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CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES
Chapter Four
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I paled when Evelyn started whispering his name.
“Lyn, what’s happening-”
“HE’S NOT EVIL!” she shrieked madly. My eyebrows creased – what in Storian’s name was she talking about? Who was she talking to? Also, who was the he? “AUGGIE DOESN’T DESERVE THAT!”
Okay, so my…[Read more]
Updated taggles with (future) cast 💖 :
@/lalagiza ~ Creator of Innalia
@/blaze5681 ~ Creator of Conan
@/chloelk ~ Creator of Cascadia
@/davysmavy ~ Creator of David
@/2iycrb2qawutob ~ Creator of Elenora
@/yay5681 ~ Creator of Melody
@/anadilforever7 ~ Creator of Thalia
@/mrforkle4-0 ~ Creator of Wesly
@/jasmineever01 ~ Creator of Jasmine…[Read more]
Sorry wait what blood? Um, I thought that they drank nectar?!
XD they do, it’s just sometimes if some types of butterflies have access to blood, say a carcass or dead animal in the wild, they’ll happily drink it. They aren’t really capable on inflicting wounds to drink from on humans though!
Eek! You portrayed Innalia perfectly! SOO GOOD!!!!
Ahh Conan was portrayed perfectly too!! I love this story!!!
Yay, tysm!!!
I love this! I would also like to submit a bio if that’s ok. Here you go: also TAG ME!
Name: Naomi White
Nicknames (if any): Mi
Age: 13
Pronouns: She/her
Sexuality: Straight
School: Good
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Snow White’s daughter
Kingdom: Wherever Snow is from
Personality: Loud, braggy, generous, selfish, loyal, sincere,…[Read more]
Thank you!!!! Awesome bio too, I’ll try and get her in next chapter!
That was awesome!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
I love this chapter so much, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing amber!!!!!
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!:)
CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES
Chapter One
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I sighed as the scarlet butterfly in my palms stretched its wings.
“Go to bed,” its harmonious flap.s and prickles of antennae seemed to whisper. “It’s late for you humans, is it not?”
“Depends… Auggie is still sleeping, even though it’s his time for watch, and I’d rather not…[Read more]
Aaaa so excited! Can’t wait to read this after school!
Taggg this is amazing!!!!!
Omg this is so good!!! Tagg and I want to submit a bio! Where is dee template lol
Thank you all!!!!! 😀
~~~~~~~~BIO TEMPLATE~~~~~~~~
Name:
Nicknames (if any):
Age:
Pronouns:
Se.xuality:
School:
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any):
Kingdom:
Personality:
Appearance and Casual Outfit:
Outfit (Snow / No Ball):
Talent:
Fingerglow Colour:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Backstory (if you wish):
Crush (if any):
If you were…[Read more]
Tag me! Oh my god its about Evelyn Sader’s life! Ahh this is gonna be so good.
This is really good, I will submit a bio too I just need a template
TAG I need a template
people who wanted the template:
@jasmineever01
@lalagiza
@yay5681
@anyoneelse!
Btw, you can use your own if you wish:)
~~~~~~~~BIO TEMPLATE~~~~~~~~
Name:
Nicknames (if any):
Age:
Pronouns:
Se.xuality:
School:
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any):
Kingdom:
Personality:
Appearance and Casual Outfit:
Outfit (Snow / No Ball):
Talent:
Fingerglow…[Read more]
TAGGLES AAAH THIS IS SPECTACULAR
ugh, i have writer’s block.
AAHHHH TIS SO GOOD!! HERE’S MY BIO:
Name: Cascadia
Nicknames (if any): Dia (she prefers this name)
Age: 16-17 (whatever you need!)
Pronouns: She/her
Se.xuality: Bi
School: Good
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Her great grandmother is Ariel
Kingdom: A tiny island named Laguna off the shore of Jaunt Jolie
Personality: Dia gets bored easily and s…[Read more]
tysm!!!! Dia will hopefully be in some future chapters:)
TAGGG! this is so good and it not boring and here is a bio
Name: David Kuji
Nicknames (if any):Davy
Age: 14
Pronouns:he/him
Se.xuality: Gay
School: Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Captain hook is his grandfather
Kingdom: Bloodbrook
Personality:He is always in need of a good book, He is very smart and he knows it. He often has feelings of…[Read more]
Thanks!!!!! Cool bio too, I’ll try and put Davy in a future chapter!
