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Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Twenty of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want to h…[Read more]
DID YOU NAME THE FALCON ADIRA?
I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO FLATTERED IN MY LIFE
ignoring the fact that you probably used a random name generator lol
But why were they learning about famous fairy tales in the middle of the year?
Awesome chapter!!! April’s part though 😥
Also wait I didn’t know you were writing a book, what’s it about?
I actually wrote this chapter before I decided to rewrite the rest of the story and probably a month or two before I read your story, heh… so not really after your character, but let’s just say it is XD
I don’t know… I’m terrible at coming up with things for the teachers to, well, teach, so yeah…
Yeah, I’m writing a book, it’s a middle…[Read more]
THIS IS GREAT!!!
I want the US to win, but if not the US then Japan because ANIME AND MANGAAAA
I’ve watched lots of swimming and gymnastics, but a lot of volleyball (the US and China match WAS AMAZING!! China’s blocks were incredible, but USA HAD POWERFUL SERVES AND ATTACKS FHDKLAFAFHLSADF), beach volleyball, 3×3 basketball, and some other things.
OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING!!! Please Fatima is such a beautiful name! Many of my cousins and my friends are named that 😭 It’s a very common Arabic/Muslim name 😊
Ooh, that’s rad! Yes, it’s a very pretty name!
I actually got the idea from the chapter “Fatima Finds a Friend” in OTK, heh.
ACK this site is getting really bad for some reason I didn’t get a notif that you tagged me thank god I scrolled through the forum- and I have some things to say:
1: This is, if I’m going to be honest, the best fanfic I have read so far (Lilacs old fanfic about Ria and Echo is a close second)
2: EEEEEEEEEEEE DO MORE MOON AND BLOSSOM POVS
Yes more Moon/Blossom POVs and if Moon and Blossom do not start dating I will kill Nathaniel myself just to get him out of the way.
Noo don’t kill Nathaniel—
I’m not saying anything about Moon and Blossom, though 🤭😶😬😎🧐
INCREDIBLE AND AMAZING J AS ALWAYS I LOVED THE ENDING TOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!
Ella… I’m not sure if you’re still really on the site anymore, as many aren’t, but I know you’re on Lilac’s and it’s really Good see you again.
You have always been so kind and supportive of everyone! And RPing with you in Level Two was always so much fun, and reading your stories was, too(if they hadn’t been l…[Read more]
I have no idea who this person is so I don’t feel qualified to compliment them.
Yes! Ella is an amazing person who always feels welcoming and it makes me happy to talk to her. Even through typing you can sense a sort of calm and her writing is just as beautiful.
Ella was someone I didn’t get to know as well I as I would’ve liked to, our main interactions being writing our Pollux and Castor RP (we wrote like one or two chapters lol). However, Ella was always nice and kind to everyone and the way she wrote so beautifully is so admirable.
To be honest, I don’t know Ella very well, but I remember my first ever interaction on Rp level 2 or 3 (I can’t remember) and she wrote that I am an amazing writer and that has always stuck with me, while I don’t have many ones to one interaction with her I know that she’s an amazing person and writer I love collaborating with her on the RP forum…[Read more]
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Nineteen of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want t…[Read more]
Oooh awesome!!!! Love love love this!!!!
I’m glad we’re finally getting more insight into Moon’s home life, though halfway through the story is a bit late. But no, it was really really good.
If Daniel is Sophie, is he going to flounce in during the Circus and kill everyone?
Also you know what would be cool if you had some sort of a contest for…[Read more]
I’m glad you liked it! Yeah, it was a bit late, heh.
I don’t know about the killing everyone, but maybe… (Though the way you said it cracked me up XD)
Ooh, that’s a good idea! I should do that; I started to research outfits once and then I was like, “no, that’s too time consuming” XDD
Only if you want, but if you need any help I love fantasy shopping XD
OH WOW WOW WOW YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I LOVE THIS IT REALLY IS INCREDIBLE J! LIKE BEYOND WORDS JUST WOW I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
…I have this weird feeling that Nathaniel’s going to die saving either Moon or Blossom from Danial…Great chapter!
April used to be in denial about Daniel’s terrible ways…
Okay I’ll go now—
And m not planning to have him die, but you never know!
Nathaniel, not Daniel 😅 I feel like Nathaniel’s death wouldn’t really do much.
Daniel, on the other hand, is MUCH more likely to die.
*cough* As a fellow writer I must say that if you killed Nathaniel, then it would leave Moon with only one crush, Blossom, but would also conflict her feelings toward Blossom because she would most likely feel guilty about dating somebody after her first crush has died, making her think she is being unloyal to Nathaniel- but thats just how I see it-
O M G
MOON HAS A CRUSH ON BLOSSOM THAT’S SO SO SO SO CUTE ASLDFJASLKJ
kinda feel bad for her, since blossom is aro though, hopefully if they ever talk about their feelings they can get through that
EEEEE EXCITED FOR CIRCUS!!! YOUR WRITING IS FOREVER AMAZING J THERE WILL BE NO CHAPTER I WILL NOT RUSH TO READ I LOVE IT
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Eighteen of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want t…[Read more]
Wait. . . .this is only part one???
