i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    @iceangel
    @everimagine
    Here’s a little sample of that RP I told you about, more like the prologue. I hope you enjoy it:

    Kristen
    Every superhero has their origin story.
    Mine’s a little different, though. I’m not a humanoid alien like Superman, or just Hydra, like Batman’s just… Batman.
    I was just born with powers. I can make anything from wa…[Read more]

        iceangel replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh
        Angel like
        Can I offer a bio for another character in kristen’s story? a villain, perhaps?

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          OoOoO yass

          iceangel replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          Name; Crystal
          Age: (idk like Hydras age)
          Superhero name: Ray
          Power: She can control light and color.
          Uniform: She wears an ankle to neck to wrist uniform that changes color based on what she needs it to be, although she can’t consciously control it.
          Idk anything else

        everimagine replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        This is so good! I love it, Avocado!

        gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        you say she gets A’s and then she is average? lol what

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          My writing can be cringey sometimes, I apologize

          princezzdot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          I mean lots of people get As and are perfectly average people.

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          but putting those two things side by side seems really dumb. And if anything, adding ‘i get A’s’ is really expositional. I mean it’s okay to have exposition but when it’s obvious, it’s horrible. She’s trying to describe how average she is, then she says she gets above-average marks? before saying she’s average directly after? it comes off as whiny…[Read more]

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          lol I wrote a lot

        galeinthesnow replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH PLEASE TAG ME!!!!!!

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks

        sallysallysally replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        Omg, the beginnings are so amazing! Please tag me!
        Also, the Batman thing was hilarious

        princessrachael replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Tag me

          princezzdot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          You say that you aren’t criticizing the author, then you say her work needs a lot of improvement to her any good. That was rude and unneeded. Can you even comment on a post without being rude Gwen?

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          excuse me? I don’t even know who you are and you already have an opinion of me? wow okay
          I referenced that specific line about A’s and said that what I had originally said wasn’t really against the author, everything else is constructive criticism. Yes, it needs improvement, you can’t expect her work to be perfect at this age, no ones is. She said…[Read more]

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        @gwen-elodie thanks for the feedback, I’m glad someone actually gave criticism because nobody ever does that.

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          no problem 🙂

        princezzdot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Actually I do know you a little. Not as a friend though. What I was saying, was instead of just going “this needs more work to be actual good”, you could’ve just told her how to improve.

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          I gave her feedback on how her character came off as, am i expected to write as thesis on every piece of writing i see?
          you either know me, or you don’t, theres no inbetween. You’re opinions about me don’t really matter since you don’t know me. You’ve either been fed information from someone who has already made their decisions on me without…[Read more]

        princezzdot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Oh my god

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          how else do you ‘know’ me?

        princezzdot replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        So someone has to be with you 24/7 to ‘know you’? Whatever this is stupid, I was merely commenting on the rude way you told my friend to improve her story.

          gwen-elodie replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          No, I’m saying that you knowing me a little bit isn’t enough to say that i can’t comment on a post without being rude.
          It wasn’t rude what I said, she herself thanked me for the feedback.

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    Hello everyone!
    I decided that I should make another solo RP about alternate dimensions. There are two main characters whose bios I will post here.

    Here’s the first one:
    Name: Kristen “Hydra” Jones (you’ll see why she goes by Hydra)
    Age: 13
    Personality: Very solitary and doesn’t really trust anyone at first. Those who she would trust with her…[Read more]

        iceangel replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        Ooh! I want to know more about the superhero dimension/ be a part of it forever please thank you

        everimagine replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        TAGGLES I LOVE THIS

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    @evilxaudrey you’re probably the only person that will care about this but this kid in my class (I’ll call her Pearl) said to just go away and get out of her business and just leave (she’s my ex bff btw and hates me)
    I think that just triggered suicidal thought mode because (yay) I think I might have mild depression and mild ocd
    It felt like she…[Read more]

        evilxaudrey replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        oh noooooo, I’m so sorry that happened. I’d assume that you weren’t actual bothering her in any way, just because you don’t seem like you would be. I have almost no idea how to help, but I’ll try.
        Why aren’t you guys friends anymore? Did she do something wrong and start acting cocky and just like she was better than you? If she hates you then I’…[Read more]

          evilxaudrey replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          wow I didn’t realise how much I wrote

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        It’s okay you wrote so much
        And basically this girl was my best friend once upon a time. But she keeps ditching me and my friends for boys that will hurt us, both physically and emotionally. And now I think she’s gone to the dark side.
        I already go to therapy, but it’s only once a week. And the school counselor? She sucks. In response to this she…[Read more]

          evilxaudrey replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          hm, counselors do suck ngl. I don’t think you overreact, but it’s good that you’re over it. And that girl obviously is stup.id and doesn’t know where her mind is, just ignore her and the mean boys.