Awesome!! Here’s my bio 😀
Name: Elenora
Nicknames (if any): El, Ellie
Age: 16
Pronouns: she/her
Se.xuality: straight
School: good
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): niece of Jasmine
Kingdom: Agrabah
Personality: Ellie is a kind and happy person, she loves to laugh and have fun, she can be a bit bossy at times but is never put down for it. She has…[Read more]
Name: Melody
Nicknames (if any): Mel
Age: 13
Pronouns: she/her
Se.xuality: Bisexual
School: Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): None that she knows of
Kingdom: Bloodbrook
Personality: Melody is sweet, odd, and innocent. People tend to stay away from her because of her weirdness but once people see past that, Melody is fiercely loyal and kind.…[Read more]
Cool, thank you both!!! I’ll hopefully use your characters sometime when they get to school! I love El’s outfit for the Snow ball, and Melody having a crush on August is fine, but if she’d ask him out he’d say no because he LiKeS someone else…. XD
Tag plz! You’re writing is really good!
I will submit a bio later!!
AGH THIS IS SO GOOOD!!!!
Random oc cause yea…
Name: Thalia Harrow
Nicknames (if any): Harrow
Age: whatever fits the story
Pronouns: she/her
Se.xuality: Aro ace
School: Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Blue fairy
Kingdom: Camelot but moved to Foxwood
Personality: Thalia is very manipulative. She has a lot of charisma that Thalia uses to get people to do what she…[Read more]
Thank you Bry!!!!
I’ll also try and use your (anadilforever7’s) OC in a future chapter!:)
TIS SO AMAZINGGGGGGG
I DONT REMEMBER IF I COMMENTED OR NOT BUT I LOVED THIS CHAPTERRRRRR
THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, next chapter is nearly half-way finished (I’ll try and put some of your characters in Chapter 3 or 4 btw) so it’ll be coming either today / tomorrow!!!
Name: Conan
Nicknames (if any): None
Age: 16
Pronouns: he/him
Se.xuality: Straight
School: Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): None that he knows of.
Kingdom: Netherwood
Personality: Conan is dark, quiet, and doesn’t trust anyone. Even if he is your friend he will not fully trust you and he will be very paranoid. Conan is handsome but not every g…[Read more]
Thanks!!!
BRILLIANT!!! I can’t wait to read.
Name: Lady Innalia Burner
Nickname: Inna (by Evelyn), Nala, Lili
Age: 14
Pronouns: She/her
Se.xuality: Straight
School: School for Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Alice of Wonderland (aunt)
Kingdom: Foxwood
Personality: She’s very warm and optimistic for a Never. She will help anyone and be kind to them no…[Read more]
Tysm!!!
TAggg!! and here
Name: Wesly
Nicknames (if any): Wes
Age: 15
Pronouns: he/him
Se.xuality: bi, questioning gay
School: Halfer but choose to be in evil for some reason
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): none
Kingdom: Camelot
Personality: Very kind and trustworthy, He hates traitors and never leaves someone behind. He is very truthful and doesn’t lie (…[Read more]
Cool, thank you!!!!:)
This is TOTALLY not what I was expecting!!!!!!!! (AWWTW gave you a high bar to reach- no offemse 😏) Amazing, Amber!!! Truly, Amazing!
Tysm!!!:) But oooh what were you expecting then?? XD I haven’t written something this chill for ages, lol it’s nice. (no offense taken, though the bar for AWWTW was so low and this is me setting it 10x higher with this series, hopefully)
Pffffff! You make me laugh, Ambi! If I ever wrote something HALF as good as AWWTW, I’d get it published and then have myself cloned so I can continue to write like Shakespeare for many more years 😌
haha, you say that and then-
I’m in fits of laughter-
If I wrote something a THIRD as good as From the Ashes / BFT I’d like…. I wouldn’t need a job, I’d use my awesomeness to write a similar novel and get it published, then make an ARMY of clones so I can write like…. uh, Shakespeare for many more CENTURIES! 🤣
Uno reverse card 🤚
um, Storian reverse card-
there should totally be a SGE card game
Name: Jasmine Ali
Nicknames (if any): Jaz (She prefers Jasmine but her close friends call her Jaz nonetheless)
Age:15 (I don’t mind if u want to make her 16)
Pronouns:She/her
Se.xuality: Closeted Bisexual, Pansexual Questioning (Only her close friends know this and most of her crushes are girls)
School: Good
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): The…[Read more]
K I’ve read some of the bios other people have submitted and for Crush here u go lol: Elenora, Jasmine has a crush on her and only her close friends know about it, it’s not obvious at all as everyone thinks she’s straight, she has zero chance with her as she’s straight and won’t ever do anything about it but is still a lot nicer to her than…[Read more]
Cool, thank you!!!!!:)
Ooh, this was a great start to your fanfic! I can’t wait for more!!
