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Ok so yesterday I posted this chapter and then that night during a wonderous bout of insomnia I relized I never actually wrote the last clue??? Nobody seemed to notice tho … ok so here’s the FINISHED chapter. We’re just going to pretend this is the first time this is being posted, OK?
Hi! so ive been thinking about all of u and how much i miss u and i was wondering if this friday u guys would want to have a rp sleepover!! i miss u all so much and i want us to talk about how life has been and what we do when we are bored and some ideas we might have on the new book. Also i really want more follower on twitter and tik tok (ik im…[Read more]
I thought of FRIENDS when I read that!
I’ll be there for youu
When the rain starts to pourrr
Anyway, I’ll come!
“YES!!! Oh my glitterglue which nightgown am I gonna wear???”
She has like three dozen nightgowns and pairs of slippers to choose from…XD
Oh gosh I would but I have a lot of things going on and don’t want to overboard on things. Super happy you’re back though!! Hi!!
Tips for writers
How to get better at writing (generally):
I’d never be able to extensively answer that question, well that’s a lie, I’m too lazy to do it extensively. I’ll leave that up to the other writing advice columns.
The short answer is that there are three stages of growing as a writer (in my opinion) and most people will never get past…[Read more]
Hello! May I start righting my story now? Or are we all writing the same one
You can, we are not writing the same story. But most of us are writing about the SGE universe. I’ve included a guide incase you’re unsure where to start and if you’re new to this site.
Just start writing and we’ll guide you along the way. But if you’re unsure where to start just create a biography (bio) for your main character. The bio wou…[Read more]
Nice! I’m in the process of worldbuilding and plotting my story now, and I do have to start writing. I am a perfectionist so I cringe a lot whenever I write something.. Still writing more would help
Hi, I’m Lily. I’ve included a guide in case you’re new to this site. Don’t worry to much whether your story is perfect alright cause we all started as newcomers.
Just start writing and we’ll guide you along the way. But if you’re unsure where to start just create a biography (bio) for your main character. The bio would include name, age, sch…[Read more]
Oh wow, you only spent two years on the first stage. I’m pretty sure I was there for five years or something. I think I moved onto more serious writing when I got onto this site, but even then it took me a while to get invested.
hey @LILYSTARLING you really shouldn’t just give the newbie introduction to everyone in case they’re a newbie, it gets very tedious having the same very long comment on a bunch of posts
Thanks for this, it was very accurate and it’s nice of you to be so humble as to leave the last stage nameless. I just realised I haven’t been tagged, mainly because I forgot to ask you so is it okay if you can tag me 🙂
EVERYBODY: plz visit my AO3 at https://archiveofourown.org/users/rebelcracker/works
*laughs as i crab walk off*
Writing tip for character appearances:
I recently thought of this and I just needed to tell you guys.
So basically when I would catch the bus I would constantly narrate everything in my head (well tbh I do that with everything lol) and I would start to describe people on the bus.
I should stop giving a backstory to this idea
If you have…[Read more]
This is a really good idea! I also want to add that this tip works with everything, not just people, so you can just take a moment to describe your surroundings. It helps for when you’re writing.
Thanks for the info…usually I feel very awkward to look at people to long but I suppose it’s ok as long as you’re not staring at them or anything.
I find myself narrating my life a lot, but I don’t often take into account my surroundings, I just describe, like, what people are doing and saying and stuff like that. I don’t know if that made any sense, but yeah. Thanks for the advice!
I can relate, I always end up describing the look of random strangers that I see in like the grocery store or something. when I was a little younger I stopped thinking like normal human beings and started thinking as if I was in a book, and now I can’t stop!
That’s a really good idea! I’ll make sure to take that into consideration in future writing and character appearances 🙂
I don’t tend to describe my characters that much, just enough to give a general idea of their appearance, but this is cool for bios and stuff.
OoooOo, What amazing advice. Whenever I write, I usually end up popping open my old, tarnished copy of ‘Harry Potter’ or just any book in general and end up skimming through them to get inspired on what I should write to describe people and places. This is much more efficient.
You see, Im too awkward to even look up and glance at people let alone acknowledge their appearance. Hahaha. What if we fortuitously make eye contact. I’d die internally.
Ooh, you wrote something like this before. Maybe last year? It reminds me of how surprised I was when I found that you were still doing this XD
Tips for writers
So, since there are now two other writing advice columns, to distinguish mine, I will be focussing on more simple ideas or tips for your writing, rather than in-depth as the other two have been doing. Now, onto the tip.
Whenever you write a scene, you have to have some sort of idea in your head of what you want to accomplish in…[Read more]
Ooh, that’s a really good tip, I always used to find myself not following the plan that i had woked out for a scene and writing something that didn’t fit at all
I will try to remember that! Thank you so much and I hope it works for me!!
Good idea! I don’t have Spotify on my Chromebook (sadly), so I’ll have to use Youtube, but I’ll definitely keep that in mind.
