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CHAPTER 1 Impending Doom
As she came up out of the Flowerground to face the other 59 new princesses for the School for Good, Fern noticed someone who wasn’t quite right. Greasy hair in a black dome on her head and dress a lumpy black sack. “Hello,” smiled one girl politely. “Who are you?”
Other girls were clearly interested, and came running around the supposed impostor. “I’m Agatha,” she muttered wearily, “And you are?
Soon all the girls were paraded into the towers of the School for Good. Fern’s schedule was the same as Kiko’s and strange Agatha’s. Her book basket included books like Animal Seech 1: Barks, Neighs and Chirps and Princess with a Purpose. Then, another nymph held up her uniform. As Fern changed, she could see one misplaced girl, searching frantically around Good Hall.
Room 22, Purity Tower, was a large, spacious pink room, filled to bursting with mirrors, closets and lace. Diamond, crystal and glass friezes of dashing princes, beautiful princesses, ad kindly animals adorned the walls. One other girl came in. “Hello!” smiled Kiko brightly. “Oh, it’s you!” replied Fern. but she had other things on her mind.
Her impending doom.
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