~~ My bio ~~
Name: Sandol
Nicknames (if any): Dae, Dee
Age: 13
Pronouns: she/her
Se.xuality: straight
School: Good
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): her mother is the Twelfth Dancing Princess
Kingdom: Maidenvale
Personality: Logical, disciplined, and ambitious. Thoughtful,…[Read more]
Thank you so much!!!!!!
Fintan, about Keefe: Apparently we’re getting someone new in the group.
Umber: Are we stealing them?
Ruy: New or used?
Fintan: Wonderful responses, both of you.
Alana: *Kicks the door down looking panicked*
Silvy: What did you do?
Alana: Nobody died.
Silvy: WHAT KIND OF ANSWER IS THAT?!
Evelyn: Well, aren’t you all a rag-tag group of adv…[Read more]
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I love these XDDDDD
AHAHAHAHAHA THESE ARE PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LOL I LOVE THESE PLZ MAKE MORE THE HORT HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL ONE WAS *mwah* AMAZING
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i love these-
AHHH I LOVE THESE PLEASE MORE
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LOL I’m not sure if I could. It IS semi-related to SGE, but . . . with these new rules . . .
new rules…?
STuPiD RuLes
I will try to be patient
It was rly funny tho-
Yes-
i <3 these but i hate the $tup!d rules :(((((((((
🙁
10,561 favorites-
Aye-
Yes, although some are to protect younger users
oof
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We’re coming to the end of~A Witches Way to Win ~ btw, only 2 more chapters left (for real this time lol). This is the final arc, and is a little dark but not to bad. It’s a repost btw, sorry, I just had to change a few things! Enjoy….
Chapter 27: DARE
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“You really need to work on your villainous stateme…[Read more]
Danggggg!!
NO NO NO
JOSHUA SUX S**T HE IS SUCH A S****Y B***H EURGH
THIS IS HREAT OMG I CANT EVEN WAIT-
omg XD
he got what was coming though. *cackles evilly in having just written the next chapter*
Hi I’m new to this website, but I just saw this and it’s AWESOME! I’ve never SERENA better fanfiction before! I’ve been trying to find one forever! This feels like it was VAYLAR-made, lol!
EEEEEEEEKKKKKKK!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!! (if it aint you I’ll look soooo stupid) And thank you so much!!!!!
@anastasia32 (<- she may one to know and she's commented too)
*want
And omg, welcome to the site Wyn!!!!!!!!!!! It’s a fantastic website – just don’t quote the bee movie and try not to die! (<- I have no idea why people add that into their welcoming speech, but I'll roll with it! XD) Queen of Subtlety lol
😌👌 very subtle
Welcome to CHAPTER 3 of my dystopian fiction! If anyone has any good names, please say so bc i’m running blank. Let’s go!
Pandora
As soon as I walk in, my personality set appropriately to sweet and adorable, I wave to everyone cheerily. But not too cheerily, of course. That would be unfashionable. ‘Hey, Pandora!’ someone yells. I look in their d…[Read more]
Yesssssssss watch out Panda I shall get youuuuuuuuu
(Yes I’m calling her Panda now)
u r calling her panda now? ummm…. ok lol
XD Panda
oh my gosh, Bianca is so socialy awkward, I LOVE IT
also maybe Panda could be someone’s nickname for Pandora?
it can be Tash’s
Yes, this is awesome!
Piper’s so adorable and her welcome was SPOT ON. I love this!!
hey @/death ringer would you like me to tag u or not? 🙂
*deathbringer
Oh yeah, I forgot to say, you can change Aleksei’s age to whatever everyone else’s age is.
Yeah I would love to be tagged! thanks!
Yay you portrayed Cass perfectly 👏👏 awesome chapter!!
HEYYYY Y”ALLLLLLLLLLLL
I’m back
With another chapter of my unnamed dystopian fiction! This one’s short, but efficient. (You’l notice i changed her name from nicola to nicole. idk why, i just preferred nicole)
Without further ado…… I present to you Chapter 2!
Nicole
Ugh, it’s that witch Pandora again. What’s next, is she gonna change her…[Read more]
This is wonderful! (Nicole reminds me a bit of Agatha.)
ik i based her off agatha
aww, thank u!
this is great!!
I love this!!! I didn’t expect another chapter so fast lol not complaining though!!
this is absolutely fantastic! I love Nicole’s just disgust of remodeling. She’s not even being that mean about it, she’s just like “hah hah NO”
yesssss 😀
Awesome!!!