(Just saying, use the website. It’s what I do. You can use the same account as on your other device)
I do the same thing. Although… sometimes it doesn’t go exactly the way I plan… *nervous laughter*
I seem to have ANOTHER problem of planning out the sentiments and emotions of a certain plot/scene and then improvisong when I write it out. Like, I dont even know what’s going on- it’s like my heart just disregards the careful, intricate planning that my brain did and instead focuses on emotions I,personally, feel at the time I write the said sce…[Read more]
Thanks for the tip. It’s good to share your knowledge with fellow writers.
@Pacifica18 @Nadea @Froggy9119 @Liapaws @SGEpotato7 @Pugsforever @Stargalaxy9000 @Boomboompancakes @Toffee @Wenteo @Fairytalegirl123 @Popozozo123 @Goodandevel @Sophiaprincess1275 @Doveys-apprentice @Annikak0425 @Ripplerivero @Tailteofportglenone @Cottonshiomi @Hailee-nollen-15-gmail @T-Q-YUN @Irisredwood @Unigrfixx @Kittybp2 @Hopepixie22 @Thedemigo…[Read more]
I finally did it and I’m so happy with myself, even if you did tell us that you were doing it hehe.
I’m proud to be 😉
I’m sure. It’s a mark of pride, and I don’t know if I like it XD
Ello, all 207 peoples of the SGE student council!
How’s your week been? Any news? I for one just went swimming. It was lovely. We’re having a mini heat wave where I am right now, so the water is a perfect temperature. Also, happy mother’s day, to fellow North Americans! Are you guys doing anything to celebrate?
Happy birthday, @sparkleblossom!
Hey Fudge! I forgot to give you my b-day. It’s December 6th. Also, thanks for all of the work you’re doing with the classes!!
Hai Fudge! I’ve been OK so far! Were also having a bit of a heat wave! Happy (ik im late) mothers day to you as well! I made pancakes and breakfast for my mom! <3 I think Beatrix would have a snow fox! Or maybe a minx! Something that could curl up around her and be with her at all times.
Happy belated mother’s day! I managed to bake my mom some madeleine’s, and it was good for my first try at baking! Also i see Beatrix as having a pomeranian or a very fluffy cat. Maybe Sophie and Beatrix can be cat buddies, who knows? Nothing much for me, just that finals are starting and it’s pretty much stressful. Our teachers luckily let us…[Read more]
Nothing much, started work back up, they keep scheduling me for four.
Four is temporarily the opening time Monday through Thursday.
So they don’t need me.
They either have me hang around until 430 or have me go around sanitizing until I’m needed. (they prefer the wait until 430)
I don’t know.
Schedule me for 430 instead of 4.
Oh yeah…[Read more]
Sooo here’s my villagers room (just the main one, the secondary one isn’t decorated yet)
Not pictured: my favourite fish (I forget the species name, but it’s a chubby gold fish)
My villager when I started today (because I didn’t think I’d be changing her outfit)
I got the morning coat yesterday. She was previously wearing a labcoat and a concierge costume before that.
And this was villager once I went to the able sisters
I actually changed the hair colour to grey, can’t decide which I prefer.
I’ve made a terrible mistake.
I sat down to listen to KK.
Didn’t know I’d have to sit through the credits.
Oh my Dan Kuroto how many times am I going to have to sit through the credits to 100% the game?
Hi everyon! I’m doing great, my week’s been okay, it snowed today which was weird since it’s May. The TV finally stopped glitching which was good! I think Beatrix would probably have a pet bird.
I haven’t commented on a council post in a while eek, I never get the notifications from them *sigh*
Anyways, I’ve been really very good recently! Nothing much news-wise, although we’re getting really close to the end of the year here. Basically just one or two assignments left for every class, and then done!
Ooh, swimming sounds…[Read more]
Ahh sorry about that. Every Saturday, though. At least it’s consistent…
Ooh, lucky! But then, you start school very early compared to me.
True, true. If it wasn’t consistent, I would never see it and then I’d miss out on all of the great facts in the posts!
I do- If I might ask, when do you get out of school?
Ah, wow, almost a month later than me then- I suppose it all comes down to when we started school.
*we appear in a giant pool with purpley-blue water*
*you see shadows of people under the water*
*suddenly, they all rise up in sync, and you realize they’re all clones of me*
*music starts to play as we begin or synchronized swimming routine*
AIGHT I just watched a video of that and omg imagine it but like everyone is me
hey fudge! my week was…[Read more]
That is a fun entrance. I am a fan.
Ooh, hope you did well on your finals!
I know, it’s a lovely little tree.
why thank you *bows*
me too yikeeeees I mean religion went well! idk about the other ones though
now I really want to buy one of those teeny little bonsai trees for my room…is that weird?
who said anything about accidentally
no jk jk I’m not a plant murderer, though I’m a horrible plant mom
Honestly, I don’t have much news. I’ve been resorting to desperate means to stay entertained.
