iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 5 – Welcoming
    “Why is our side so dark, Tressie?” Tanner asked but was left with no answer, he swished his head around to where he last saw her but the blonde wasn’t there. “Gee, thanks a lot.” He grumbled, plopping down onto a chair.

    Nevers slugged in, some were excited while others had a glum, uninviting look on their face. Then Tanner…[Read more]

    iridescentroyalty posted an update 4 years, 10 months ago

    That moment when you’ve got a plot concept but it confuses you and that means it’ll probably confuse your readers too and you don’t know what you’re doing.

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    I’m on a roll todayyy!

    Chapter 4 Part 3 (final part)
    “Didn’t think I’d leave you, sweetie? Did you?” Tressie chimed, gripping tighter onto Tanner’s arm.

    All Tanner did was a mere shake of the head in reply, seeming quite nonchalant.

    Tressie turned her head to follow the wolves, biting the inside of her bottom lip, mischievously.

    Tanner…[Read more]

        wassup replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        wow you are good

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @wassup Thank youuuu! That’s a really nice thing to say. I appreciate it so much! ❤

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Wow that was good

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @fsa161 Thank youuuuuuu so so sooo much! You are very kind! I appreciate it so much! ❤❤❤

        espilce replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Good its a good peice of work.

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @espilce Aww! Thank you so much! I appreciate it, greatly! ❤

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 4 Part 2

    The glimmers of sunlight were no more, Tanner had been thrown violently into what seemed like ‘The School for Evil’.

    He moaned in pain before helping himself up, his jeans were ripped from getting caught on the edge of a rock as sharp as a knife and he may have been bleeding a little, or maybe a lot… He still was hugging his…[Read more]

        iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        opinions?

        iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        *Tressie asked, lips pursing in question.

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome I like it

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @fsa161 Thank you! ❤ Appreciate it! 😀

        wassup replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        i enjoyed it @wassup

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @wassup Thank youu! I appreciate it!

        espilce replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        It was good

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @espilce thanks!

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 4 –
    “What are you all doing?” A voice perched in. Nevaeh looked for the area of where the sound had come from. Revealed was a statuesque female who had luscious blonde locks that curled at the bottom, she owned a pair of intimidating green eyes which had a illuminating sheen to it and she seemed like the living definition of perfe…[Read more]

        espilce replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Your good at description.

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          Thank you! I really appreciate it. ❤❤❤

        kittiefromthewoodsbeyond replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        🙂 like it!

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @kittiefromthewoodsbeyond Thank you! ❤ I really appreciate it! You are very kind!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        I like it, good job!

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @fsa161 Thank you! I appreciate it so much! I really do! ❤❤❤

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 3 (Part 2) –
    Expecting her life’s end, Nevaeh was falling for what seemed like an almost endless amount of time, screaming her apologies to everyone she ever hurt. She looked at the ground from the distance, “I was going to be in Good?!”
    A few metres left to death- Something caught her, her eyes were closed, face scrunched up and covered…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        LOVE THIS! @fsa161

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @fsa161 THANKK YOUU! 😀

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter 3 (Part 1) –
    “Maybe, we’ll both be evil?” Nevaeh suggested, daydreaming about what adventures she would have now that she was going.

    Tanner silently sighed. “Yeahh.” He uttered, thinking about what he had said to his father. Inside, he had no regrets but felt somewhat horrible. He shook it off. “Nice, nice.”

    Nevaeh pursed her lips, eyes…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome, I like leaving on cliffhangers too

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @fsa161 Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
          Cliffhangers are a good way to capture in readers. (wow i sound like i’m trying to kidnap someone.) I also like cliffhangers because of the sense of mystery and intensity they leave.

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Hey guys, I’m back after procrastinating about making a new chapter because that’s just meee. Haha, anywayyy! I’ll post the next chapter in a bit. (hope this isn’t spam).

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 11 months ago

    As I said, here’s the next chapter. It’ll be pretty long so bear with me. I’m not sure how long.

    Chapter 2 –

    Nevaeh looked out the window, it was midnight. Adults guarding everywhere although, not as many as usual. She had seen many people guarding in the last eight years before that. In the last four years, no one was kidnapped,…[Read more]

        iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        Not as long as I thought but longer than the other one.

        odette replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        Nice ! I haven’t read Chapter 1 but this is awesome! Keep it up! 🙂

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 11 months ago

          @odette Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! I’ll read yours when I have the time.

        twilynight replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        This is cool.

        arian2 replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        Nice. Keep on writing!

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @arian2 Thank you! (So sorry for the late reply!)
          I just posted chapter 3 if you wanna check it out. Not forcing.

    iridescentroyalty posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 11 months ago

    This is short, I know but I’m posting the next chapter very soon.

    Chapter 1 –

    Nevaeh Willister sighed, picking at petals of a flower as she sat near a serene river.

    Tanner strolled in. “I knew you’d be here… This place is so princessy, unlike you. ” He said, judgmentally. His eyes scanned around the dewy place.

    Nevaeh shook her head,…[Read more]

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        keep going! :>

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 11 months ago

          I sure will, the next chapter is coming up soon! 😀

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        oh, i’d love it if my character was in your story!
        @Soulreaper
        Name: Lukas Faust
        Age: 14
        School: Good
        Finger-glow: jet black with white streaks, unlocked at a rather untimely afternoon as he was having a bad day. He unlocked it before class, when his tea made his bagel all wet and soggy, and him very frustrated that his fingers started to glow a…[Read more]

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 11 months ago

          I’ll try and include him somewhere in the story. Thanks. 🙂

        arian2 replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        Cool. 😎

          iridescentroyalty replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          @arian2 thanks!! 😀

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