My Ranking Points
Ok so I got bored and decided to write a little chapter.
Night crept through an old abandoned passage in the school for good. It connected to a hall that was close to her room.
She put her hands on the walls. They were covered with wet blue paint.
Night quickly pulled her hand away. It now was covered in wet blue paint as well. Night groaned but kept walking.
When she finally saw the small hidden trapdoor, she pulled it open and crawled through.
She saw her room door. Night walked into her room and saw her roommates standing there. Night had never bothered to learn they’re names.
Night pulled off her hood and headed to the bathroom to wash the paint off her hand.
She was about to walk into the bathroom when she felt a hand on her shoulder.
“Why is there paint on your hand?” Her roommate that had Chrissy blonde hair, brown eyes, and freckles asked her.
“None of your business” Night replied
Night’s other roommate had tangled red hair, gray eyes, and a little acne. She walked up and said. “Bree if she doesn’t want to tell us then she doesn’t have to…” I could tell that the red head was curious to though. The ******, apparently her name was Bree, seemed disappointed. Night had noticed how she was always curious about everything and liked a little adventure from time to time.
Night turned around and walked into the bathroom. She turned on the water and washed off the paint.
After that Night walked outside, and started thinking about what she was gunna do about the whole Violet-wants-her-to-kidnap-students-but-I-don’t-want-to situation.
Night definitely knew that that was wrong. They were innocent children… Well atleast the girl was. She had heard that the boy had stolen things from other students in the school for evil. Kidnapping them still wasn’t right though.
She figured she would just have to make up excuses.
Night turned to look at the sky and laced down on the log that she was sitting on.
Rallen was walking around outside through the trees. The cold windy air blowing around him. He was heading back to school. He had run off for a while. So he could sit and ‘think’.
Rallen finally reached the doors and started to head to class. It was his last class now. He turned and entered the class room. He didn’t know what the teacher was saying at first until the teacher started speaking up. He had forgotten what his class was.
He zoned out. Not exactly caring if he failed and got turned into a plant or whatever.
After his last class he went back outside for a while… And ended up running into that ever girl, Maylynn, again. She didn’t look happy to see him either.
“You…” She said as she started to turn back towards the school for good
“‘You…'” Rallen mimicked “I’m not that boring you know”
She turned and raised her eyebrow
“Oh! Really?!” She said sarcastically
“Your probably more boring them me” Rallen replied
“I don’t care” she said
“Couldn’t think of a good come back now could you?” Rallen said
“No. This conversation just isn’t worth the effort” Maylynn said
“Oh well. That’s your opinion” Rallen said “but making sure you always have a good comeback for when someone is dissing you is a very useful skill. Apparently one that you lack”
Rallen raised an eyebrow at her. “You couldn’t think of a comback for that?” He exclaimed “pathetic.”
“Thinking of a comeback for everything is more pathetic then not having one” Maylynn said “you probably spend all your time coming up with them”
Rallen grinned “so you ARE capable of coming up with them!”
“Shut up!” Maylynn said
Maylynn glared at Rallen and walked away. She was defiantly one of the most t annoying Evers he’d ever met. Which wasn’t a bad thing in his book.
I walked away from Rallen and back towards the school for good. When I got inside I walked up the stairs and up to my room. Jenna was standing there.
“hi” she said
“Hey, Jenna!” I said “where’s Saddy?” I said as I looked around. She wasn’t in the room.
“I don’t know” Jenna said “She went outside a little while ago.
Sure enough, about an hour later Saddy came stumbling into the room covered in leaves.
“What happened?!” I asked. She looked like she had jumped into a pile of leaves 10 times.
“I was climbing up a tree.” Saddy explained “a squirrel was in there. It fell on my head and when I tried to get it off I fell into a leaf pile”
I gawked at her.
“Ya” Saddy said dryly “it’s hilarious”
I laughed. I could see Jenna struggling not to smile.
She sat down on the bed and began picking leaves out of her hair.
“Ima go take a shower” Saddy said
“Ok” I replied
Jenna nodded slowly while staring at a big text book.
A little while later I heard a soft knocking on the door. I stood up and looked outside. No one was there.
Suddenly a hand grabbed me from behind and pulled me down the hallway, and into a small trapdoor.
Ok I’m done. I don’t know when I’ll be able to get the next chapter out though. Oh well. Hopefully sooooon. 🙂
Little? LITTLE!!! That was amazing I absolutely loved all of it!!!
Dude. . . You should REALLY begin with that new chapter! Or else I might FLIP OUT. Idk where the other chapters are but I intend to find them. Btw, I hope you have a great time writing your book! I am planning on beginning mine already but I’m still quite clueless. . . Do ya mind giving me some inspiration? Ps: Sorry about the long message. Can’t stop talking when I meet a talented person. 🙂