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Chapter 5 – Welcoming
“Why is our side so dark, Tressie?” Tanner asked but was left with no answer, he swished his head around to where he last saw her but the blonde wasn’t there. “Gee, thanks a lot.” He grumbled, plopping down onto a chair.
Nevers slugged in, some were excited while others had a glum, uninviting look on their face. Then Tanner…[Read more]
That moment when you’ve got a plot concept but it confuses you and that means it’ll probably confuse your readers too and you don’t know what you’re doing.
I’m on a roll todayyy!
Chapter 4 Part 3 (final part)
“Didn’t think I’d leave you, sweetie? Did you?” Tressie chimed, gripping tighter onto Tanner’s arm.
All Tanner did was a mere shake of the head in reply, seeming quite nonchalant.
Tressie turned her head to follow the wolves, biting the inside of her bottom lip, mischievously.
Chapter 4 Part 2
The glimmers of sunlight were no more, Tanner had been thrown violently into what seemed like ‘The School for Evil’.
He moaned in pain before helping himself up, his jeans were ripped from getting caught on the edge of a rock as sharp as a knife and he may have been bleeding a little, or maybe a lot… He still was hugging his…[Read more]
Chapter 4 –
“What are you all doing?” A voice perched in. Nevaeh looked for the area of where the sound had come from. Revealed was a statuesque female who had luscious blonde locks that curled at the bottom, she owned a pair of intimidating green eyes which had a illuminating sheen to it and she seemed like the living definition of perfe…[Read more]
Chapter 3 (Part 2) –
Expecting her life’s end, Nevaeh was falling for what seemed like an almost endless amount of time, screaming her apologies to everyone she ever hurt. She looked at the ground from the distance, “I was going to be in Good?!”
A few metres left to death- Something caught her, her eyes were closed, face scrunched up and covered…[Read more]
Chapter 3 (Part 1) –
“Maybe, we’ll both be evil?” Nevaeh suggested, daydreaming about what adventures she would have now that she was going.
Tanner silently sighed. “Yeahh.” He uttered, thinking about what he had said to his father. Inside, he had no regrets but felt somewhat horrible. He shook it off. “Nice, nice.”
Nevaeh pursed her lips, eyes…[Read more]
@fsa161 Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
Cliffhangers are a good way to capture in readers. (wow i sound like i’m trying to kidnap someone.) I also like cliffhangers because of the sense of mystery and intensity they leave.
Hey guys, I’m back after procrastinating about making a new chapter because that’s just meee. Haha, anywayyy! I’ll post the next chapter in a bit. (hope this isn’t spam).
As I said, here’s the next chapter. It’ll be pretty long so bear with me. I’m not sure how long.
Chapter 2 –
Nevaeh looked out the window, it was midnight. Adults guarding everywhere although, not as many as usual. She had seen many people guarding in the last eight years before that. In the last four years, no one was kidnapped,…[Read more]
Not as long as I thought but longer than the other one.
Nice ! I haven’t read Chapter 1 but this is awesome! Keep it up! 🙂
This is short, I know but I’m posting the next chapter very soon.
Chapter 1 –
Nevaeh Willister sighed, picking at petals of a flower as she sat near a serene river.
Tanner strolled in. “I knew you’d be here… This place is so princessy, unlike you. ” He said, judgmentally. His eyes scanned around the dewy place.
Nevaeh shook her head,…[Read more]
oh, i’d love it if my character was in your story!
Name: Lukas Faust
Finger-glow: jet black with white streaks, unlocked at a rather untimely afternoon as he was having a bad day. He unlocked it before class, when his tea made his bagel all wet and soggy, and him very frustrated that his fingers started to glow a…[Read more]