me and my friends for boys that will hurt us, both physically and emotionally. And now I think she’s gone to the dark side.
I already go to therapy, but it’s only once a week. And the school counselor? She sucks. In response to this she…[Read more]