Anyway great chapter!
I mean, this story should have about 29 chapters at the end; that’s how I panned it all out in my notes, but I don’t know what the final number will be quite yet. My book is 30 chapters, so it’s not that long…
DANIEL IS ALWAYS CREEPY HE HAS NEVER BEEN NOT CREEPY AND DON’T WORRY YOU’LL FIND OUT… SOON
WOOOOOOO APRIL QUEEN GET IT GIRL #FREE #AWAY FROM THE VERMIN
WOW THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GREAT AND LOCK WOW SHE WAS FANTASTIC AND BLAPRIL T-TTTT SO INSPIRATIONAL I LOVE IT J, THIS STORY IS PHENOMENAL
OOOO YES GOOD JOB JAYJAY!! YESSS ATHALIA WAS FINALLY MENTIONED 😂🥳 KEEP IT UP JAYJAY I NEED MOREEEE
*narrates like they do in those intense action movies* BlOsSoM iS tOrN bEtWeEn NaThAnIoL aNd MoON! wHo WiLl ShE cHoOsE?! fInD oUt NeXt EpIsOdE oF pAvInG oUr OwN pAtHs! *dUn dUn DuUuUn* great chapter!
Nooooooooo… Don’t get me wrong I love Nathaniel, but Moon and Blossom!!!! They are so cute together DDD:
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Seventeen, Parts Two and Three, of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you h…[Read more]
First!! But I’ll have to read it later cos I’m not meant to be on the screen atm but I know it’s gonna be awesome!!
Lol did you base Moon off of Moonwatcher from Wings of Fire?
No, I’ve never read those books. 😅 Her name was more based off her appearance, to be honest!
INDKSNS OH MY GOD— OKAY THE PROPHECY THINGY MOON SAID GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS AND AAAAAAA JDNSKDMSKZ
P.S Your writing is still amazing Jayjay, don’t even think that it downgraded!
“My way or the freeway is the first asoue reference lol let me finish the chapter
Ughhh I feel you the revamp single-handedly killed my writer’s voice
But no, I don’t think your writing has gotten worse. You know what it is? You’re doing action chapters now, with dialogue and scenes with physical movement. Those never seem as “beautiful” as ones where you’re tracing the character’s thoughts or describing their feelings. Look at…[Read more]
how do you write so fAST
Oh my gosh, supercalifragilisticexpialidocious as usual (srsly i’m running out of adjectives here lads help me–). daniel is acting really sus sus amog us but idk what he’s going to do, and i guess that’s the whole point buT DUDE PLEASE I WANNA KNOWWW
Your writing is still at it’s A++++++ grade so don’t worry J, i love…[Read more]
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AMAZING WRITING J!
Really? That’s weird lol cause in Wings of Fire Moon is the only Nightwing who has the power of prophecy and can see the future and stuff, and her eyes go pearly white when she gives a prophecy-
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Seventeen, Part One, of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have c…[Read more]
Wow… that’s really short. Sorry, everyone! It was longer on my doc. Also, side note, I snuck in a reference to Avatar: the Last Airbender; kudos to whoever can find it!
Yayyyy this is so good I’m so happy we get to see the Trial now!!!
OOOOOOO WOW I loved this and yes a coincidence indeed haha
NOT THE NEVERS RESPECTING APRIL’S PRONOUNS SDLFKJ–
This was a spectacular chapter!! shoot daniel’s gonna s.crew this all up somehow that saintsforsaken ever
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Sixteen of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want t…[Read more]
Also, if I were to post the TbT chapter in parts, I would probably post one every two hours or so, because with the site revamp coming soon, I can’t afford three–six days that will cover only a chapter. But if that’s too frequent, I could post it one go, or y’all could just read them when ready?
Yeah I don’t mind whatever works best for you J, annnnndddd firsttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!
awesome!! Also, for the TbT whatever works best for you and maybe do some characters that haven’t been mentioned a lot, if it works with your storyline of course. And for making the characters we don’t like more likeable, I guess I don’t see them as much so I don’t really know them which is why they aren’t my favourites, but incredible chapter as…[Read more]
Well, I have a theory.
Blapril are secretly axolotls and Daniel needs to destroy them to become the Superior Axolotl Overlord
Sorry, I’ll have to put it later, my dad just yelled at me for writing, I’ll put it in this evening <33
EW stands for a name. Eleanor Woods. Or any e name.