*Alex whispers* She’s been… embroidering.
*I nod sadly.* it actually looks pretty good, but I just had to tear out a day’s worth of progress because it was one friggin’ square too far to the left!
The dwarf willow? Hmm… *looks it…[Read more]
Didn’t get the notification for this. Huh.
My week was fine. Nothing new to report.
For the question of the week, it depends. In the first books, I think she would have a butterfly and name it Jewel or Gem or something. She would decorate it with rubies and emeralds and sparkles, and they would glimmer in the light when it flew. The poor thing…[Read more]
Hello! Happy Mother’s Day!
My week was good. Turns out that I might not be able to go to summer camp due to travel restrictions. Oh well. *shrugs*
*googles dwarf willow tree* That’s a cute tree! Interesting.
Hmm… A cat maybe?
OMG ITS SO TINYYYYYYYY
okay those nails sound absolutely beautiful I have to say
Ahh sorry. It would be pretty awesome if it was a secret meeting, though. Except that my activity is widely combed through XD
I found it on a tree site… But now I think I may be wrong.
Ooh, summer clothes are lovely.
Ooh, if it does see the light of day, please tag me for it. It’s a good idea, I think it would really help people.
Yes, of course. It’s really good to see you, Jinae. It’s been… forever, honestly.
*I prance in, wearing a huge grin*
Mine’s fine, I’m still being a master procrastinator XD
I have like 10 missing assignments… I hope I’ll actually get into middle school…
I don’t know if you added my birthday, but it’s August 31. 🙂
*I grin back at you*
Master procrastinator… I love how that rhymes XD
You will- it’s only been a few months, they can’t keep you out for something that small.
I don’t know if I did, and while I don’t have time today, I’ll be sure to do it tomorrow.
*I grin even wider*
XD I didn’t even realize that it rhymes!
*I stop grinning and my face becomes very serious*
The fear that I won’t get into middle school is real though- my school’s got high standards and I don’t think I’m meeting them.
Well, if you end up needing help with work, I can help you with that.
I can help you too. I’m only in 6th grade, though. When does middle school start in your school? I’ve heard some places start middle school in 7th grade. If it’s like that at your school, I can help. If not, I probably can. Especially with math.
So the site is finally able to load on my iPad again!
But it takes forever, so I still won’t be quite as active as I used to be.
Let’s begin this with a shout out to my royal power class for flooding my notifications and making me not see this! Thanks guys!
Can I have a pet tiny tree? I want one!
Also, Fudge, if people getting here early is a satisfaction to them, maybe me getting here really late can be a satisfaction for you?
XD it happens, I know.
What is with you and wanting pets constantly?
I think it may be. Good idea.
Welp. I’m here four days late and questioning how well I’m actually doing in quarantine by now. I’ve been staying up till 3 AM or later most nights, going several days at a time without showering, I’ve had like five emotional breakdowns, my executive dysfunction has been worse than ever, I can’t seem to muster the motivation to do ANYTHING lately,…[Read more]
The nice thing about being late to a council post is there’s usually someone later. Thanks for that!
*sighs* I am so tired I could literally …. too tired to finish this sentence so
Tips for writers (tell me if you want to be tagged!)
Okay, so people on this site, overuse and incorrectly use bios. Here’s why I think that.
One of the reasons that I rarely bother reading random stories on the site is because of the characterisation (the way in which personality is revealed/developed). Showing people your bios, not only…[Read more]
Ooooh that’s great advice! Especially show not tell, I’ve found myself needing to work on that
ahhh yes I needed this! most of the time I’ll end up making a bio and then the personality just floops away and I’m left wondering why I made the bio in the first place?? thank you!
Untag me please? Not that I don’t think this is helpful, I’m just dealing with an abundance of stressors atm and I’m trying to minimize notifs on everything. Thanks!
OMG. I have a weird problem with what your describing. I tend to write in bios that so and so character is calm and collected but in the actual story I make them seem aggressive and dramatic. I also have a weird problem with mashing up so much detail and adjectives together that it becomes really melodramatic. I definitely am an epitome of how to…[Read more]
Can you tag me?
I don’t think bios are all that useful, and like a lot of people already said, you usually end up changing it during the story anyways. Of course, they’re nice to have around, if you think your character is straying too far from what you meant it to be, but I don’t see the point in sharing them with other people.
Tag me please! I’m always looking for ways to improve my writing!
This is definitely useful! I always manage to overuse the words ‘he/she is/they are’ at the beginning of sentences. I don’t usually use bios except in group RPs but it’s still really useful.
FINALLY SOMEBODY GETS ME
I just don’t have the patience to sketch out characters like that unless it’s for group RPs because it’s kinda required. Besides, where’s the fun in that? The super enjoyable thing about writing is slowly peeling away layers to reveal secrets. Enticing your readers.