jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 10 months ago

    Since I’ve been gone for so long, I’ve decided to make a new story. The name will be “Her Lost Love”. It’s a story about Adela and her lost love. Here is Adela’s bio.

    Name: Adela of Brookville
    Gender: Female (if you couldn’t tell)
    School: Good
    Appearance: Long wavy brown hair, pale skin, ivory eyes, her light pink blush is almost always…[Read more]

        jackie218 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Forgot age!
        Age: 14

          jackie218 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Guess I should fit some more things about Adela down here…

          Flaws: She’s very…sullen sometimes. Yet she is a princess, and for appearances sake, she has to at least pretend to be happy. She is only sad because of her lost love, Marcus. Marcus was her true love, in her mind at least.
          Personality: Like I said before, she’s sullen and quiet.…[Read more]

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Oh my goodness! I’ve been gone for so long! I’m sorry to those of you who actually liked my story, Hazel’s Failed Love. I feel really guilty that I left, and I told myself that I would come back and I guess here I am. Literally, it’s been about 9 months. I’m so glad I’m back though! I hope you guys welcome me again, and if you would like, I could…[Read more]

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I’ve been gone for that long before 😉 Welcome back!

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Hazels Failed Love
    Chapter 16

    Hazel sat in the lunch hall, pondering Jack. History of Heroism had passed, and he wasn’t there. And he had been hurt. Then Jack came in, with Hannah by his side. He was limping a bit. He asked Hannah to go get a lunch pail for him, and walked by Hazel. Hazel lowered her eyes, realizing she was staring. But a white…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Awesome job! And don’t worry about it, take your time! 🙂

          mm7h replied 4 years, 8 months ago
    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    UPDATE: Please ignore my comment about Hazel being 14 1/2. She is 13. Sorry for any confusion.

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Okay. This would be good to comment under your bio so we don’t clutter the forum 🙂

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Hazels Failed Love
    Chapter 15

    Hazel walked to Princess Etiquette with a rambling Anila beside her. They got to Polluxs class, and sat down near the second row.
    “Quiet!”
    Pollux asked, stuck with a goats body.
    “I shall take attendance. Amy of Wonderland.”
    “Here!”
    “No! You must say present! Here is for peasants!”
    “But that’s what I always say for…[Read more]

        magicanimekitten replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        SO good!

        espilce replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Nice

          jackie218 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks!

          ashofsinacon replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Its so interesting and wish they made that a book you have a great imagination

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    UPDATE: Hi everyone! I’m working on my next chapter and it’ll be out soon. Also, I really like sharing my story with everyone, and I don’t just try to more readers. But that doesn’t mean I wouldn’t like some! Sooooooo, bye!

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        I love sharing my story too! I’ll read your story. 🙂 Whenever you update. See you later!

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Hey everyone! I’ve decided to continue my story. Enjoy!

    Hazels Failed Love
    Chapter 14

    Jack followed Hazel to an empty room. Then he remembered. This was the closet that he had locked.
    “Jack.”
    He looked at Hazel. Hazel had propped up a broom to hold the door. Smart.
    “Yeah?”
    “We need to talk.”
    “Okay, shoot.”
    Hazel took a breath and said,
    “You…[Read more]

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Nice job.

        espilce replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Good job

          heilnofheltia replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          🙁 poor, poor, hazel

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Nice!

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    I’m trying to post more frequently now. Tell me your suggestions. Also, I’m wondering if I should quit this story…It doesn’t seem to attract many readers. Please tell me if I should continue.

    Hazels Failed Love
    Chapter 13

    As Hazel primped her hair for her first day of school, she thought about her mother and father. She’d have to write to them…[Read more]

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        You write well. Really well.
        It’s up to you if you want to quit your story :> I for one, share mine because i like to share, not because I want to rack up on readers – that’s just me.
        Come ooonnnn, you have a nice writing style, so just share it :> the story is up to you :>

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        Nice, I like it!

          horseygal38 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Cool chapter 🙂

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        love it 😉

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Hazels Failed Love
    Chapter 12

    “What? How I can’t even…”
    Elizabeth blubbered. Hazel shrugged. It was a lot to take in. After all, she had just told them about her and Jack. Even Macey seemed surprised.
    “So Jack cheated on Hannah?”
    “But it was the other way around too.”
    Macey reminded Elizabeth.
    “Talk about an unhealthy relationship.”
    Hazel…[Read more]

        jackie218 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        I don’t know why it keeps doing this. The 4 stars were meant to be the word $u<k. Can you see that? Its not bad, I promise.

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        the censor is a bit stupid, we know HAHAH that’s the magic of SGE.com :>

          jackie218 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks! HA!

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 8 months ago

        cool chapter

    jackie218 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 8 months ago

    Hey guys! Sorry I haven’t been posting lately. I’ve been busy. But that’s no excuse! The next chapter of Hazels Failed Love will be out soon! Catch up here–> @jackie218

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