Absolutely awesome!!!
Hi Evers, Nevers and Halfers! Welcome to my currently unnamed dystopian fiction! If your character hasn’t been introduced yet I promise they will be, and some bios are mentioned briefly. Hope you enjoy!
Pandora
Who am I?
It’s a question that at first seems simple but it’s one I don’t know the answer to. That feels… terrifying.
I’ve changed mys…[Read more]
FIRSTTTTTTTTTTT now read Tash read-
Well this has got to be the best introduction I’ve ever had: Look there’s Tash she’s a murderer XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD tysm this is great!!!!!!!!!
Taggles!!! Can I submit a bio?
ofc!
✨✨✨✨np! and ur hanging out with dun dun dun! The Knife
FGTYUJTREWRTHHGRFE YESSSSSSSSSSSS (who’s dat btw??)
That’s me! (or my OC)
nice!
one of my bios lol (dw he’s a criminal)
ohhh ok OOH ARE WE GONNA BE IN YOUR CLASS?
yep
Okk well don’t blame me when everyone mysteriously disappears and their bodies turn up in a river a few days later >:)
tash u r gonna sit next to pandora in class
dw i will find a way for u to subtly torture, insult and humiliate her all at the same time
awesome tyy
sure
Here’s my bio-
Name: Cassandra Wither
Age: everyone else’s
Personality: loyal, loving, kind, can be hot headed but will always protect you whether or not your friends, loves to laugh and hang out with her friends
Appearance: long wavy chestnut hair, light teal eyes, freckles across her tanned nose and face, slim yet muscular black belt in kar…[Read more]
could you add stuff specific to my story—
do they support remodelling?
how many times have they remodelled?
social status
popularity
who are they friends with?
or u cud check my activity to when i first posted the idea and in the comments i posted my bios
Here’s the rest of my bio 🙂 also the starred word is su.cked
do they support remodelling? yes
how many times have they remodelled? 1
social status medium/normal
popularity: not that popular but has a few close friends
who are they, friends, with? Pandora, Piper, Ali (Is it okay that my character and your character are friends? @LINHCAT131)
that was literally amazing! 😀 I can’t wait to see what happens when Pandora and Piper meet their new class!
Also, what are the defining traits of Piper and Pandora?
YAYAY PIPER IS INRODUCED!!! lol I loveee this story so far!!
idk… piper is just bubbly and pandora is inwardly thoughtful, outwardly obnoxious
OMG SO GOOD!!!
sureeeee
Ah, I love this so far!!! Pandora and Piper are kind of unlikely friends but they companionship is so nice 😀
*their
yes i do 🙂 if you look on my activity it’s there…
but i’ll put it here as well
Name:
Nickname:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Defining feature:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Backstory:
Social status (popular, normal, unpopular etc.):
How many times have they been ‘remodelled’?:
Do they support remodelling?:
Link to the story (are th…[Read more]
Another question: Do you have Pinterest cuz I will send you a link to a board of my character, so you have a better idea what my character looks like
WELCOME BACK!!!!
After a long wait… here is chapter 5!!!!!
✨a m a z i n g . t a g g l e s✨
@catsforeverandever– Lauwren
@rainbowlion–Adora/Lio
@jasmineever01–Jasmine
@2iycrb2qawutob– Sloane/Alexa
@lilab
@thestoriangirl
@davysmavy
@delilahkitty
@evieofbloodbrook
@theevilenchantress
Chapter 5– Confrontation
Right. I’m not that weakling again. I’m…[Read more]
AWESOME!!! CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE!!
:))))))))))) thanks!!!
Great job! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
😮 I LOVED IT! You write so beautifully 🥺
thank u u too!!
AAAAAAH I LOVE HOW I WAS BEING A CHATTERBOX
Yep, that’s definitely me LOL
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
I love thisssss!!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter
@cattyrose
@linhcat131
@blaze5861
@chloelk
@goodrocksforever
@shadowshinobi
Hi! So, if you want to submit a bio could you please submit it today? Just because once I have all my bios I can get properly started 🙂
Thanks!
Full Name: Tasherit Aurelius
Nickname: Tash
Age: whatever fits the story best
Se.xuality: lesbian
Pronouns: she/her
Gender: female
Kingdom: Netherwood
Fairytale Relative: daughter of Maleficent
Fingerglow: jet black
School: evil
Special Talent: Has a soul snake called Nylo. Nylo is a slender ruby red snake with jet eyes about half a metre long. He…[Read more]
thats great! how would you like tash to be introduced?
what is the plotline again?
sure…
Imagine a world where you can be whoever you want to be. You can change your flaws, your appearance, your personality, you can change who you are. That’s how far science has evolved in Utopia, an extremely advanced civilisation. Pandora is the social queen, the popular gossip girl. But she’s remodelled herself so much she doesn’t even…[Read more]
ah ok idc how you introduce Tash just make her cool lol
Ok Ima submit a bio now!