She is Professor Woods’ daughter. She tricked everyone into thinking that her husband aka Daniel is a school student trying to find his princess. Their goal is to get their story written by the Storian. To do this he fools the prettiest girl he can find and the girl he sees the m…[Read more]
Believe it or not I was actually going to ask whether you were taking my advice because I definitely noticed some of those elements, and then I read what you wrote at the bottom! Yeah you did a great job!!!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
REALLY WENT COUNCILMAN SOKKA–
wOOOOO another fantastic chapter!! LEZZ GO MISFITS c R u S h DANIEL YAYYYYYY
this is so so so brilliant and i’m so excited for the tbt and think it would be fantasmical if you did the pov thing
Interesting theory, Lilac…
And actually it went to Chapter Seventeen… I think? But I stopped it after that cause no one was reading it. Or maybe it was only until 17 but I typed up 17? It doesn’t matter 😅 XD
Fun fact: The day I posted 16 was the day the site glitched really bad and I had to post it in the comments—
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Fifteen of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want t…[Read more]
Hmm. . . my favorite character is probably Blossom. My least favorite is probably Daniel, but if I’m being honest, I’m not too crazy about Moon or April either. I liked April at first but honestly. . . how can she be so dumb? She barely even knows this guy! Some more bonding between them may have helped, or better yet, a paragraph or two where…[Read more]
OOOOOO I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! My fav character is probably Blossom or Moon my least fav is def Daniel and Key
Okay, theory time- We’ve established the Daniel Woods thing, and I’ve already theorized that Lady W. is professor Woods, but the one thing I still am confused about is the fact that professor Woods is married, and what that has to do with Lady W. They mentioned a plan in the tower, and said that the fairytale happening would make it harder,…[Read more]
Ahh I’m so sorry I forgot about the bird 😱
Let us pretend that it was, um… off doing… bird-y stuff? 😅
(And oh no… now I’m confusing myself with this plot… it is way more complicated than it used to be-)
Also, YES, we live to hate Daniel… which, in hindsight, sounds really terrible, but whatever 😂
My least favorite character is Blossom. I have already stated the reasons I think she’s an idiot and a pushover. I used to like April but she likes Daniel and he’s a slimeball so… I think my favorite character is Moon.
Yes Daniel’s a slimeball for sure.
Is it weird I want to give him a redemption arc and then have him reject it-
dAnIeL aNd WoOdS aRe AcTiNg suS
Aaand, I think my favorite character is Moon, for no other reason than the fact that I’m partial to characters who are put in the opposite school that they feel like they belong in… 😌✋
Least favorite IS DANIEL LIKE EWWWW
Most favorite has to be April. I relate to her a lot. IDK WHY I JUST DO OKAY?!?!
I love this sooooo much like HFDKJSHFakjl
I’m glad you like her! I really tried to make her relatable and sympathetic instead of just being annoying in the first time around, but I suppose that all kind of went down the drain when Daniel came around, because EVERYONE listed him as their least favorite, XDD. Which I find very funny that everyone did, haha!
Also, Lilac and Lio, y’all have identical avatars AND nearly-identical names! XD
I think Lio’s background is purple and mine’s pink but everything else is the same haha twinsies!! And yeah apart from my username our names are very similar Lilac and Lio XD
EHEHEHE TWINS!!! (yuh i have a purple background but it used to be pink loll)
I mean I have a twin irl but I CAN HAVE ANOTHER-
DANIEL THE RAT HAS BEEN FOUND OUT YES BLOSSOM YES MOON YES ROBIYN AND LOCK AND KEY GO KICK HIS B.UTT
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER WOW IT WAS WRITTEN SO WELL
Favorite character’s April, because she’s so flawed and so likeable at the same time, because all of her moves are justified and you can like feel the emotions seeping out of her. It’s simply…[Read more]
Oh Good; people still like April, I’m so glad, I was worried I had made her unredeemable–
And yes, Daniel the rat has been discovered at last–I love how it’s unanimous that he’s everyone’s least favorite–no one’s even tried to like him XD
But then again that was the sole purpose of creating his personality, really–
I LOVE THIS!!!!
My fav character is probably Moon, just because I like her personality a lot but I also like Blossom, Lock, and Key a lot.
My least favorite character is most definitely Daniel. I have said this about other book and story characters and I will say it again: Daniel is a creepy eel who deserves to die in a ditch.
I rest my case.
Hello everyone! So, I think I’ll be able to post a chapter today, but just in case I can’t, I’m going to be doing a second Picrew drop, hehe. This time it’s for the Misfits, plus Amanda. 🙂
Also, for everyone on Lilac’s site, I joined, and I am Aqua Turner… I tried to change my name to Jafaristhebest, but it wouldn’t let me… just a heads up…[Read more]
Robiyn of Woods Beyond:
Now, normally she doesn’t wear her hair in a bun, but it was the easiest way I could make her have the pink in her hair, which, in reality, is streaked within her curls.
