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Hope you like it! This is my first chapter from Maison’s view.
Maison ate the rotten fish. It was, he thought, some of the best food you could get. The smell, the flies, rotten fish. Mmmmm…
Baring his teeth Maison glared at a silver haired Evergirl; dark eyes sweeping over him.
She blushed,seeing that he had caught her in act. Silver Hair sat by a gorgeous red haired girl, who chatted merrily away.
Maison hissed loudly, and a couple of near Evergirls screamed (gorgeously, of course they WERE Evers).
Red hair smiled at Maison. Maison felt like a strong tide had swept him off course. His heart thumped.
Maison, to get himself on the right track; thought of his parents. Leaving him for gone.
Word had come to the Lagoon, a band of pirates were coming to kill the Mer. His parents got word and left immediately; not a care for their 11 year old son.
Maison WAS captured. He escaped after three long months. Living with them made Maison strong, cold, and brave.
And now he was a Never.