jasminebeard123

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    jasminebeard123 posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi!!! I decided to continue my RP POV, before @demonz4life and her POV, so here it goes:
    Mare’s POV
    (Plague RP) PT.2
    The battle begins. Cody pulled out his long sword from his sheath. He decided to strike for my neck and I dodged the attacks. I ran toward him, with my rapier in hand and tried to aim for his thigh. He successfully blocked the attack and flung my sword out of my hands. He threw his long sword to the side. He got really close to me and I kneed him in the thigh. He yelped in pain, and the battle was over.
    “What was that for?”he asked me. I looked at him and sighed. He looked so handsome under the sun, if he was a little tanner and cut his hair a bit, all the girl’s would be all over him. I feel a sense of embarrassment, to have lost to a girl. I wonder if he was going easy on me.
    “You better have given that battle you’re all,” I screamed at him. My cheeks turned bright pink, realizing that I looked stupid. I flipped my hair, retrieved my rapier, and walked off.
    “Hey!” He yelled, “I didn’t catch your name.”
    “Marlee Cobax, but you can call me Mare.” He looked at me with astonishment as I pranced away. Such a moment could not be forgotten, the beauty of such a moment, forever. That is how long I would remember, the warmth of his hand as he tried to grab mine. I saw a twinkle in his eye. A faint smile, an innocent little smile. And a story, he told a story with those eyes of his. My heart fluttered as I got to class.

        sherlock replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Just keep in mind, we try not to POV twice in a row. We prefer to have one long POV to two short ones. Also, please don’t ship an OC with another one of your own OCs without creating a bio for the love interest. Although shipping your own character with another one of your own characters is allowed, it’s not too common because it’s not as fun or as collaborative as having a ship with two different people’s characters.

          solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Yeah. The best ships on this forum – Opalairis, Cariana, Sherlockary, (these are all from the old RP *cries*) etc., etc., all happened naturally. It’s much more interesting for others to read and interact with, in addition to usually having better writing and character development, if you let relationships develop organically.

          jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Cody Is @demonz4life POV character

          jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          And I’m Sorry About Making 2, but I had an idea, so I wrote another. I could take them both down and re post them together. (If It Matters That much.)

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Pretty much what @sherlock said.

        demonz4life replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        That was Good! I’ll write cody’s POV now.

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        *your

        What the others said. Nice job 🙂

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