Lock of Drupathi:
Her fingerglow is actually more of an electric blue, but whatever…
Key of Drupathi:
She’s basically Uni-Kitty from Lego Movie XD
So nice until her sister or friend gets hurt and then she goes into rage mode.
Amanda of Jaunt Jolie:
I think that she’s from Jaunt Jolie… I can’t remember, XD, since I never filled out a bio for her… oops!
also, I love Amanda’s, it feels so accurate XDDDDD
i had trouble changing my name on the replacement sge site as well, glad to know it’s not just me
(also yes i’m alive)
WOAH PLEASE THEYRE AMAZING— as much as I dislike Amanda, her outfit is c u t e 😩😭
Hello, hello, hello, and welcome back for Chapter Fourteen of Paving Our Own Paths! All chapters can be found in my activity under favorites, and please let me know if you would like to be tagged/untagged! Also, constructive criticism is very, very much appreciated, you don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings if you have criticism, I want t…[Read more]
Hmmm. . . it isn’t an Atbash Code or a Caesar Cipher. I’m no good at anagrams, but I’ll come back if I figure it out.
I think in the Trial, Daniel will try to kill April. Blossom will sneak in to help and dies in her place.
Let me think about this for a minute, then I’ll comment again.
The first sequence of letters spells “Daniel Woodss” with 2 s’es. But where did the second string come from. . .?
It spells “Woods, Lin’s dead.”
Is Lin their father?
Is that even a guy name
Could someone (Daniel) have been sending a message saying he/she or another Woods killed Blapril’s father???
Oh I get it now. . . it spells “Daniel’s a Woods”
The 2nd sequence is just the first rearranged
Lin is not their father ahaha; that was just a random word I could make with the letters. And no, he wasn’t sending a message, hehe
No, it doesn’t… so, here’s the thing, I accidentally put in another ‘s,’ it seems… oops. So there is actually only one s, heh…
Your first one, ‘Daniel Woods(plus the accidental extra s)’, is actually correct, but now you have to connect the pieces…
Daniel Woods is the son of Lady W.
He/she IS Lady W, and used magic to trick everyone as to why he wasn’t in class
He is Blapril’s dad (I know you said no to this but maybe you were just trying to mislead me. 🤨)
Lady W is Blapril’s mother, and is trying to get Daniel to take the throne somehow.
Idk none of these are very good XD
Is Lady W married to Blapril’s dad (after he left) and Daniel is their son?
Ngl that’s kinda messed up
Adding onto what Lori said, the second is the first rearranged, so just Blossom making sense of it in her brain. There is only one A, so I think it’s Daniel S. Woods. S is the first letter of his middle name I’m guessing
I feel kinda bad that half the comments on this post are from me 🤣🤣🤣
Daniel is probably related to Prof. Woods in someway shape or form and they are working together to do something sus… and Daniel needs power for that which is why he took interest in Blossom and April. Just me trying to be somewhat of a bigbrain. AAAAAH THIS IS SO GOOD!!! AND HAVE BLOSSOM AND MOON KISS NOT APRIL AND THAT DISGUSTING ROACH OF A BOY.
Professor Woods is Lady W. Blaprils dad is the knight that supposedly “vanquished” her, and Daniel is Lady W’s son. He is helping her to regain power by marrying April or Blossom, and he plans on killing Blossom because April is the one who loves him. Just a guess but I thought it sort of made sense
Yeah, I’d like to see it, please! I just want to know how my information is being used and such. 🙃
Okie, I added a page on it on the website but I’ll put it here too
On the site Fanfiction and Socialising, we do not collect personal data. While it may be in our system we have nothing to do with it. This site is purely for the enjoyment of the users and the use of writing and chatting to people online. We do not use the…[Read more]
okay, so Lady W. is Professor Woods
Daniel is her son
it spells Daniel Woods
or maybe Daniel IS Lady W
seriously, why is April still falling for Daniel?!?
I love this so much amazing chapter!
I’m really behind on reading this story, but awesome chapter. Is it wrong that Ir really hate Blossom? Idk I just feel like she’s such a puchover and should never ina million years be Queen. I also feel like she has so many oppurtunities to make things right and to help other people and she just doesn’t. Also Daniel is obviousely a Woods that’s…[Read more]
I honestly like Blossom the best, but maybe it’s because I relate to her the most…? Though I can totally see where you’re coming from; she should definitely not be Queen, XD, it would go very badly.
And on topic of your theory… W does stand for Woods, and I wish that they were axolotls bree.ders, but they aren’t… Though, maybe I should make…[Read more]
j how do you continue to stun me after every chapter T-T
THAT APRIL POV THO WHEN SHE LISTENED TO BLOSSOM OMG AAAH I’M CRYING
also i’m hopeless with these theories listen to lori she’s smart