jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 months, 2 weeks ago

    A Spark of Daylight and Darkness
    Chapter 1: Daylight
    Phoenix – Year 1
    My eyes glitter in the sunlight, my hair blowing in the wind. I sigh at the gates of the School for Good as beautiful princesses walk past me, giggling as nymphs and gnomes take their trunks up to their rooms.
    “Hi!” A cheerful voice pops up from behind me and I scream. Peo…[Read more]

        takan replied 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        Tag me pls! 🙂

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 months, 2 weeks ago

    I’m BAAAAAACK! Here’s the next storyyyyyy!
    Name: Phoenix
    Age: 16
    School: Good
    Appearance: deep red hair, blue eyes, fair skin, freckles, tall, thin, beautiful, small nose
    Personality: friendly, fierce, kind, sweet, brave, compassionate, loyal, stubborn, ambitious, honest, calm, bold, charming, confident, creative, disciplined, temperamental,…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

        holy cow that’s a lot of adjectives you placed over there… i don’t quite get how pride is a flaw considering its like a noun?? igneous is a rather interesting name considering it’s a rock type LOL. cool bios!!

          ruby0fwoodsbeyond replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          pride can be a flaw *cough* annabeth

          evilerruler845 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          pride is a noun. and do you mean Annabeth from PJO? if so i do know her. prideful , on the other hand, is a different matter entirely. it’s not bad if you have pride. i’d just like the writer to clarify what they’re saying.

        lilystarling replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

        Cool

        jellybean886 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

        @evilerruler845, Well the technical word for pride as a flaw is hubris and that’s what Annabeth had. It’s an excessive amount of pride, to the point that it’s almost arrogance, which was what I was kind of going for here. Pride can also be satisfaction from accomplishing something, which I think that was what you were thinking. But it’s basically hubris.

          evilerruler845 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          but you just said the amount of pride is the difference here. i’m rly sry for being nitpicky, but pride is not a flaw. Hubris is, as you pointed out.

          merqueen23 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          “Humus? You mean that stuff they put on sandwiches?” -Percy Jackson

          evilerruler845 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          THERE IS NO HUMUS.
          The only stuff they put on sandwiches are your dad’s sloshy, sickly seawater.
          -Evilerruler845

        merqueen23 replied 4 months, 1 week ago

        Posidon is awesome!

          evilerruler845 replied 4 months, 1 week ago

          ONLY WHEN HE’S NICE

        merqueen23 replied 4 months, 1 week ago

        Just like me!

        jellybean886 replied 4 months ago

        Okay well, whatever. I’ll just keep writing my story and I’m not going to repost the bios just to change that.

          merqueen23 replied 4 months ago

          oh, absolutely not! I know i wouldn’t!

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 5 months, 3 weeks ago

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    Chapter 3
    INDIGO
    My arms ached as I swept the last of the dust off the stones leading to my house. Pasha Dunes is often dusty from sandstorms. I went to walk back to my house and heard my foster mother yell.
    “Keep going Indigo.…[Read more]

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 3 weeks ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    Chapter 10: Larenalvaellyn
    ~Feyre~
    Larenalvaellyn is a cruel, unforgiving place. Father is abusive, and Mother can’t help us. She fears for our lives if Andrei gets into his rages. I hear heavy footsteps coming down the hall, so I pretend to study my books like Father told me to, instead of staring out the window at a f…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

        That’s so emotional!

          jellybean886 replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

          🙂 Thank you for commenting on every post, it makes me feel like people are reading my story. 🙂 I want to be a writer when I grow up, and I know it’s a long shot… 🙁

        sapphy replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

        No, I’m sure you can!

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    Chapter 9: Quest
    ~Elia~
    “Ow.” I wince as I get up and clutch my chest. Austin walks over with his overly-confident smile and scoops me up into his arms, and my heart stops for a moment. I’m too shocked to slap him, so he carries me down the hall to a round table. There’s a bunch of people around it, and a name flashes t…[Read more]

        jellybean886 replied 11 months ago

        Starred out word 1: s n o b b y
        Starred out word 2: s n o t t y
        🙂

        sapphy replied 11 months ago

        YESSSSSSSS CAMILLLLLEEEEE

        jiya replied 11 months ago

        Where can I find the other chapters

          jellybean886 replied 11 months ago

          If you click on my avatar, it brings you to my activity, and you can scroll down until you find chapter 1! 🙂

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months, 2 weeks ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    Chapter 8: The Newbies and Allergies
    ~Elia~
    You know how everyone has fatal flaws? I have a particularly bad one that has recently been established: I’ll give up anything for Austin. This is terrible! Now, someone can use him as leverage along with my family. In my opinion, I’m not afraid of anything. At least, that’s what…[Read more]

        evilisbest1000 replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago

        Great job.The part here the food fight started as hilarious.

          jellybean886 replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thank you!

    jellybean886 posted an update 12 months ago

    For all y’all people who wanted to be tagged, HERE IS YOUR CHANCE to make my story better by responding to the Google Form below. I’ll use your feedback to shape my story with mixes of everybody who responds. PLEASE respond. Also, tell me if the link doesn’t work. It does that sometimes.…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 11 months, 4 weeks ago

        Thanks!

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 12 months ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    Chapter 7: Thorns and Roses
    ~Elia~
    I hate Forest Group 8. Last time, A blue doe almost trampled me, I dropped a bucket of worms that a Never handed to me on Brianna (at least she was nice about it), and Jabu the gnome leader smacked a bunch of people with his tree cane.
    “Hurry up, Elia,” Camille knocks impatiently on the doo…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 12 months ago

        1. They’re really well-thought-out and I love the characters
        2. Camille and Liv, because they’re interesting and have great potential for development.
        3. Loved it, and I have one criticism. Elia is great, but she seems a bit too powerful sometimes. Maybe give her one thing that really, really makes her ill, or weak, or something, like a massive…[Read more]

          jellybean886 replied 12 months ago

          Thank you! I’ll include some flaws in her next chapter. She actually has quite a few: hates clowns and public speaking, allergic to pollen, afraid of spiders, and she’ll do anything for her family and someone else… thank you for the comments!

        jellybean886 replied 12 months ago

        7:00 am EDT

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 12 months ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    I’m doing something a little different this time around. I’d like to try it and see what you think! Here are four letters from Elia, Austin, Alec, and Camille’s parents.
    Parents:
    Elia: Calista and Kras
    Austin: Penelope and Ayden
    Camille: Lilya and Gael
    Alec: Luna and Zion
    Chapter 5: The Parent Letter
    To: Elia Fedn. From: Calis…[Read more]

        sapphy replied 12 months ago

        Oooh! What did Alec do with the letter?

        jellybean886 replied 12 months ago

        Alec put it on his desk. Sorry, I added it and then accidentally deleted it. 🙂

          sapphy replied 12 months ago

          Ooops, thanks!

    jellybean886 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year ago

    The Heart of an Elf
    Chapter 4: Aronis/Elia in the Trial By Tale
    ELIA’S POV
    It’s been a month since I last spoke to Austin. Every time I see him, to say thank you for not telling anyone, I end up turning around and hiding. Camille and Alec know because I told them two weeks ago. Camille treats me the same, but Alec edges away from me like I’m a bom…[Read more]

        jellybean886 replied 1 year ago

        Also, sorry this is so long!

        sapphy replied 12 months ago

        Wow!!!

        tagathalady replied 12 months ago

        Wow that chapter is really good!!

          jellybean886 replied 12 months ago

          Thank you!

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