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update 3 months, 2 weeks ago

    @evilxaudrey
    I’d like to ask your permission to ship Tate and Jace in the Kor RP.
    Let me know if it’s a bad idea.

        evilxaudrey replied 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        OMG I’VE WANTED TO SHIP THEM FOR SO FRICKIN LONG OF COURSEEE btw sorry I don’t check my mentions often

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        It’s okay.
        YEET THE SHIP IS REAL

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        Dang it I just realized Jace is gay
        I’m gonna need to change his sexuality

        evilxaudrey replied 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        lol
        you do that :)))

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update 3 months, 3 weeks ago
    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update 3 months, 3 weeks ago

    @smoothies can you please finish your bio for the Welcome to the Galaxy RP?

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 months, 3 weeks ago

    Hello and welcome to the Starlight.
    Tags:
    @r3eader1616
    @lilystarling
    @raventhebad
    @juju1135
    @princezzdot
    @emilyy
    @merqueen23
    @lylaagatha
    @evisla123
    @tho0060
    @hester112
    @princessgirl2911
    @bunnyrabbit123 (do you want to be tagged?)
    @thethreewitchesofroom66
    @seru
    @geek
    @pelpomagirregirl

    Chapter 4: Jace
    Antoine led Stella to a cave near a mountain.…[Read more]

        princezzdot replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        Great chapter! Perfect length!

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          XD when I looked in mah notifs I saw you commented and I’m like, “CEZZ!” Thanks for reading and supporting me from the Gemini Conspiracy days.

        princezzdot replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        Aww your welcome avocado 🙂

        bunnyrabbit123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        Amazing I love it tag me!

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 months, 4 weeks ago

    @r3eader1616
    @lilystarling
    @raventhebad
    @juju1135
    @princezzdot
    @emilyy
    @merqueen23
    @lylaagatha
    @evisla123
    @TH0060
    @hester112
    @princessgirl2911
    @bunnyrabbit123 (do you want to be tagged?)
    @thethreewitchesofroom66
    @seru
    @geek
    @pelpomagirregirl

    Starlight
    Chapter 3: Dreamworld:
    Stella woke up in a forest, unsure of why she was there, or where she…[Read more]

        bunnyrabbit123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        AMAZING TAG ME PLEASE

        pelpomagirregirl replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        That was super good!

        merqueen23 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        That was great! But, if we’re going to be seeing more of the characters you just introduced us to, maybe give them bios? But if the’re only going to be in this chapter you can ignore my suggestion. That was great though!!

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          These are really guides that are helping Stella with her journey, which will really only appear in 1-2 chapters.

          dritten25 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          Awesome!

        merqueen23 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        well in that case, just ignore the suggestion

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update 3 months, 4 weeks ago

    @carrot123
    MAGIC MISFITS 3 RANT PLACE.
    You start.

        carrot123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        IT WAS SOOOOOO SAD! I MEAN THOSE PLOT TWISTS AND EVERYTHING! THE BOOK WAS TOO SHORT! (not actually, just in my perspective because I read really fast.) AND THE BETRAYAL! THAT WAS SOOOOO CRAZY! AND THEN THEY JUST MOVED AWAY AFTER THEY HAD BEEN THERE FOR THEIR ENTIRE LIFE!

        okay… I’m done for now. Your turn, @i-am-a-tropical-avocado

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        WHY DID THE MAGIC SHOP HAVE TO BE DESTROYED? WHERE WAS MR. VERNON WHEN I NEEDED HIM?! WHO WAS WENDEL WHISPERS IN THE FIRST PLACE? WHY DID KALAGAN HAVE TO EXIST? WHY? WHY? WHYYYYYYYYY?

          carrot123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY ! I HAVE SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS! WE NEED TO KNOW ALL THE ANSWERS! WHY DID THEY BETRAY…[Read more]

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        AND-
        WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER? WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?WHY DID It HAVE TO END…[Read more]

          carrot123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE AGONY! THE…[Read more]

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

        I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

          carrot123 replied 3 months, 3 weeks ago

          EXACTLY!

    i-am-a-tropical-avocado posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 months ago

    @r3eader1616
    @lilystarling
    @raventhebad
    @juju1135
    @princezzdot
    @emilyy
    @merqueen23
    @lylaagatha
    @evisla123
    @TH0060
    @hester112
    @princessgirl2911
    @bunnyrabbit123 (do you want to be tagged?)
    @thethreewitchesofroom66
    @seru

    Starlight
    Chapter Two: Transport
    Stella still couldn’t believe what was happening. She twisted a lock of black hair around her f…[Read more]

        pelpomagirregirl replied 4 months ago

        That’s really good! Please tag me!

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 4 months ago

        My apologies, @tho0060.

        seru replied 4 months ago

        love it!! it feels really natural to read 🙂 as for constructive criticism, it would add a lot to the story to know what stella is thinking at pivotal plot moments (like when lucinda calls her an earthling)–that could really add the magical touch that turns this from great to fantastic! <3

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 4 months ago

          Thanks, will do!

        geek replied 4 months ago

        Great, please tag me

        raventhebad replied 4 months ago

        Good chapter!

        bunnyrabbit123 replied 4 months ago

        Btw yes I would like to be tagged @i-am-a-tropical-avocado

        bunnyrabbit123 replied 4 months ago

        YES IT IS AMAZING TAG MEEEEEEE

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