Name: Piper
Nickname: nothing i guess
Age: the other characters age
Appearance: Piper has a bright pale face, long straight white blond hair that goes down to her waist, sweet hazel eyes, and is tall.
Personality: Piper is very sweet, energetic, but kind of ditzy. She’s mostly oblivious to everything and goes through life…[Read more]
i already submitted a bio right?
what was your characters name?
Bianca
oh yeah then you did :))
Oh, I’ll submit a bio a little later today – i have to get to school
k np
Sure! This is not me, this is my OC.
Name: Aleksei Morozov
Nickname: The Knife (everyone calls him that since he’s a criminal known for being very “sharp”)
Age: 16
Appearance: Extremely sharp cheekbones, deathly pale, brilliant, cold, calculating, piercing blue eyes, short dark brown hair (or just black, doesn’t matter), tall, lean, slim,…[Read more]
cool thx
Can I have the bio template? I have to go to school soon, but I’d really like to make a bio.
@sophiethequeengoddess
Name:
Nickname:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Defining feature:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Backstory:
Social status (popular, normal, unpopular etc.):
How many times have they been ‘remodelled’?:
Do they support remodelling?:
Link to the story (are they friends/enemies/related to then,aim character or not…[Read more]
Name: Ara Lain
Nickname: Arie
Age: 16
Appearance: Longish wavy blond hair, eyes that are mainly starburst purple but also have yellow, green, blue, and gray in them. Other than her hair and eye color, she looks kind of like the actress that played Clove in The Hunger Games Movie.
Personality: Crazy and fangirly. She sometimes makes jokes that come…[Read more]
sure! thanks and would you like to be tagged?
Name: Jasmine Ali
Nickname: Jas (She prefers Jasmine but her close friends call her Jas nonetheless)
Age: Same as everyone else but one of the youngest e.g if everyone was 14-15 she would be 14
Appearance: Wavy black waist-length hair that she usually wears in a plait or sometimes down, coal black eyes, Medium brown skin, 5ft, slim pear shaped…[Read more]
@Agathatedros06 My wifi has been really glitchy so I had to submit my bio again, I’m also really curios to see how you write my character as it can be hard to write about a character that jokes around a lot, as there is a thin line between funny and cringe
*curious
ok 🙂
CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES
Chapter Six
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I tried to push open the door three times before I discovered that there was a handle to pull.
With a stupid upward twitch of the lips despite my tears, I slipped into the School for Good. A sweet scent of candy and flowers greeted me. Ever’s laughter and chatting echoed t…[Read more]
I have been waiting so long for this one! That other boy wanting Naomi the “Dark-haired beauty” is perfect! Loved it! 🙂
Thank you so much!!!!
again, another great chapter
and for the writing about blind sader, I suggest you look up something like how to write blind characters. and also try not to make it like his life is boring without being able to see. My stepbrother is blind and he says he doesn’t like when authors make it seem like their life is boring or mundane.
anywasy those are…[Read more]
:)Thank you!!!! Those tips were really helpful, I did look up something like that a while ago, but I just looked back to refresh. (yeah, I don’t want to come off as offensive or anything like that by being uneducated, when August is just as capable as others and his sister)
Tag! Your writing is incredible!
Name: Andric
Nicknames (if any): Stiltskin
Age: Whatever the other students are
Pronouns: He/him
Se.xuality: Asexual heteroromantic
School: Evil
Fairy-tales Relatives (if any): Rumpelstiltskin (father)
Kingdom: Ravenswood
Personality: He’s intelligent, manipulative and cunning with a knack for fooling people. He h…[Read more]
Thanks!!!!! Nice bio too
Oooo this is really great! Would you like me to give you another bio?
Thank you!!!! And I don’t mind
I loved this chapter so much!! It’s so well written!
aww and august is such a nice character i love him sm
Thank you!!!!!! yesss, August is the best, and he’s so fun to write!
I loved this sooo much!! Ellie is portrayed perfectly!!!
Yay, and tysm!!!!!
That is a very good character! I especially love her full title!
Thanks!!!! ^ I agree, cool character I’ll hopefully use in a chapter at some point
Yes please. And if you make more, then could you tag me?
I love this so much omg
Tysm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)